SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
% n# |8 e- E  @2 T5 k3 V) LTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
+ K3 W$ _0 w( p+ ^% I1 q3 xFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
$ ?. I4 N3 U) S) yPower mirrors
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Power windows
Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
$ q( i% k/ i$ `# gAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
8 u7 t+ |3 ~- J: |* }( l+ o4 FFog lights

7 d" ^, `- K6 q4 W**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
; ~- ?1 T7 M9 x& x* z5 qIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

1 @0 O+ @' I5 B' O- X& O" ePlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
3 _+ D4 I5 h, Q$ v9 ]0 C" tPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR

" G" `( E7 W+ H1 [+ ]8 ~; c5 nDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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4 A1 j. N& I) C6 t  V, y. t& ^' g2 t, ~IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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7 f  M# l2 `2 TDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
  i1 ]7 b) d3 e% Y: y这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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2 y3 ?% M) f1 k( G% f0 XDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

) U% y6 \# a6 a  AFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
$ M# @- i& T" U8 Z. Y! s" S% ]Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

6 w. ~) J/ P9 B0 N0 yThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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