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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem2 g+ G7 u) k; E. R; h
Thanks a lot!!!
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5 P. n% v# `$ [7 T, DFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
! N3 Z& U! x" q( G4 |, _' d Somehow I'd found something wrong with us + a5 ~2 F0 W5 n. X5 X
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
, W& n) e7 e' U5 `8 W Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
0 r `- F" `; ?$ D% B; S; | ` Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ; Z( `* c1 b: A- ~& d; \ N5 V# K2 E
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
+ r1 |+ C( j: w0 q7 LHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 8 F2 p+ H; Q/ Z9 [# h
somehow I realized you were still in my heart * ^) a3 T3 j8 {8 ^0 G4 X/ m3 p5 a
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) L/ d8 l2 i& L. p. J/ G somehow I lost myself inside again
) o1 `8 j9 T) q7 XNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
) F% L/ [/ f) l7 r' K* x) O& ~" | somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion( m/ U7 h0 @9 h/ C) W; j
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
6 O" l, _( ]& w. d4 CBasically, I almost finish this poem
) h- Y; m+ D e' O+ H' ?' Q I am 一个人de精彩
" @! b/ j8 J, G0 I7 }1 }: @7 j I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
