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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
& C( f$ `& Y6 U# {5 oI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
4 V( }- t0 A3 s5 V+ {; vDreamers" `* _! q' P6 e) i+ u0 d0 n8 w
Savages
/ k2 y0 c5 v1 t! D7 `( JPoets
/ o4 z* _& s% ^3 qBuilders of canoes,  t: B' [; \+ W
Black smiths
$ y" x8 F- p  b/ I& B7 }Murderers,
) S8 b7 `# `) G  B( }) D0 v# CRisk takers,
- T( F- Z' _4 t  N( l/ y: xMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder % m; Q; y& J' U: O# C
As I think of what could be. , Z" w  B# e/ j
The world is so big to me
2 d* _# f0 D, p" N9 v  D- |I wonder what it means to be
# [) a  G- [# r7 TI looked up at the star and smiled
4 O" n1 c" A% P+ S3 oThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. + \0 f8 s' }' k; U6 z$ o) ]) T

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
; y5 ]5 S! ^6 h4 m( X  S评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。& X2 e- J. V1 a/ q9 C2 t* u
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,& }3 c" h9 L- D, [/ l
A poor old Guy;0 f/ a6 ~7 [7 y
Legs in a bonfire,5 |6 J) \4 q* |7 C$ n) }+ Z2 B
Head in the sky) X' |0 v6 S  R9 B
Lonely, with the feel of betray, @+ ~+ K8 X' Y. T1 Y
Heart empty and hollow
8 z  ]# g! `3 B  WAlone I stand
' Z/ E! @* i; d- ?" SI am useless to all 6 h, n: L( @$ Z% D+ f4 U
But I wish I were a dove
! u2 h, E" G" j, X! |$ \/ hGiving myself to the world, to the fire6 z& k" w$ Z8 ^; Q8 s0 p! }* D
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
# o4 p' E2 c; b+ hI sent prayers to my god7 f5 o. ~& ~' p! B% Z
Though he does not answer4 Y& p5 ~) d7 K! P# C: Z6 j
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
; ]& h' {) R' Q4 J加油加油,经常写写!
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