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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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; q  P8 @1 u! y- T  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was, _6 b: l. S' \1 t3 I7 n4 P
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to: l9 a6 P  f/ D

0 v1 [, P& V1 q3 s4 @. @9 m3 Lput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my8 W6 S0 `1 D/ I' y, U/ H

; K. y; v9 Y+ H' c little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 3 Z$ q4 d8 r$ x6 \

$ \4 D- k- o1 _% k0 Ztrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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$ d7 G  m2 b0 uthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing/ p! b; K) K7 @6 C' F) O
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ) J0 ]6 |, u" W1 m9 j
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 8 J- I! r# X$ o" a) u

; y9 u- T) ?3 [/ C+ l8 T- jdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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9 Y" M" G# R5 m) d. @, [  r[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!  s2 N, J7 ]! D4 T7 J* U: A$ ~; ?
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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