TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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0 j# r. N: z: v+ }" @/ c; i. v+ ~5 N! C(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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# R5 ~8 c% X, d+ A' I+ w(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
# i2 a' F4 B, z# H; YIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
' e3 E6 w. e6 pFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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! K2 u7 ]8 y6 g+ A# sTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
# Q; S+ @7 I7 i+ d7 J+ z# vFor A, A 的一个优势
7 a0 n- X0 y. |4 a' M2 D0 k: KWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
, a  F1 _" D6 |0 w9 {moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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3 V8 S. \) P, r(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
9 R# m' g: ]5 n% b5 |- p& T/ W% CAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
) c; r) c# X& S. a- ~Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
0 `: _, ?1 k( y7 ~; FFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



  ~+ n3 u, X! r２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
+ G1 Z5 m1 `) b. O1 J8 ]A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
: E$ y' R; g/ [1 k) p8 @5 EFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ v- c* A% ?* [! E1 p6 L(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



. k9 I3 V- ~* I: @, WThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
# F8 C% v4 I: s/ L: S; r$ wThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
' M5 u& z& W0 U, z7 _From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
/ H( r5 A4 t* h1 B(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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5 V0 E, F2 t+ K* l1 H( e, [1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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$ \: W7 D) x! L0 N6 o陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
% y3 ~% J1 ~' JXXX also results from…
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" m5 I2 N0 d1 k2 nTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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. q8 k5 D$ x( j$ w4 s4 A2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
. g/ v8 B3 y9 m- nThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
  r! `9 e' J. y% J$ x. A6 c/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
9 D  s7 n. z- s! Z' z/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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+ G1 _9 L( S2 p: I& \+ BIn addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

% M# ]; n) k9 C4 Z7 U[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]