作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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4 N2 i  s& [% ^6 h　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

# N& E; z. J1 Nexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

! G2 d! U2 A1 l- I' l9 r5 Bput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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3 z+ M0 B8 _8 K/ a  a- n8 E every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

( R, U3 P' z  W was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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9 O- f8 R4 ^+ K" a/ fthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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/ x6 u; F) C- W4 j/ h; ]8 S6 F2 Vdeaest daughter.


( M7 _1 f, }  z+ b5 Y6 Z  U0 jAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

) L2 ]9 h! E. Y' o* I never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
2 B' d2 k9 _! A8 a; E# vwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！