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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪9 W3 }5 f. m; P1 E8 _

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SNOW9 X' B; y) U& j" [+ L* f

7 R) ?! ~0 X; O0 X9 k+ D9 X                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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0 h& c/ ?, I' k; k                                       February 1936
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1 S: e+ Y8 `0 w3 f8 w  North country scene:& X1 r, ~9 R! y
                                                                                               
- j1 g! q5 e. b( m$ n  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.
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  Both sides of the Great Wall
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# N+ U& @; Q% |5 _. ]$ I# e2 m  One single white immensity." F. L7 l7 J6 _; t+ S: K

2 B2 \2 p$ i  B  The Yellow River"s swift current
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# B- t; Z; J# W4 [( E  Is stilled from end to end.
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6 r7 Y) {$ H6 z1 @( j/ }  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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$ E3 g9 K8 R' r. n6 M3 W) e  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,; \2 H2 a# }1 W$ k
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  Vying with heaven in stature.
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+ T3 L9 G) X9 B  On a fine day, the land,
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2 l" B3 f$ I2 v; Z1 q+ C1 M  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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  Grows more enchanting.
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  This land so rich in beauty
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6 L2 Q' i4 t3 u+ H6 E1 j  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.& `- f3 Y' W, {  r1 r" [5 J, d

5 d- O0 y* l- r5 s. o; C  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti8 l7 Z# I9 z" }3 S0 e1 i
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  Were lacking in literary grace,3 H4 z1 }  V- }9 }! z- r
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  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu! M. w. [  c* O6 H5 n
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  Had little poetry in their souls;
9 G1 S! i8 R9 ]( S% I, g: G1 T  And Genghis Khan,
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7 {3 u$ e! |; B, R4 M+ `2 p  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
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  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched) S, N* U0 s/ T3 p, _# c0 e

3 b* ^# h4 E5 r  All are past and gone!
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1 F( p; |5 e  D( Y& T% ?9 |# [0 }  ^  For truly great men
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! `) P3 O" O. u3 K* b  Look to this age alone.$ |3 \, k! e3 _

* B  N9 C7 [8 t* I$ o  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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, [7 `. s7 @% u7 T7 X  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.6 f. l' h5 L, T* |
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  沁园春 雪6 Q  `7 |0 ~- T2 b) p# b

4 {. y3 j* I6 _  一九三六年二月8 A" ?# g; X) {8 ^. v9 _

- {1 z5 m0 A7 e% A% G   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽% h: L8 p* E4 U, u% d3 K$ a" }7 c
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高' \5 X; n% x" j3 s
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  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆) l* @4 W7 Y" U% ?% ]
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  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采4 E: k, l8 p; q: [
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  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕5 {3 t0 J4 X8 P3 C. }9 a

8 m" {, I- T6 X  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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