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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪
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* L4 R) e4 g& o% i" E7 f) M1 D                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun4 s8 F1 T8 }/ u3 o& L
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                                       February 1936, u) g% l! _" R- G5 Y5 A. J9 ^: u

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  North country scene:
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5 x6 V  r+ _2 N/ V9 _6 `4 k) X  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.  o2 t2 F+ M) u( g! L

0 C/ f( p! |( S  H( Q* B9 [9 e( p  Both sides of the Great Wall; s4 |" Y5 U; G1 B, d

8 t. ?6 A$ q/ [# K$ |4 `  One single white immensity.7 z/ u( L0 K4 w
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  The Yellow River"s swift current/ Y! I& t1 K: A. I0 X
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  Is stilled from end to end.
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes8 Q) I% U, Y; X3 h$ w; v7 P1 N9 n' Y

: K3 K; }2 @6 O( a. h, }  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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( O1 W$ I/ w  m7 j2 P8 C( `  Vying with heaven in stature.
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* {6 M; f+ |& F& b" w; d; X  On a fine day, the land,
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4 C5 t! q0 k3 L: m$ \9 y  C  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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  Grows more enchanting.
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  This land so rich in beauty1 ]) Y7 t5 S0 s0 F. K# J0 t4 u
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage./ Z4 H8 [: {) P5 M6 d" K
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  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti( x- ?9 W  B# X. b4 W6 o
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  Were lacking in literary grace,
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% z* v1 A) b" ^+ k$ m  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu9 P8 f  v& u: d0 s: ~. _# H

* r+ O7 v' i; N" E3 p0 N  Had little poetry in their souls;4 G, ]/ P5 B8 n) b7 U
  And Genghis Khan,
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; q0 M; H5 u5 c" _( |4 K  Proud Son of Heaven for a day," {7 D. V) l, A5 I  B
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  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched9 G( D6 _) a; l0 r; e

# b% R5 Q) ^2 R  All are past and gone!
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  For truly great men9 J2 G1 n- _1 Q& {+ H6 ^$ ^
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  Look to this age alone.3 f' {1 b; [6 T8 M% Q

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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.% n$ v6 S! B8 i& M% T

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5 d9 S, m: [* Y& Z   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽% R8 j4 [' J3 S8 e! b( U! A
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高9 S1 c( U; `7 F5 \6 f

" D& V; \. S0 r/ k  s+ Y- z  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆
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  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采
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  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕
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' _9 t. T; g  H" ^[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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