TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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; ^% Q% b, v4 T+ M7 U  D2 ^(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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5 m/ ]* _1 e4 I3 H- L0 R(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
, \' j& a  Y: l% }' QThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
0 h3 P; {2 L; n: q) kFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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- g1 _& }& b# R2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
9 \& e" J, Z0 B; OFor A, A 的一个优势
. _8 v7 P/ S7 h! V* Q8 [Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
$ \4 F. _" G6 t& u) X9 l8 wmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
: }& N4 H$ m; c7 V0 q+ ?7 \+ WFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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6 `# e$ C: m% {1 l$ B" o(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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. e  F3 t  H: ?) [首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
. a$ S6 `; a1 V3 DAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
! j' c  b) k* U1 T0 D. YThere is no denying that…
) N+ g9 p( W( R. C: W& {& dAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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0 C  z9 }$ c4 d' E3 D) m' L3 S. U9 b２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
4 Z0 r* \2 F. r5 t# L$ {, N" GWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
! J- V8 I& p; I" {+ MA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 [! F) P8 [3 r) t7 j" [From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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& K: F( l: J1 w5 t' |1 g0 N' I/ y8 z(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
$ F7 C3 E& v" HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
) j3 V% R6 j; g' n- S% MFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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2 h! G# f8 ^( A1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
# K/ Q! x( a. xAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
( f7 j# d: w  QOne of the primary causes is that…
6 o1 y$ z6 W. F' _1 T+ lXXX also results from…
2 k% G- Z3 R* e9 t… is responsible for xxx, as well.
8 [/ ^& p% [. h1 d2 j" Z& `% hTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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+ a/ ^* v! u. O2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
) B. a% s$ w: @9 K1 ~There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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! @  b7 y2 W7 P" J0 C  p' \% `7 gOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
' D+ J$ V# d# f- t/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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5 o% ~$ u: P2 q$ J4 O  ?再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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