天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

9 R1 V; `/ s* I: [, j- K; c鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
5 R" G; h+ F. Q2 K& iTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

; c2 W+ ~3 K$ s0 j鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
' ~5 S2 _! n2 N# lSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
( {% S3 \) j) A+ UI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.