TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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TWE作文模板汇粹
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1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
2 R1 ^! d9 A0 d, hWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
5 C) @  X, E) q+ f  xIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 Q3 q: k% x3 [. UFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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  i; ^& k/ {2 j4 sTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
4 ~7 T) t* F" rWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
, P# ~( |1 `4 T4 x! }0 S! AFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
* o6 l3 ?& o) u& W5 hon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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# o- S$ c7 ?0 I! V(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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  `. W9 F& ?- m2 N首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
- z5 i" S; G: p0 G% G# PThere is no denying that…
" ^) Z- p6 v$ e2 Z0 B+ j! hAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
3 J1 N$ \- o* \2 a2 aBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
% F2 \4 f! ?% @9 Q. j8 f1 |3 }  NWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ q! G3 e3 l  F+ A+ yIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 f3 i; {/ X- R2 Y4 JFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
1 K" u: t4 J) fThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
8 _8 I% Z) i( F6 V2 cWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
' e3 H3 P3 {9 ]2 M: x2 DC is superior in another way, this is…
) _% Y" w1 Q( {/ N+ M6 VFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
) g, I! q/ [& k0 I3 u" h1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
) ^* p; {: B! y& Q: L+ E9 yXXX also results from…
& Q3 f, O. B$ P/ c. ?9 t' V… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
% z( j6 C) _# C3 n2 mThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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- `8 k' v8 e) n! j/ T" UOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
  O( H8 D9 B  W7 W6 ?: K/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/ \' k8 ~( t6 C/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore

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% K* f& ^8 S5 L# oIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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8 n" A" u- }! K[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]