我尊贵的邻居(11)

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/ |& z  w& X! ]1 g9 {我尊贵的邻居
: B+ S6 Q1 [0 l9 U( S/ C是我们小区  几十户
- w; p8 Z3 K1 z4 V/ Q唯一的元老
一住三十多年

1 \+ v/ P0 Z& j! Q邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
* u, U8 e7 M3 Q白发红颜  不见皱纹
& ]& X$ }0 E, N- \3 O% `开车铲雪  挖土栽花
似不识  岁月为何物

头顶英国文学硕士的光环
邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
+ @" S2 v$ [4 {' ~. \( L3 Z- a/ T邻居的字
/ `' }( `" m0 M* X* v5 m则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

, v) S, y7 n: F* t! T邻居酷喜中国文化
* U5 k& Q- e) `# q7 u3 r5 i& @说她属土龙
其笛声也悠扬
5 U1 C  A5 e2 E3 S那是从隔壁传来的
唯一的声响
* V$ X& m4 v6 f/ `) d' b0 p. d8 s那不知名的曲调
2 q" [$ {3 F6 d$ y6 P  d7 T" o反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

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英文版，欢迎指正：

2 }" \7 v6 Y& @, KLiving here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
in our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.
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4 G% L5 V6 e4 MNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
, j6 f4 Q, y3 ^" ^4 \magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
: ?) {- y6 e; u  Q$ _8 sShe has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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" }- l/ }( J1 N9 }9 v: `- PShe shovels the snow on her door lane
before driving her own car;
she digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.
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/ u  O! j5 D1 r6 _* a5 G5 ?4 ZWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
8 ~8 J. a7 i, j) z/ x0 Jneighbour has a dignified appearance ---
as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
, z8 O" ?0 N8 a+ z9 X& z) q# ONeighbour's handwriting
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
% ?2 e7 \% {1 {6 k+ sinterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
5 _, A, ~% s2 i, Z3 F" CWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
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2 v5 R: G( k9 }  ?% @土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
/ K6 ?4 R8 ], V" ~2 GJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

* o7 s5 W4 v/ p2 p! `! ?8 ^* _9 {从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
is just like a flying swallow.
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Her light-footed movement
is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

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真的是太像朱镕基了！

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6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
1 Y: i+ M7 ]! Q% N5 i: |hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。