TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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" ?4 K# h# k; q# I+ D(一) 对立观点式
% n$ C& [4 a! F1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
7 N& R: f. Y9 W' ?7 W8 {7 hFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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" G- L) n& m0 f2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
  L) s8 ]7 q% P/ G- ion the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
' w; L( |1 f  PFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.


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* g7 F+ g* H6 ~- h(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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0 v$ M3 J7 }5 q  @. x- k. R首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
+ z/ D! V2 i! o6 ]4 e) ?After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
9 T8 Y3 p- G! r2 E7 N0 gThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
" _# G( L; X) Z7 I* `( M- q# IFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
! N$ Q0 y% T* V; YFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
$ y. U: F9 T8 H1 bWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 ~) t- X8 y3 c( UC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
" P$ C$ c7 K* r( K; @% ]- e* t' X(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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* a9 I7 V! @+ ?(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
0 M& B1 c" ~5 ?$ S# eOne of the primary causes is that…
# k8 L7 t0 p$ dXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
3 {4 @- V0 L# W/ j2 VTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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3 a7 y5 b( ?% q6 J2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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3 O# r% h7 l! A# mOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
: }( H* Y5 }  r6 o8 Y/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
. v/ [, ~+ D  {" x7 w8 i/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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/ O# I+ S7 I) ~3 w& }. ^! K- uIn addition/ furthermore


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- E- X& X1 B1 m( @In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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) F) q' f+ D- B5 k& W- W9 k再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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