锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

' i& z1 e) [2 v; M3 t& w, w& v　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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8 {: k& d  q5 I) P$ k* o　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

$ Q6 i1 ?3 |( ]% k% G: ^$ w　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

" ?; o$ p" p: Z: {2 T! @2 D6 L; u　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

& m! m% F0 b8 \7 @. B/ l& W　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

+ c$ G& x* y# I. k# L/ I& H$ R　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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& ?2 N2 h. M9 d　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

7 J7 V, w8 O6 d, {" D, u+ L　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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/ U' f$ L$ g8 i. l　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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' }( U- ?3 B& G- O) q　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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) D! I9 M3 }6 N% `, Z　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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, p- w) _: r  }/ O8 }* b+ y0 Y　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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( }3 ^6 D0 @, _2 C　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

6 I8 [; P0 @7 J0 C' j" y4 m( K: @2 @　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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5 z) k3 L- |9 j3 t4 N; U+ {　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

+ K7 L8 b. k' O% i9 h　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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( t$ L4 t2 l. A. o　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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/ P; G+ i8 S/ m0 c6 A( z6 _6 s　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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3 A- S( |5 f- L# q. }; f* B7 n7 r　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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2 ~( d- p9 Z7 Q( e) D; V/ Z　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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/ j1 C. s6 x6 y# `7 p6 }. `　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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3 o! _# v7 R! p' k5 D( V　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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6 i5 ~' V2 b+ y3 Y　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

2 m& X' s" g3 B# ^& M1 j8 s　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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8 ?% I6 F0 t# p0 `6 D5 c4 m1 P　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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$ L4 p. I- w" q8 g7 p+ k+ L　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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! V5 U+ v6 E  q" |　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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) M" K3 E$ Q) \　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

' J0 X+ p* d5 @* T% q　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

: S$ w* S; g6 N4 F. N# E4 r　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

3 `; A7 f& _' O+ w+ Z　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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* J% w7 T2 Z: D% g1 d/ r　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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0 j# w4 x$ J/ w- O) y- Z. O　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

7 E, X7 O1 i% _# o; `9 ~. Z5 M　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

0 j8 a7 m9 Q5 a, r" X　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

7 R8 A6 J! z3 i3 O" z　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

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　　50. I felt alone.
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3 [1 J- H2 k1 {: i0 N9 }　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka