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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架( @  S) \+ o* m# R4 S

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9 p* N8 r, x: ]& p/ I- t1 |' F(一) 对立观点式 , v  j8 s- r& d% M2 \( c
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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; B: ?) F, h: g5 Z* \(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
' P* I9 p& s+ D" V8 u& sThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ) M$ {3 B1 @( v- g5 n; b! H
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 V7 j/ u- y" y6 i: S. U: WA is superior in another way, this is… " E4 j: U% T/ [5 L1 J9 m* L/ y
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 4 Q' E9 V( T( E" s3 y
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... # h( E& j4 a! o& s& q' ?
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8 C4 K. j$ B! C5 P9 h; p2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
& t; E3 ]9 u4 F/ ]; D5 M6 X0 |For A, A 的一个优势
& E0 f' a, q( d! `7 O6 `Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
: a/ ]2 R% Y* e' G7 A# @Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 3 T$ J, ~* h) D+ e3 i
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
9 \7 v% T% F5 A2 Y0 U9 f) Xmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
1 B9 d1 x1 O% j; o7 lFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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( D" w) J1 o9 x: \5 R" E1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. 9 A$ X8 x3 O5 Y9 K
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. $ B  X) Y+ m: u
There is no denying that…
; ~4 ~( b: |1 u4 A( o( ~$ _Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… ) ^6 d6 p4 T; {
Finally,… 1 p# F/ B- l0 g3 M( @
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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, E' a$ c+ W! E& @7 \$ n2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) ! N/ t* a+ m, K+ C+ V; {7 b$ {6 @1 q* V
(本类型只agree)
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# H3 `+ n" A5 F/ d# _2 m(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 6 }" ]7 g2 m2 e% M0 y
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
$ G* a$ z* o2 ~% B4 `  vWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
, c6 @+ x0 g  ~8 b0 s0 g' pA is superior in another way, this is… ' y, ?) M4 S% E" i: @+ ]
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
' ]3 @; E& c* C3 O5 s  x9 TFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 0 H) q2 ]* y  A1 ]7 ^$ o
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$ \$ ?6 [7 E+ F" Y) o' \8 c: u(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
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The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
& ~" K& _% T0 L! u7 ]* JWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 0 _/ X; z: B3 u; {; c( M
C is superior in another way, this is… / i5 t" S) f( f$ e; I2 J
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C % W" ^) T. B% z' Y" o) F5 y) N
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. + p- v) ]- K) {  {+ x
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 3 a5 z+ N# s! U/ ~7 F+ i
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 8 n: ?- _6 ^/ w' t) d( \! r9 M
One of the primary causes is that… ' _; z% {% ^0 B! w0 [# e8 X
XXX also results from…
* w, n+ G. n3 W: J… is responsible for xxx, as well. " |9 Y6 v) B! N/ U  S  E+ @
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 8 f* J; v/ a  x  F1 E

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 5 E0 f3 y- k0 {- D
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% c" j, U: s' r! j9 oThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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6 a" P# _6 p& _1 u1 x2 EOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
+ l: H, V4 K% W1 \$ y& a/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
) C% J6 t- ?+ w  ^1 l: O" {- Q: j/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… , ~  U1 d, @0 x. X

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& J! c1 U7 w, ~  v5 J" ?a more subtle point which we must consider is that…   f9 f1 j3 _# C) F

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9 d9 Q. G. X$ n# nIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?# d% R8 ^2 o' [2 E1 X2 t1 n! w
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.! Y! i3 V- f' ?) Y7 j6 S

6 o3 P) {' c+ k. [3 r& T+ x6 v[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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