TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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5 `  c& n9 F7 \( h# X(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  D6 p8 y4 l% q5 ]What is also worth noticing fact is that……
* U& K% b8 W' q2 b6 x, k' |A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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/ p) {* v6 ?4 D, T1 P8 u9 q  \2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
7 Z( j, ]: O8 T8 \3 k( y; yWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
5 y7 C+ K  F# X# jmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
* |- ~$ S+ {; F7 A+ u+ C) \After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
; h; ^1 u2 A% n/ QThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
+ a! N; r* j1 f2 D) _: K; PIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
  l& K  @7 a) }From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2 O; [0 |" V1 Z: J7 ?(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



5 U0 p2 N6 h. o6 Z. l( A8 g' HThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
, g# ]9 C' }! B$ ~; e0 c; I& y6 \6 fWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
+ s2 |& O7 |6 w6 L  ^; b& zThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
  i3 M+ x6 l2 q8 H2 wWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
0 d" ^9 o/ V# Z1 z9 [+ cFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
$ t, m  ^" H' X5 H! }1 ^From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
1 F) \8 N; S  S(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
- O! C. D1 x& s7 n) i' e6 n% J& F/ {One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
2 r( K( i% c% S  Q4 L& |+ G… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX


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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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* A: s0 ]* D) N7 O. F& D7 T背景描述
2 @/ A( ^9 [! Q4 |/ hThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
# p* \  _8 ~2 l, q, [4 F* |9 @: w/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore
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$ K( j7 x9 D% q$ V; R# @# B( uIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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) B6 F1 p5 @1 O: [再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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4 j6 ]4 x& a- B( R[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]