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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, # X" J7 u5 j  A, J1 n+ G
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
, |$ E4 R. P. \! o9 j- PDreamers2 ~3 {( P; X" v& ]! M
Savages1 {" P8 }6 t# t6 \$ h0 S1 O3 y1 H+ ^
Poets
/ U$ ]1 K2 f: V1 }  EBuilders of canoes,( H. v) Z' d, K& n: ^8 o
Black smiths4 t9 p# O" o2 w, d2 @" s& i
Murderers,4 s% b/ \$ E5 R. b/ O! ~
Risk takers,
* \0 E' G4 A' m& \  p4 q" I% E  f0 ]) jMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 0 ]0 q" t" M( p) G6 l/ k( e# f
As I think of what could be.
2 f; |3 K. f! {" e# BThe world is so big to me ' h8 T0 \# N3 Q7 ~$ E7 ~1 G8 \
I wonder what it means to be
4 Y2 N( j. M' b/ {: q) zI looked up at the star and smiled
, i9 c, D& f1 L3 s( S0 {They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ) R  e: T9 G$ l

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。' z5 @: l7 i, j. p" V$ J# L
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。+ W* N0 Q# k" D  C$ p1 ?
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 }+ K" O1 w+ F+ H% nA poor old Guy;+ t7 k6 l- Z" n) V( V9 Y. t
Legs in a bonfire,
& g' @' l: q' N; u5 ?Head in the sky( f. g9 S1 `% i; |6 a
Lonely, with the feel of betray
% E$ w/ ?  O3 C$ g+ c  ?Heart empty and hollow
/ W( _* S& f& E' L  z. pAlone I stand
# \, N. |( a6 d! F5 LI am useless to all ! j: c' }( Q+ A9 t
But I wish I were a dove ; F1 n$ n& R- V- R5 A+ w
Giving myself to the world, to the fire. k; B2 u! c/ U# l) T9 H4 i: u
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
; l$ I# m+ |% D  v8 _- Q% cI sent prayers to my god$ l+ Q( ?: U# @/ Q' _
Though he does not answer
2 c: |2 r7 @8 E7 W% R: W: |( y8 c/ eHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
' h4 i* F1 P: l加油加油,经常写写!
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