我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
/ _2 i% _4 h  C, L% G' v. BSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
1 n0 L! J0 t7 l. |From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
3 C" \8 G6 c6 {4 J5 p2 NLet myself go ---
, E) X2 P9 V3 }6 l+ pGo to the wild rain
; X% c( [5 v4 A7 kWashing my heart and soul.
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$ o& T- Q, N# q. _3 A( `& gGood-bye, my happy spring;
( J1 m! C2 U, j9 ]! P& @1 ^: DGood-bye, my childish dream.
4 r- e$ |2 F; A$ |2 w. Z! F" w3 _I can prepare nothing;
. j( t9 m5 G% P! Z' cMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
. x2 [9 Q) j' \It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
4 v3 V7 e% p. e" y  {/ O1 I( abut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
, f, w$ f; _, o9 p# U  z夏天来了