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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪
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                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun& B' S/ |% N/ ^) P5 m2 @7 P4 E' f5 i

* z. q/ X8 |2 X                                       February 1936
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  North country scene:
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. s$ e! G+ A+ A( J% G  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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% |+ `$ R# M' o1 m' n/ K8 n  I  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.
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" \* \$ Q, O9 O# R  Both sides of the Great Wall* U7 U( V0 w1 B- `7 X+ r& K
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  One single white immensity.
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! G( U* l9 o2 S: T' N  M. C6 |  The Yellow River"s swift current
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  Is stilled from end to end.4 p* s, @! c  c6 ]1 c# }% x8 S
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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- }( X0 ^) g- G" S5 l5 @  Vying with heaven in stature.: ~) Q& i% o! S% R7 n% n9 A: Y
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  On a fine day, the land,1 b: R1 M/ M* |

" _5 l1 d7 Q- T' P6 c: E  Clad in white, adorned in red,5 M% |% R" P4 B/ O: o
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  Grows more enchanting.
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" w* C# A& P3 L1 }8 X  This land so rich in beauty
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage." g8 l& g. V9 M" u

" Z3 z6 }/ h. ~( W2 k  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti0 D  c0 c% v/ @3 t' I

: y! D# w) o6 q$ |% M. S  Were lacking in literary grace,
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2 k: Z- [) C- {6 p! i" h9 \; V% w% H  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu
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5 N7 W! |0 q4 z6 v' x  Had little poetry in their souls;
6 I( d6 u9 ~7 D5 P  And Genghis Khan,
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  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,0 P5 i6 L# [% x, l3 H% |" I

; U' D4 j: h  d2 Y8 H/ J- w& V  a  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched
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0 G2 o+ y8 S* x6 Y  All are past and gone!
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7 l; @' ~, D  d$ O$ S& U( E9 c  For truly great men/ U+ e9 e& i* B6 ~% p$ W5 A

! e3 c( M  j0 [+ i& R  Look to this age alone.
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.) e2 r6 H# L3 L1 I: P  q5 C6 g( V
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  沁园春 雪7 {% x. a2 D' C3 e% W( P- ^

+ a# y4 V* R; K* o* g  一九三六年二月
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* J0 K& ?" P: m. H% v   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高0 m7 u; K0 ~0 P' s0 c1 V1 b

' y1 W! B/ L& C7 x  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆: K# n8 U: X8 z( A6 F
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  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采
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  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕/ W) C6 ]+ s! Q: K
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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