TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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" z+ M) ~7 u* I(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
$ b2 R0 m# G, p+ EWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; X0 d) l& r2 p, z& l9 _0 `7 jFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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# x% m) g+ E$ oWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
8 W! O, C6 |6 l. x, T6 g9 mmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
9 i* X( R: M7 J) ]From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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! U5 Q+ Y$ ]* _5 }% n, s& r8 C9 V: k(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
5 O4 @' m: o; x) `Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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  }; |/ c6 K7 e0 d8 m& ?( o(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
$ ]4 V, y8 G$ _' hFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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, B2 W. h$ x2 s/ H. C(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
+ {5 |+ b' ~, sWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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9 {. [9 M  X; ~# \0 LC is superior in another way, this is…
/ l- @6 O3 ]# i  W# U: U8 Q# a3 M( sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
. ~4 A$ B' i/ ]: o5 T, B5 t5 SFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
7 ]8 C1 [3 m# ^0 G. i; HOne of the primary causes is that…
% r5 K# j8 }& X. z9 n) `! |9 QXXX also results from…
! ^- w. y" V, B4 ~& m; C# E5 U… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* E! R+ x2 u4 A' A* N0 H0 TTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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- }: f9 l. k9 y, R( ~* f& N2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



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/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
) w) M% d/ _+ k  e5 P/ Y" s/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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9 \5 k/ F4 T! }" x5 i, V6 NIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

& Q4 v9 a8 r/ t& x6 k- o[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]