TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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% |: @! @! G  _7 G3 E(一) 对立观点式
  _/ O: X- n! v% v/ i0 v7 e1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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7 B' H/ x5 T! Y3 L(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
: m- R/ Z# a- P  SWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
! u1 |6 U. X5 GIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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8 E& o( E# G9 o6 v/ A* x" ~2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



* L$ J0 q4 i3 H# n* C3 r! y/ WTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
) q1 A0 h* ^6 s& ]. @7 }7 bWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
0 y: u# N. K, K4 x; Y' U8 k6 rFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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% H7 u" F' q+ z+ a２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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  u5 v+ Y; D% H& M% d' X9 ~(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
- l& q3 {. W- t; x+ TThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 }% z, t0 e. }/ D0 r- i( Z8 r+ |What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
  Q  `- H: [. A+ D2 e$ {* y) NIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
& @: E  Q& o8 B9 F# LWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
+ C( J$ b& e8 C. N( n% ?The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
0 H. _9 M) X. N1 KC is superior in another way, this is…
) T# p: Q$ D! A3 z) a; SFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
" k( O3 S9 k# @  ^# I7 }4 `2 U) GFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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" x& [- h9 Q; Y' M% R陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
1 m, D: D- f: \; l  C. lXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
2 g" e; T0 I5 ~$ p! n# LTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
, c6 o$ k' C3 c5 m  f/ m/ u! m; y/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
& S+ C; _4 X& d6 A5 z4 l. U1 {/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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3 B) r. o6 L1 @! Aa more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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' N: z& D2 I* s# |( XIn addition/ furthermore
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/ S2 H+ V' w5 o3 W9 f2 \6 mIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]