TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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* o) i: ]0 J1 m8 T( g* E(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
0 ?, [1 C7 P0 k- n: FThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( c% l- J( E2 A& hWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
1 z# s  g+ ~8 J* a7 ?+ ~" uIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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- x8 j7 T# H, m8 F# ~To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
4 D) e, [$ l2 m6 N" gFor A, A 的一个优势
1 l  ]1 J+ X* `/ X* |/ tWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
. U& v' U6 v( @7 a* l4 l& |Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
1 Z; b; ~. P' E9 @: q3 l" q/ c* Ion the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
' U  u2 |4 L: gmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
4 q* _$ ~2 V& D" a- |( n8 w9 PAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
4 B4 e* K. e  {There is no denying that…
! y3 S0 s1 {9 h* u& IAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
5 h+ D* g! a# p6 I  y" hBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ _3 S; F, `9 H1 |' S' AIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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' b  [* D5 z& G# Z! ~% d$ H(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
& R" v6 e* S' y5 I8 w+ Y, ]When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
; `5 \, [+ R, DThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 |, A% v; D! A1 T) D, v* SC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
- y" z4 s0 p! _& Z$ e- PFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
* c7 |* @+ n, T1 @4 }One of the primary causes is that…
5 S+ o8 f/ T0 hXXX also results from…
* G! W! o4 S4 w* ?' `… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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$ R4 v) f" ]" a4 I- W, x' t' ?  l- i2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
( C% M1 `" i" T8 FThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
# j, u8 A5 e1 s8 G3 _& D/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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, ]2 l6 x; B) t. p1 }a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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4 M8 O, V) C  x, _( e1 |In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

- _9 O  s- p6 y9 L) Q9 {% u  r再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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