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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
5 \; g6 M% g; t(一) 对立观点式 ' }1 I  `8 M9 p: _9 `
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 0 ~  z, d* ^5 x" J8 l7 u# C# R/ ^- i

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+ @* G7 d1 S5 c/ x(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 y1 `: n6 w7 ?4 q0 `The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… / D' q* z! N' V" E2 D
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 2 Z+ w2 q( v' \: A( p8 ?  o
A is superior in another way, this is… ) w1 P( {! @! h; W9 \
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
' t! x" B6 Y. Y  LFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... " ^2 X: l7 m' t+ e
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 5 I" \  ?7 r; J$ P; S$ F
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- }! r4 l( B0 g' \9 ?To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. . [' y* u" p% n
For A, A 的一个优势 4 ~8 _" @$ B3 m! v
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,   n% u- [5 f' h% }% v6 D
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
8 L+ Y, c) L7 L2 H! M" fon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… . K: J" J6 l9 ?& X
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
, T. w" c1 b9 M" n5 b5 kFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. ; o, O6 r. u  z6 U* L3 `' C1 W: U

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(二)单一观点式
- {- b- d4 i- @  A; k8 o1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. 2 a+ _  q1 n5 p% ~
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. % h0 m) b, }" i" n. W
There is no denying that…
3 u5 Z4 Y7 _2 lAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… , L0 E% q; f7 A6 x$ S8 L
Finally,… + h9 O, ~7 a: j7 S+ e/ E  |4 v
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
2 p9 {. y) f2 u' U5 z7 N(本类型只agree)
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3 {' Z- {  y1 Y! \(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
+ F; y/ ~- {' a( K9 i5 H2 U2 Y: ~The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
4 U" a" m' e7 g' P4 c2 P* aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% }  V; G/ H5 m2 G6 h6 F! O4 H% Q' U' SFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ! h$ v% d1 k& A2 A7 t% Z4 m- O8 ?) l

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. V1 {. M  H* y(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 . a7 X. a9 x- E- n8 H- b! P8 o# ?) v

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
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The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
5 r$ R% b* d5 ]  YWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 W5 |; P9 u0 A) ^/ M( aC is superior in another way, this is…
# c" N* m! N/ sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C & e4 ?" x4 ^; F+ b# P; \
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
# f' W! R' v7 {# }% n7 O; ]5 r(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) ; n  C0 J8 }4 c7 \% m
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! f3 R2 I! [- a# I(四)原因解释型 5 b0 p0 R# c+ c0 D; k7 w
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ' r" p# r" |9 Q! P7 z2 Y7 W
One of the primary causes is that…
. T6 N8 D6 [0 O& O9 |" qXXX also results from… 5 l' x! G) F  U0 u
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
# K8 K! `# ?; Y% J$ f) UTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 9 ~; L# d+ S3 n* N9 Z
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  `" O: R4 v7 E$ N2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 3 [+ I  r' l! Z* Y9 I; w* {3 f% u$ E
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. + n9 z5 }: `3 W5 n

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
3 W( `  d: h. ~/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… + ~& u. n8 d( }& F  N" a* C1 N& c
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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; n, o6 X. Z  z$ ~5 J8 ?4 n: a5 P$ b0 ga more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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8 o5 L! O( J4 h( F) xIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?+ b. A& s& y$ g
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.5 M3 R. Q8 @/ n2 U3 W
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