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I just wrote a poem
# B2 ?1 N7 x' e' p+ qBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.) r: W4 M l6 `- }3 ?9 K4 w* E
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem# N5 J; j$ w& x f9 W
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
, R! _0 v6 U3 s Somehow I'd found something wrong with us , e, T6 {3 ~7 e$ l/ B% B$ x7 T: F
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 1 _8 \. ^# y3 z; b( r
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me / R9 j5 m$ R% |5 {! Z4 \2 p
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ' c7 j! e5 M2 ~1 V% v7 x: A
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
, S3 ]4 s7 ~) f0 AHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
+ m3 r& `4 M: `* S& O7 V somehow I realized you were still in my heart
9 Z2 F$ {5 ~* f& z% V* W5 r. H* J* q somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
2 O6 H0 ~9 k; _' F somehow I lost myself inside again
: M0 U/ b* U, {) q& A" ~Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
; |. R3 w/ ?$ k% m' K$ E1 z: S somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# y8 v; j9 X6 M4 E0 a3 I
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you....................................../ b8 H. b0 \+ k% O5 u
Basically, I almost finish this poem
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But........ $ }0 I& m+ `+ T8 P
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42