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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架8 r% o% g; g. b) ]/ {

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TWE作文模板汇粹
/ r$ d# Q0 _: }2 B(一) 对立观点式
) A, T" u2 e# H- v( ^4 U( Z6 J. \1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) ! u* r4 f  W3 `9 N+ X
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9 S6 Z2 |$ c; q* @/ Y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
7 Y+ {2 a1 W( [: q! t) s/ Z8 IThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ( S4 I0 k/ C& C% y! q# ?
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
* c: v' _9 k" w9 [! ~A is superior in another way, this is…
0 j/ w! O7 I; ]6 g$ Z  r  ]It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 3 p& W- ]% K$ w* N4 d2 U. p: P
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ) F$ V/ T4 U: Z' a( q; `4 x

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. ' V( P, D7 c- |. f
For A, A 的一个优势 % Y1 R4 d* S1 k9 }
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
/ P( q) l# n3 a1 qFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... ( D) l0 e6 j6 R) c$ ^. T
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
/ i# C' [5 K! ~: n& rmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
3 I! e/ c* a( I9 q+ ]! ?From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. " [- [9 i8 J3 P8 x% K0 q2 [

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(二)单一观点式 0 o1 R3 N! \- x# h
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. ) g, `  `  c( I
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
: s) i1 Q0 V% O8 X. FThere is no denying that… * y( O/ W4 k# [7 ~% n) P
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
- e& y+ c3 B2 b8 N$ N& ^Finally,…
3 G; y* e; {! F7 P" h( E2 U. CBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 8 C) ^) G0 W9 c% w) W8 K
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
8 m! f, q4 h  ~+ U* t, {1 vThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 5 o* n6 M  F- E2 u3 _! E  d, H9 W
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… $ f* r3 Y& Z! A5 J* p* A
A is superior in another way, this is… 6 i: u0 {4 A- t' ^/ R- d& k: g& y0 {
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… % C6 C" z& F( O1 E0 j! w
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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) ]4 E. N2 Y& v" @' gThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. . U. B4 B3 k2 c2 O
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. ; r6 Q% T8 D0 Z
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ) @1 |  e; X) D: S" _" b
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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) \6 J& g9 J' k7 ZFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
6 h( H/ [$ U5 c' O4 DFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
% \) z$ A5 B7 X/ F$ W(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 6 W* i0 Y! \; n
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; M6 O/ ^6 _% I+ g! y陈述这个事实
7 C9 k- [# ]: Y+ E, |4 b7 G1 ?' E$ `Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
% Z- \( F, z; X7 g4 [4 [; aOne of the primary causes is that…
& ?9 w- k& q9 N4 eXXX also results from… 6 [' s9 h: A' X  a% K, r8 ?  @
… is responsible for xxx, as well. $ C- v4 V8 k& R: r4 l! k" p
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 0 }0 K) F! Q) f: V" ]
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, w, y9 g* H. N( E/ iThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. . Y! V0 R* q8 n2 ?/ D; V# Y9 X6 E

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 1 y2 l( v( w6 G2 R7 H. g0 r$ R4 T
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
, L3 {3 ?$ ?# ~9 \# h4 f' r, M! O/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… - `  T5 X# |, J9 O. ^4 R  [
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0 q2 t8 H0 \8 ^a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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* f5 A; J9 C& p. k+ j- j. `3 bIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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6 }4 C9 Q0 P- m. |) o. G[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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