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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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7 P, P3 g  [% d  s- z% ?! x* u     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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- K5 R$ l2 p1 s1 ?1 u) J0 Yexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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  K- v2 n3 j7 i% s5 | little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,' l2 I* R; d; ?% ^) a
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid7 h* }+ p8 o: C$ D

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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since : v! x) {- `  Q8 k, f
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing8 [6 K2 V) }0 G9 K! W0 ?# t

  [5 J  a7 C: o: ^4 P0 h5 k on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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deaest daughter.6 E0 K7 H$ L0 Z) d
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. y& L. b  D8 |After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
# n* t! [' g9 A) _we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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