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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
+ e2 q% L- Z* L( |I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  9 ~7 i; K; Y1 O! ~" }& A
Dreamers: |$ I( c  ^2 y! n& v
Savages8 w! t2 Z5 J% v
Poets
/ ~! T3 f4 ^3 y! I' t: x% b5 X, _Builders of canoes,
( S1 ~3 m0 O( UBlack smiths
$ T" J$ R- q0 f# F+ T7 @6 Z# j4 DMurderers,' M" l. n7 d! T+ T5 Q" L5 V7 W1 A
Risk takers," A3 M3 C. G; e, O* F& F4 G
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder . d. K  u9 f. b+ S& ]/ b
As I think of what could be. % M5 k* m2 X1 S8 d' t5 ^4 F
The world is so big to me 1 ?8 \5 i1 b; B
I wonder what it means to be9 M& o# ^$ ]/ R" N5 X, x
I looked up at the star and smiled
$ {, W) G, \9 ~" wThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。! H1 G3 g7 i% W$ [  r8 m& r
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。' J6 b0 J% ?: ]9 L1 w6 w5 O# I
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,( f  E+ }# t4 _' d* k( Z! n
A poor old Guy;
( r/ A6 S/ }8 i/ yLegs in a bonfire,
; T7 m$ U* L5 T) A9 cHead in the sky0 i) o# q! z. w" T! G5 Z7 V
Lonely, with the feel of betray
7 D( q, Y$ O; m- RHeart empty and hollow* j7 @5 J' L# w+ `8 \! Y9 q# [
Alone I stand
4 H0 y! ]' `+ R* H& |I am useless to all
/ U" x' `/ R; R/ N7 PBut I wish I were a dove 1 m! Z0 _+ Q& G0 {8 Z$ n: r
Giving myself to the world, to the fire4 O* t" \& B9 E# C' n0 y
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
. J- r# O! h$ _I sent prayers to my god1 \% |* M0 P" C. u8 b7 D! t
Though he does not answer
8 x+ c3 b$ \$ B# w9 w/ B" R8 \He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。( j5 A# h4 b9 c) l( c9 Y  m
加油加油,经常写写!
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