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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. $ _: z% |( H1 d6 o3 _
7 C+ Z1 m; o2 }( p 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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9 @8 |+ S: z% M+ Y7 o 2. For example, you work in a big factory. / a$ I% v; o. x* j; |
; V+ B: V: J8 M& O* ]/ ~ 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. # ^; s: q4 u3 i3 B
( V8 [" c7 W" v3 d* M/ y3 R' `0 ] 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. % A$ O% m: }" Q8 S
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改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. * v3 R2 p9 N0 I. j2 |0 B
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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1 b- z3 T, _4 P3 c( { 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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5 z4 t6 h1 I+ \- U' f" ` 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. ' E' k: h+ S' N1 o5 ^! m
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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7 W7 y' [6 X1 ]3 K! M" C* P6 L 6. Their brain is still very young. ) O5 a0 b1 T& g3 p6 B
2 D$ I! ?# ~" u, l: y: [ 改进: They are still immature.
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. / n% i9 {2 ^4 O
* X3 D o6 g9 A6 j) d* x4 Y. _' I9 U 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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1 N; a0 o+ e' U/ h: w7 _& i; V' x0 g- z3 } 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. 7 [; n. u. S! r, k/ v, ]2 y" s9 d8 U
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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' S3 R( j4 k& {; n; h( U# `* h 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. : g1 g2 S( |' @- T2 a
% @8 T( j1 v& W- E 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. % f `5 U" m" i# {, B# d
9 t& H; d7 l# O; ~$ q 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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# P3 N5 H$ p: i9 l, S* x) L 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 0 a3 Q) r6 e, y9 j# E
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. ! l6 c8 c2 D: {0 ` l
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改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. 0 g/ r2 f& a+ j: N6 [
/ \: ?% E- _% T# W 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. 9 j0 L0 ~' L- g$ x
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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! g% ?$ J5 n) \; Q1 l 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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7 x M5 J& d. }2 {# U 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. 9 I9 }6 ^6 _- h/ s/ G
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15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. ! L; l. i+ e Z* Z/ K0 Y1 q
& v- p. ^- Q* n6 O 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. 9 X1 A& V3 }& K6 o( l4 `" |
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. 1 _9 E# h5 @+ F
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. 3 g# S+ r2 V- C( p
- k( O" e% R$ W$ U3 E9 a 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 4 q a& ]' |2 l+ u. A5 c+ x
6 y% w- |% M/ ]3 g& f, f 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. - O6 T% x5 X: K
# }% S) {" ~: h" D( G 改进: This knowledge will become part of you. 9 z8 F) E8 I/ a: }5 T7 ]- q
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19. They cannot think clearly.
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/ y! D" u/ S$ C& a+ x 改进: They cannot think straight.
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20. Money can improve their living standard. [4 V$ y: @- H4 K6 i
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改进: Money can improve their life. 9 B' t) ^3 f# D
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 5 ~/ u7 Z/ l: U d& k2 y
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J# c# P7 s: l 22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. , M/ J" k/ w: p5 U9 s
: ^. Z3 S- A/ ]! X2 M2 h! z6 Q4 \4 k 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. # J4 X l1 M5 P) v
) P/ _& x) s2 Z5 @) d- J1 V" G 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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4 `) X7 G% o5 @6 Y( _3 f 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. . u4 @! E# ?7 s8 ~) L: S3 J; T: J
g6 A6 S* d% r 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. , V! @8 h" ]" g f8 R% u
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. ) \. s" W7 {6 M, y
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改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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3 d y( d+ [/ h* W" i B 改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. ( g# w: F: T' z9 O" y3 ? f
0 J2 d8 y- i( s 28. What's about nonsmokers? ' t! E, u6 _7 _: |
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. F5 h# q0 s9 F6 C' p/ ?& v9 I 29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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9 w2 ^( `) v* V: X# w+ q" C$ p 改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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# N5 S: Y/ l& v! Z) Q. z) B 31. I am not good at maths, but English
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+ {) X% O& _$ Y' ]6 M4 n 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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8 D+ b7 p$ P/ [6 M+ ]! Q |# w 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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3 W; C8 v* u. l+ r 改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? ; D2 @5 S! B4 }
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33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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! {3 }# t' _5 y4 a( q 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. 5 Q$ U6 l5 k+ B. W" f5 u# {
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34. I agree the latter idea.
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' i! c7 h4 f" p% A! M+ Z+ F 改进: I agree with the latter idea. + T; z1 v& @' C5 w, @
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35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. % D, `# {/ s4 i/ l
' `' S% r3 E8 Z 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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2 X1 S7 ]# E" c9 u% c 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. 3 a+ c& m) s) m2 o1 q7 T4 W
[4 t7 j9 n( @9 H. ?" D: }/ @5 Z$ D 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. ) _& J* J% W6 V3 w, E; D: b! w
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改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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38. No one knows all the things. 0 z% r* h4 d# m
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改进: No one knows everything.
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 6 K9 E! q) E4 m, {( R5 W
: H& G J% \+ {6 p$ B/ N 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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5 c; e* Z$ l5 s/ } 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. 2 P6 J) V* |2 F# p/ B* t6 ~
" @) @4 ?; w* r, d C8 L9 s0 J- Y1 q 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 9 A# o' Q3 W4 C4 Z B$ _ V3 w
$ K3 r4 h, ^8 z" w" x* Y 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. ( o4 d+ P* U2 _0 U2 `6 ?
6 l. H: D. v! X+ Q 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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43. They will learn the bad habits.
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5 S! c2 d3 Y1 B4 i/ X& Q7 P 改进: They will develop bad habits. * d4 l! g; O/ c3 B) e
2 h" }8 |; @( D' V) u+ X! { 44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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; J* `& c. n; {% X 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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' t4 H8 Z8 ], H3 U. G0 F' ~ 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 3 |9 U1 J% @& V( }
7 i3 f, ~4 Y1 @/ I0 c' M 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. & q! }( S) W: `$ b
8 G( W+ X I# H2 v/ t$ y1 a0 X 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. " n1 ]2 Z7 u7 d
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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& g! n3 G, c1 J% i/ ` 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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4 r" V6 K4 R' Q, e1 R 改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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7 z- l9 t) z. V: m% S2 k/ t 50. I felt alone. . Q+ F5 E9 C% B" I% n) g6 y
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