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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was( U' ~* F. \: V+ |: b/ [. \
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to: F# y# R! l: T! h
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my! Q: C. Q+ S8 k! {
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,) h6 n; u- q- D9 R* m! E9 S

5 @! ?% n  ]* ]3 i; c  h every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since + Y# D8 y$ I3 e+ m. y2 b0 z
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing  I% Z% D3 J0 W! D$ V8 n. a

; a- F  R6 {1 C4 f9 {* N( F. E on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 4 S$ R7 F& o7 ?

$ G' i: R- f1 t4 c  e3 Efor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ( G7 H, m# X0 _+ D

/ |; J$ B; L* @2 N* pdeaest daughter.: D/ u5 h/ z# ^! G
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, q. x" W, D  `7 m* r  W/ `0 ZAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will2 k* Q1 ^0 ~# c# D+ q3 L  |
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.% i' z( h/ j* P" O" Q) r
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
8 F0 I) ^+ I# x7 K' E: C8 vwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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