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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 1 L, m# s3 F1 a$ T  t5 O
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
& o9 f( l! ^' QDreamers
: u6 d, |2 |& d1 {( X$ N- ^Savages) S2 p% |- W. w2 b5 E& ^
Poets% H6 g3 Z. n6 \* D9 [5 }' w
Builders of canoes,/ e7 s4 x- o! K! D3 d7 y
Black smiths
. C$ A- m* ~3 r& c: I( wMurderers,% `( z, i* w; M: x/ f
Risk takers,. N; V! ^* p* w% l4 G# S
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder : F0 b1 w( c) y: d: ?+ ~+ l
As I think of what could be. & P/ R( R- T- A- p. n& K5 F( f! e
The world is so big to me
, z7 ?  A1 G4 U$ kI wonder what it means to be
6 W9 _1 R8 o2 }4 EI looked up at the star and smiled 3 e# v) \5 z7 Z) ^
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ! E1 v/ ?, a' X9 K. N
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
- _9 Y* c3 v& m9 T6 \5 B1 H评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。" B2 o/ r+ Q( r" V' U
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,( m  Z5 B) v/ g8 v, x& }0 t4 x: l% R
A poor old Guy;
, F/ a' o, l* f- V+ F& ^, ULegs in a bonfire,9 t# |4 N. b, o. m3 s& A/ v7 v
Head in the sky
. ^. n& O/ H) p2 VLonely, with the feel of betray
" G8 x- i+ }  y4 }' uHeart empty and hollow2 U5 E0 Y% L2 g
Alone I stand4 B* |+ J7 D8 A2 {
I am useless to all 9 \8 t/ _( Y, ^
But I wish I were a dove - \% O1 m7 W; f4 M
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
8 e" |6 d5 U" p7 nI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
! v# z8 S6 V: `4 N2 c9 NI sent prayers to my god: s" `! A% G7 d5 C4 P
Though he does not answer$ @: Q) W& {# f  s& ^
He bless me with the gift of hope " i8 H+ S' N. j# m8 W

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
/ B8 W# s3 ?6 O; R" I+ e4 Q加油加油,经常写写!
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