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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, " i& W0 |2 [8 b! Q+ s3 {1 ?2 |
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
& e) d1 S5 P+ ~/ d' CDreamers
8 ?4 n. b( E, H; i$ h; F" T% oSavages
" n) d& s# c8 A& aPoets
+ v5 w6 |2 o0 _& ?* i3 hBuilders of canoes,9 x: z" s& d, i" u2 L
Black smiths6 b& H8 J7 P! e1 Y* b/ d1 Y3 {
Murderers,
% d, k7 C. X- ~Risk takers,3 m! D* s* Q+ N! j
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder ; v9 i7 t% A9 \+ Q5 Y
As I think of what could be.
. c2 `; y2 Z, p" k. ]The world is so big to me
6 x+ [6 V. w. XI wonder what it means to be
  A$ G' `5 M$ f5 M0 C& Y; cI looked up at the star and smiled
9 f! E& f9 k: MThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。* [/ v! k" ~; w" Z# a4 M
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。: [+ }% A2 Z' y  [3 L
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
: v- a, M8 X: P7 `3 c6 `A poor old Guy;
: ]" _1 f% D& K$ }/ y; qLegs in a bonfire,
7 r3 G, f8 j7 kHead in the sky, J5 f0 U7 f0 Z2 T( t+ i
Lonely, with the feel of betray
3 g, Y; U. s2 W1 zHeart empty and hollow8 T5 ]+ s2 |! |5 q/ L9 p8 o
Alone I stand' A7 l7 n* E. C; t- }( ^! M
I am useless to all
0 B2 _/ e9 b2 I8 [% z) BBut I wish I were a dove ' Y/ ?( {3 C. S* B9 o0 l' v$ y
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
3 f3 E  l3 W: h3 ^9 ~& ^& [9 qI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind, r5 m8 m) o* ]# K: U
I sent prayers to my god/ T- U6 _& L! L$ e( W/ }; V
Though he does not answer
4 u) ^# u. Q( d) _- v8 ]- ZHe bless me with the gift of hope , a2 O1 S- k. p) ?4 x! ^% Q
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
" ~2 r" q, R+ r加油加油,经常写写!
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