TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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6 @0 w6 c/ X' a$ u: h3 f(一) 对立观点式
  E4 `. X0 y* q6 e' W  g, s1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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2 L4 {/ i4 t& T$ u7 M4 R(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
- E  H8 k/ j+ K% T" `4 u' FThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
! \. N) r# `; T; t  a1 ^% lWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
9 x* \) x/ m8 |! q; X) [4 SFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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- k- g9 m) W: o. D$ z2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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) l  K$ E/ [, N* r! [" `" KTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
% E: f: y& L9 d: Q4 i2 S% r' mWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
, o0 J$ g( q4 P% j# C6 a; L" n; Cmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
& v- ^2 y* P- L6 w1 ?0 ?After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
  \8 B' B! e4 ?' w5 sThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
( G: t% E' H7 i1 G2 @+ u! ?Finally,…
  f/ }. v  E/ U' l8 G8 h- ?# CBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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3 b) A1 O. }6 M0 Z7 k# ?(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
2 p; l$ n. R# `  A/ D% [' @What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  r+ J5 r; S4 {* q+ F4 L/ A+ p) ^A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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# H3 Z7 ~8 N7 L! U. b6 C+ UThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
7 k# X- S9 b3 BWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
0 s2 Z% G4 C* P7 J: iFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
8 f% o2 f5 [/ u7 B(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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. U( b; T) T/ X3 V(四)原因解释型
' Q6 E( I* ?$ D8 P& K5 e% e1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
9 w: Z+ \- Z2 ROne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
# |% m* ~( G* g' M9 j  kTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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/ S8 O1 \7 ?2 v- D, W3 S+ j3 A2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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( u, k( }' O! E- t# H背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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* m1 p2 I( V3 S- DOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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4 ~+ M7 a0 L+ a+ m4 M# oa more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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) S$ R. \" t# n" X2 P9 S# wIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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" I2 t1 x. O+ t9 w* B5 x% s再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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