我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

# ^4 R$ g% N4 [Faster, hotter and sweater,
* T3 f; ^( ~1 c# t: p- lSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
( k& P6 x. F' gTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
$ `) C' [8 C! C( u4 FLet myself go ---
* j& L( o$ r" uGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
7 \# }( v- T" G' C# j7 d1 GI can prepare nothing;
1 b* f4 P8 ?; s. T9 Q4 i5 k5 fMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

+ D" b7 X' @9 s0 u一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
( y% _4 |' o9 ~8 C9 AIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

! Q; I7 K6 G: P  i* S; B[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
- f& D1 Q: c( ^4 Z$ nbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
0 H% T( k  }8 z! }* X5 S夏天来了