我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
, h/ k/ O- [& b/ u5 l: E是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

$ @6 z, B2 @1 y4 d8 {( `Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
& T, v( x" `: h- ?% iFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
( D  R, w* J. Z/ OGo to the wild rain
0 j1 }+ ~# P+ K. x# k( a3 HWashing my heart and soul.

* q; a, I+ Z  W( P; NGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
  @3 d( z2 Y$ Q& b* h0 UI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

) M: y) m  A3 g+ a5 i2 B一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
7 Z2 U3 }/ V' N0 [; s" W  ?0 b9 f2 Bbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了