我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
$ o  ^" M' }9 w$ l  ]6 NSummer's Coming

$ M" J8 }( A7 [# c: q) EFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
& \% r# E; T; ~, iFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
( }* P( n  s6 S3 Z* P) t! LLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
) V, K% v8 t" m$ HWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
' ?( G" a/ M3 ?0 OGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

/ m& l* }$ n2 l3 \6 ?一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
5 j$ c+ Z3 I+ X0 r; rIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
" a7 k9 R# m$ q( L% i7 ?  k8 Hbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
4 K  G8 J0 }+ e, C( {2 F' Z7 K夏天来了