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! j  ]* k: l2 F( k' A# jjsw 发表于 2012-3-16 23:37   
  e/ ^- W- A. A5 L7 p音频上传了。没稿子,就那网站上顺口读的,是第二遍。帮忙听听。% X& D9 r* Q& w  k% b- Q( t$ V 
 
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Hehe. SUV has a point there.  M/ t* p/ e! e) c' G! s 
either part is needed.3 n$ k, c: l4 j- B 
I will try to upload my reading very soon...! T# }8 |) D' j, b* t3 s 
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我建议修改为: 
0 B% Z( K' r1 \0 {4 \  oHehe,SUV gets/got the point.$ U6 H1 Q! V- n) y; h 
Either part is necessary. 
3 s! ^9 t/ n' C$ M& {9 h- ?I will upload my reading soon. (不需要try,very) 
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