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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
. u1 k3 {" c0 `( @3 eI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  5 M! j# s5 s- p" X. V' z0 b7 R; S
Dreamers/ z7 K! A! {9 K5 t  U) F/ a
Savages% q; V  f- D( o6 Z
Poets2 u. Q; z$ `7 t: x# w& V
Builders of canoes,
  `3 ]2 X4 S2 c! s2 |Black smiths
5 l! C# B: z! ^$ d& ]' k5 ^Murderers,/ m. S3 e" M. H9 }
Risk takers,6 l9 y4 v" G; x9 w" Q( k% A  B
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 H' V* U/ j$ \+ b
As I think of what could be. 9 M6 U) D7 f- j
The world is so big to me 0 ], J) q+ ]* K3 ~: s7 l' G
I wonder what it means to be
! {" b5 v- {, s! A3 o' VI looked up at the star and smiled
3 N8 `) }" t, _& BThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 9 |7 g5 h1 L! V) H. R( N

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。9 X  O3 Z5 G, L5 A
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
" F$ Q  ~( e% n& d顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,4 t& J) S5 `$ {: C9 q& }; b' e
A poor old Guy;
; `+ c5 m/ l/ _! F) Y  _# Z! JLegs in a bonfire,
" n9 M0 D' [4 z# Y/ B( pHead in the sky$ @2 @* o0 M1 ]: M$ ~
Lonely, with the feel of betray5 m. m9 h8 X6 A; L0 i% U* c! y
Heart empty and hollow
( f* g) y8 ]4 RAlone I stand
# a( d3 H1 z- s- K4 G; OI am useless to all
1 W, Q) U3 \+ I" zBut I wish I were a dove
% o/ v9 g8 n- ~5 WGiving myself to the world, to the fire
0 A4 A6 f& ]. o" TI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind. ?9 z+ s0 n/ `* K( F
I sent prayers to my god
* J5 m9 @) l% J$ OThough he does not answer0 A  Q/ F2 I) j: }+ }
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
% r0 g; F. j! i  @; \加油加油,经常写写!
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