我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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! ^. s0 [$ J# o$ w' v9 mSummer's Coming
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3 i( ^4 x  ]7 v/ Y5 c9 G+ t* yFaster, hotter and sweater,
. a- A5 l; _" \4 K, O* WSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
9 Q* f# j8 i0 s4 d3 l, uFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
0 h: \+ Q* `- C* ]  K' ^" |Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
% O6 V! ~3 n: }( w/ k5 EGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
$ p! C0 A* t2 s0 W2 ?: {# {6 qbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了