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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
1 m7 }% O* \* E) wI believe there must be creatures like ourselves    |  v: d$ Z4 g& M
Dreamers
$ L" {% \( v0 |5 L3 p+ l# `  KSavages
, }# P  I5 ?  I- I% h+ IPoets
/ U; V! O% t) j8 Y& I4 vBuilders of canoes,
: r. o* D$ k$ d% e5 R$ p% x+ i9 hBlack smiths$ Q3 W+ L. U. O4 z7 S
Murderers,6 `& l* ]) r$ ]
Risk takers,
0 l: R) h4 c4 a5 K5 W0 e: h1 k: lMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder   r' U, g( R8 M/ k
As I think of what could be.
  X8 b) Y& t3 J8 d" \The world is so big to me
; E$ o% _5 G( U1 DI wonder what it means to be
) E* [- v2 ^4 R+ u1 R. G$ OI looked up at the star and smiled
5 t( Q" f+ Y6 v! |They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 9 v0 z/ k- {" p0 `/ n5 S* u
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。0 Y8 U6 `. \0 d8 Q5 E% [+ {: o2 @
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
8 U& Z4 p  m$ H& k顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 p9 Z8 }' R$ f9 \A poor old Guy;9 X/ z- e% H+ j5 M7 ^) U1 D
Legs in a bonfire,5 O/ N7 K/ n( ?3 r$ k' m
Head in the sky4 A1 n, N7 P3 s& K# F# c+ O4 I3 s
Lonely, with the feel of betray
% G( @" i! v. r% u  O! }0 m; NHeart empty and hollow* y( A% W& u  A
Alone I stand
, ~4 U; F# N& M- ~" q, o: ?% S% RI am useless to all " q& @) e9 F: F: u, c3 V; z! t
But I wish I were a dove
9 v# W. a/ o. P% V1 _Giving myself to the world, to the fire
+ T" e8 c" S5 B! v: C. E' cI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
( k: D' f7 O) F+ `5 d5 `I sent prayers to my god
! e+ B0 I7 ~# ]( ^! X: o- \Though he does not answer
7 H5 Y0 y1 \5 U, U6 h) dHe bless me with the gift of hope 0 J* W7 V; M$ g9 J3 K1 p1 i9 a

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。( m/ X0 H+ M) ~- `8 _) W' ]# j: I0 R
加油加油,经常写写!
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