TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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' a4 c, ^# H) e; P8 A) @(一) 对立观点式
; `1 a4 I! z& u) ]# H2 P1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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3 z, x  Q1 j, p7 Q  ]% A6 C(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
* W7 v* E% x1 O* ]9 P) lFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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! Y* A: u7 f  eTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
* ?/ \% i+ }3 UFor A, A 的一个优势
. z& s0 \3 U1 c/ \% m4 K0 PWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
2 |9 C8 ]2 q. v5 y: G9 eon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
0 _" n- O* O* e2 Z( k# Z: Hmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ b$ z3 ]; ~! ?0 @6 r2 uFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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6 n" i9 i* `# h8 I3 A. [! o" R3 u(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



( A7 C& l5 y0 f6 u! g+ U+ T& q+ }+ Y首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
, g7 L+ k3 Z5 u) oFinally,…
: D3 N( x$ S  g( b+ ^Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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5 \+ }$ @7 f0 m$ I２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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' Y) t" q" H( U. B( E- F7 K/ t(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
. a$ @4 B/ p$ T9 S; H7 zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 X8 ~' W3 q) aA is superior in another way, this is…
( s4 E0 i. U: f, r+ \" w- d, Z2 kIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



5 D; N  U' u( L* t7 r% mThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
6 p: V( T4 ]' p0 L5 O. qWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
. V1 C" c% t6 YWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
; S1 g/ B& t5 {* q* B* i. B! w2 IC is superior in another way, this is…
, Z5 K2 ~8 b* p+ h; W, SFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
6 Q. m8 x: v6 A% y' Q5 IFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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+ k4 X8 b1 F0 I- V. R(四)原因解释型
$ }$ `6 M8 X/ `0 b4 L  t1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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0 E; p2 E! `: m8 i0 k" V% @9 S陈述这个事实
0 b2 U/ Y- `2 X% FAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
$ c: j7 F. ]1 c* b" gXXX also results from…
+ l, v( U; H- V… is responsible for xxx, as well.
6 \1 F5 {3 I" z& E+ J& fTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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% \$ o+ e/ [6 f9 @6 [# N. l% O8 F2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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, C( A$ B' Z4 K  AOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/ l/ E' M: \; _5 U( E/ z. l' R/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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, {; R; L6 S8 _' H+ w: ka more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore
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* I2 \2 h( T- @In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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8 h; J' F7 l2 t' n6 J% l+ O再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

7 W0 D5 G7 V0 q# B( ^4 q[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]