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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
) L5 Q. `9 g, y' DI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  / w3 {0 M8 h& v1 k) l' D
Dreamers, X9 a2 a4 o" N0 l/ i# e. k3 I
Savages
2 _. u2 w  \2 G. `( p7 VPoets
) j* |8 U' g- p( D3 B' F8 xBuilders of canoes,
2 D. N2 K* R  C* p( EBlack smiths! @% E, w, d; \) u5 e1 R, V
Murderers,( T& k, x. U5 {' c2 M: J
Risk takers,
2 M1 N. ^; b: gMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
! K5 @5 {% f% q/ k4 o1 h1 x( A' CAs I think of what could be. - i* R1 Q& S8 g( p) @: q, E7 t2 w
The world is so big to me
$ }# F7 F# _" J- GI wonder what it means to be
/ ^- ]  T$ ?" U/ j0 M! v! ]/ \" zI looked up at the star and smiled
0 d1 L3 f! |5 _$ n/ {/ rThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. & {7 y+ ]4 a( T* |( @. f8 U* _! Q

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。* _7 R- r: m7 }! Y4 ?
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。& ?4 S# l, F0 ?% {+ |
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,! d1 y( J& I5 h& D! Y
A poor old Guy;
5 C  K: j6 B# h. C) f" ?Legs in a bonfire,7 M4 W3 J5 u0 A; `/ l6 i
Head in the sky% A) J' ~9 X* h5 W) C
Lonely, with the feel of betray
% F! n4 ~% a7 u* _9 p2 Y! BHeart empty and hollow
$ Y! G' W* a" E& ?: UAlone I stand
5 S" p8 Q! E( ]# P( pI am useless to all
( U" m! G( }+ T/ t* d% Q5 eBut I wish I were a dove
& x2 x& D# Q+ S" ?& X0 _3 b$ LGiving myself to the world, to the fire6 l- \" a: ?: r* C; _$ B1 k
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind' l% |  a" B6 o$ n- Q
I sent prayers to my god
6 _: Y* q& z8 V4 D" k' o+ J3 ?Though he does not answer
; Q2 |  t- I8 P6 a: `1 gHe bless me with the gift of hope # h7 [7 I4 y1 _. q% B# _2 v/ q, u
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。0 |) p' k6 c: s
加油加油,经常写写!
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