TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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  U  u' s/ z- Y0 ?$ Y6 s6 k(一) 对立观点式
0 w# @. f, R  r5 y1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
. @# Z9 [: E4 t5 ^$ F2 x: HThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
0 z! g8 U( x0 I% f0 yWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
* U5 A# T# M* E$ f; QA is superior in another way, this is…
* I5 O( ^+ g6 u/ b  x8 i- WIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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6 Q& j6 l7 u) }2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
- m  r& b1 Z2 B0 G+ j" eFor A, A 的一个优势
. m& E! E+ C& z6 l7 c/ c  jWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
/ |/ Z5 H5 D9 y, V  u3 j" qon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
# e/ s4 Q  t7 L4 H, ]6 Dmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
  ]# ]7 `. \8 G- M( e1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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7 [4 r6 }; U2 T首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
, i. T! |) |7 yAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
' o. `& |; ^8 m" C# b2 WAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
. n; Y( s  R; J: X2 ~( YFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
& u* j5 F8 v3 a4 f0 H/ o3 y5 zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  Z; K9 a! X4 q8 xA is superior in another way, this is…
. M, S2 w- }3 R% wIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% u6 |6 F, U& a4 t( b% ]$ V0 u4 JFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




: E- B. Y6 `! f* l; W+ l- @(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ x7 i9 G* R5 UWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  c$ k8 I/ G7 N- O) }" d8 QC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
6 \4 w: \5 m6 z# eFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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1 X5 g4 X; j$ g4 }& u陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
# ?0 K+ |4 n" }One of the primary causes is that…
( V1 u9 ^$ u2 S, \/ C5 \# w# LXXX also results from…
) M4 M1 W* g# u5 Y! W3 m… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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; c5 Y; b/ Z3 j" K9 t2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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$ d3 H4 ]* r' y+ `背景描述
+ v, I; s* }0 b+ p7 rThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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5 `+ }9 ~- B. G4 ]- B: Pa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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! M4 |6 [7 E, G0 L: jIn addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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" w$ L) E) U& B再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]