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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
( Z0 u  E5 d$ q) H7 v& S; z1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) - o. ]  p7 \" a" s7 b  g9 u
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 2 [/ p  b" c4 M& g" ]7 \
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
& C! P8 |/ @$ p5 E0 \What is also worth noticing fact is that…… * O" e# q& x! f. S' \/ Z6 }
A is superior in another way, this is…
0 j) r; u6 U: a  K3 z' FIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 5 a' h/ ~5 C" s& ?4 o* m) h, {& ^- q0 s3 ]/ B
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... + f: o) W+ }0 e5 z

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' [- j: J( N$ T/ g% d* v2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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. q7 S& l+ C* z. zTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
" Q2 w' ^6 E5 _For A, A 的一个优势
- e2 b& p9 Q& H% Y1 a2 l  `Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
# c& P8 [; X/ d1 ^Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
  Q5 i' L" p  V  l8 [- Qon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… , A! i5 `( z9 P+ U# z+ u
moreover, B的优点2,for example… . [) g( {' V2 m+ ?) ?
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 ( |% w% \6 }' ^9 v
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) / l) U5 n* F' T

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0 q# G% e* g" Q; M# T首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
8 N9 n7 `6 k# L" g) {After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 9 C* Y4 S- a4 D5 i& G% K: _
There is no denying that…
% z* v# t! n8 _: ]2 f! |0 T7 X4 FAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
1 S- i7 ^2 d+ G0 D4 g! nFinally,… : J- ^6 }0 X+ ?! V& h8 y
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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( Y5 v$ I3 w8 C! L, c2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) & ?; s5 H+ w; j7 `8 a
(本类型只agree)
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; F+ z- u7 X0 q1 w+ x9 ]# q(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. " H3 [2 M, Y$ B$ @, V" G! J3 n/ s- O' u
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
# y: H$ A! d3 j% P( F4 Q* U+ x# o8 aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… ; D3 N0 t9 C0 J" R5 P+ s
A is superior in another way, this is…
6 I. r9 ]4 g% S3 W" P# l5 BIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
. ]5 ]% d7 ]9 ^From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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) \+ ~; G" T; \4 L  q) L( T5 a. uThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. $ y0 \, |; w) k( c: B( ?8 R
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. ! i8 P% I! q7 E# ]: D& k5 W7 ~" r
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
; j) c, [- ?" z  w2 CWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
- P6 G: W& X! ]# c) _5 j' P& ~/ @C is superior in another way, this is…   ]. g- k- h. m# d& t% W
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C * ^/ F& o. O; {* E5 d
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. ( [8 p% Y' e# H/ Y  V
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(四)原因解释型 / C+ q. h2 j* D8 y& v, B7 a
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. + h7 M6 G5 d0 A" ]
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4 |! w3 x8 V* U! @# H( X陈述这个事实
. u! v, X; t8 `Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ) M( e  u* t# [/ P
One of the primary causes is that… 7 F( j* z" ~+ L' b7 l/ m; l* @
XXX also results from… . N1 x. X( ^7 ?( T* b' c# W* y
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
, V, }: i5 y& \: D& ^9 T9 q: O& n: ATo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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( \* J  u' S7 \3 U: FOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… $ C& Z) d+ G1 y- f- d; g( `
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… " H7 h/ j) g) K3 R
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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" T( G0 ]0 y' ta more subtle point which we must consider is that… & k; J$ d. f7 h! Y% a- H, q
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In addition/ furthermore
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3 f5 j: p* N$ |4 h4 Q# WIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架., Q4 i) n4 j2 j

% p, E* K( t/ t- o[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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