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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

3 T( N! F' A& V2 ?0 q6 m' }　　　　　One day I always remember

% n) c# i/ e2 r' N+ ~8 W6 B　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

6 c2 g# L5 g1 n3 ^9 ?9 q! bexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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  ~8 y2 L$ ^  S# W5 |put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

0 r8 P5 p6 H. e- h, M little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

) s4 a7 D' T$ }8 o; q; m was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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8 ]8 p8 y" U9 d4 y' |* k9 Ktrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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5 _  b( m, v2 G7 D on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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; X! y' z0 ^' x. r/ v9 Tfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
; T8 [/ A6 T5 D8 Fwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！