锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

8 c) k" J9 Q  z6 L6 V: ?) D4 ?　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

/ }& ~+ d7 Y& U5 w. b3 i　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

/ q5 f! M/ t  x- h　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

- l4 `! {7 ?' [& o2 s: n　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

* S: A- k1 T) W　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

( `$ O* V4 Z- X" J- F' ~8 Q　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

) U3 p" r' }$ k5 V' g# b: V　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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- N  n2 q6 ^7 `' R6 x/ j　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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, {$ s+ K1 }, h; z) Z4 f　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

, H, i) B3 R) ?! @　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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4 J. m/ Y8 n, n　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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2 [1 _" }, `) ^% Q　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

2 e! r( S- Z, _1 G0 r　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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2 @* ]: R2 o) q" n4 Y# `& w0 o. v! W　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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0 G& x4 y" e; p/ p7 E5 a　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

6 f5 ?8 F: d  {" M$ G7 }& f　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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+ Y- t8 O. y6 t% o　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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( Q7 A; b+ {2 r$ b5 Z# q　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

* l( [, G8 E! v: g" v. p! Q　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

2 V% f6 [5 E7 f2 U7 X9 r; |　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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$ H; P- Q# ]7 m- Z　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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; X5 k' Z9 x3 U$ `　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

7 u+ a" o" C. B8 ~　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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" O, M9 ~8 h! G: V) A+ M　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

1 m: S& l$ s( Z　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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" L# A0 K; F2 r　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

$ y4 E7 c9 Z" V% K: R　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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$ @$ \. Q. V  k% v+ N　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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' Q4 B8 x2 b% E- e9 L　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

1 g8 L& `+ t: I' B7 H　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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0 L. e  p" m0 I) I3 i' C% S　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

7 c9 e7 b) R1 w  c　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

) _* }1 G7 U8 z1 P4 [3 v　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

* L* d" j+ E: j+ Y6 B) {　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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5 k& u. }, W) ?) T. l! v. C" ^7 K　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

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' c5 o7 m: i2 c; Z0 k　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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5 p0 k5 O& U; b) C2 n' f, ~! }6 s　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

# z# H, v& \( C+ l( @" V& r　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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# o8 x$ \; ?1 H& F　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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2 j* B. b) Z5 [1 R& v" k　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

! k' H5 e2 m: R( i　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

% Y" R$ B# J! E% i  m　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

. n3 Y& U6 ~% B0 w0 q& s5 Z　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

9 b( ?, W% O+ y- N　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

' B$ P) M$ e7 C* C　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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, N! @  g' |% x　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka