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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 % m. c# j: c+ ~; r
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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6 |! S1 K/ \+ t9 w( i(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. * Y. {7 w: a( ?6 v! n* w
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 6 C" R" v' K/ |4 T7 c, A
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 m7 X% l: O4 l: j9 u7 _- OA is superior in another way, this is… 2 t3 F% l! n6 a' J; t" ~: q$ j
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… : V# O, u* E2 E9 r+ U
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ) Y0 I! b, z# K- x6 K3 f) B

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" X( x, S! m5 y. ?, ?* o2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 0 H3 ^7 u  s$ a5 C
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+ w7 ]/ Q, G& v, [) ?' ^To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
& C, Z2 s3 e' c9 GFor A, A 的一个优势
$ i) e) `; c; q$ v6 Y2 _% z0 S! OWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 6 T) o1 Q; r4 E# i% a
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
! n5 H: a9 ~& {0 z+ Ton the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… ) v: V0 w7 Q1 P! r; E9 z# \
moreover, B的优点2,for example… 7 X; ]% {" R2 o- p) l5 ]) ^
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. , h9 q7 `! a4 b
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(二)单一观点式
( i' z: C  `3 k0 e6 B- c: ~1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) ; Q$ a4 }* R) f! a/ H- J
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
; O! H( N$ @% g0 oAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. ( X# N( Y$ ?9 m: o5 d' ^1 {5 z
There is no denying that…
5 u0 n4 e2 b' N* qAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
9 ~6 _1 u  x4 b2 n0 O2 ZFinally,… 4 E" M' V& S! K+ ]' R
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) % {& R" L& L" b5 F- U3 |& s
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3 j, \$ h$ ?: r( N% n# J(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
; d& R: E9 s3 r& HThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 4 ]/ T3 A' A/ ~
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 u4 ~* V+ F8 _% T; bA is superior in another way, this is…
2 l( e, ^3 Q; c2 _" @$ H) |It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ( Q1 @. v$ n( n3 T# o
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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5 m/ s" j+ T$ n( C* u2 ]7 L  |There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. ' v9 D& }: i: D
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
: a) b! @. T# {8 P. qThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 8 L9 W' ], ^+ Y( `& d$ o
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… * _: w, R& E0 ~1 ^
C is superior in another way, this is…
2 [7 L, q8 a# Z; `1 aFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
. z0 K# \; s- S" m8 @: XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( j9 Z. E9 E( k' t% [0 T8 b(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
3 _0 ~0 V* T1 o) s/ D1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. # N5 d4 g+ l$ _! P4 s# V
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. * Y" K' L5 m' Z# Y8 F
One of the primary causes is that… 7 R) r$ ^! ]3 |: Q% a
XXX also results from… ) Q. Q) X! T0 T' Q8 s" t
… is responsible for xxx, as well. / Y, m" P, Q# K' X/ J
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX " i# G( m, W: @4 s% t6 a
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  n/ X0 q8 p% k% w4 l, X% M0 EThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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& R3 H+ i# O$ K' @One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 4 h2 ^0 _* y& b% j& }+ P
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 9 J& |0 L6 ]7 F/ T
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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3 S; `, G' c# j# M2 ha more subtle point which we must consider is that… 6 F3 A0 a1 a' a* q7 z

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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.' d5 }, ^% p6 b+ ~

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