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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, & C1 b4 ^  M8 D- B
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  / |, G8 T8 X6 ]  i6 E6 @' o
Dreamers+ G. i; T+ P+ O6 P; ~8 X
Savages7 a- M$ M8 b; k3 f/ \" _% E
Poets
' {8 h* P+ \  }' @3 F/ jBuilders of canoes,
5 p- Q+ _9 m( c; {7 x  xBlack smiths
% `# [1 z6 H4 W& Q# f1 VMurderers,
2 O* C) R3 w0 F) T& ^Risk takers,7 k7 u  C9 M3 D4 ~. J* J# y/ r
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ q* ^, s: r5 O# B1 v& |
As I think of what could be.   d6 J2 `9 y& K6 G
The world is so big to me ; Z( a: A7 |% ]( s8 o) I
I wonder what it means to be/ c- Y1 {% B* [# ]. s9 T) x
I looked up at the star and smiled
* ^4 {0 c+ b7 j, a5 V5 D* }They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 6 u, c" G7 Q$ G1 @( L
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。: D0 o, X4 u; D5 p
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
7 K. D; E6 @; V; T# t) F) T" w+ ]9 x顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,, g8 P+ x- f0 \
A poor old Guy;
  R6 Q- i  W$ F8 b( J, B+ cLegs in a bonfire,
+ d, b- z9 a3 bHead in the sky
6 b8 d: I- `; R7 i* cLonely, with the feel of betray
- c) F! ~% q4 B+ jHeart empty and hollow
  Q; w" n4 N- {+ U9 P4 G- @8 z! v  UAlone I stand2 q5 a+ W7 k0 L7 {- S. @- k% h$ B( k
I am useless to all
1 |/ U# l  U  q1 K7 ^; S: L' uBut I wish I were a dove ; @+ M9 L$ l7 N8 N0 h1 U8 B
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
; B2 y  Y2 F; nI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
0 f7 |( R, k$ ]& K6 ?8 II sent prayers to my god
3 @  ^$ l. x2 \. L7 \Though he does not answer; _: r! F0 v0 @* Y3 C
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
* W* ^! A) H( V/ S1 Y; E加油加油,经常写写!
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