作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

  u; r/ j, T# |, k every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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8 V2 w5 a' ^) Ktrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

% Y& M- M; }' t* E. T! cthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

; W- K1 I5 \8 T- p on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

; @( D0 ^; N! Bfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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7 n+ f6 c! @, ?deaest daughter.


( Q! U4 p: a( f8 t" eAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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: m. B" ^  v) L[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
3 j' f" s+ f( c2 T: Dwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！