TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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4 h& V9 z6 K0 b: e& b# n(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
. j( ^1 v% r# y* zFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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7 m- q* p6 }& y. {6 l5 N9 Y0 e2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
4 |; N# U0 `  v9 y6 d" KFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
0 R7 y9 D7 f3 {3 ^# W3 Umoreover, B的优点2,for example…
2 n# V/ }8 _7 p: Z6 K! \: mFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.




(二)单一观点式
# Z5 I( _0 A, {0 v  {1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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2 P% \4 X% j7 B! f6 ~$ Q9 K首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
( g: P3 D  @8 nThere is no denying that…
% r# z: {. N. qAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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" `6 u' H8 W& R5 Z5 @(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
- e" E5 T, T- @9 Y6 L) f/ P2 eThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 ^4 |% V* G. L+ v" T7 \: \) |, \A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
1 T- Y  v- T- W) LFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
5 @  s3 A& ~/ E. I+ |From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
$ i7 K$ ]$ c/ m2 Z* q1 X$ bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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; t5 B/ X9 E: P(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
1 @* X9 b5 n  T% b- rOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
% O! T5 Z3 y% T, \+ dTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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* i6 b. C# K- i3 ~+ i6 N) ]2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
( ?3 B6 @1 m& [( N+ k4 E- iThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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/ d$ _% [! D: A/ K  yOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/ d# X/ l6 U% _" T/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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6 A" ]6 M- G% J8 w: Y) l9 a+ i8 B[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]