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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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+ ?  ]3 A  V" C! Y; F* ^7 Pexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

' ?  L3 ?' e- c0 `" rput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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- O+ P# V5 a! P little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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; m( B5 o0 b( z5 ], r every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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- b( d. d: m5 a- ~$ ] was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

& A7 l! r' i3 n, G8 ]that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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' l) c; b% Q) G& X on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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% l+ ^7 H$ Q& i3 _' r3 M# RAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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2 _- x' r9 i+ E  G. ]. v never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

0 F2 p3 z. q: ]! y, ?: y  W" k3 V[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！