 鲜花( 16)  鸡蛋( 2)
|
有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,) [0 B3 L8 e$ b. W2 Y9 Q2 M& q
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. & Z c$ s" e2 D; a) w5 m1 M3 h \# \
零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 5 W# t7 I9 g* ^6 v0 @4 X' U2 O
现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
2 ~, x; t; i& ^6 b) F0 \9 C. E+ u梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
P6 u& I% o" F* \5 s; Q! @% g眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.$ m6 b1 V9 z( e n8 \1 w% ?6 n9 G
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.3 q: q) E* i$ ~- D+ L z
猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
4 f% I* l6 Z1 G- C6 n4 B就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.
; J% p* s* Q( C# Z5 ~1 ^我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
6 Q p9 x: J) G; e9 D, t那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
6 j) ^# O' F. [! Z/ j世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.! L& a4 S( X& O2 P8 D2 p
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
: C. \8 \4 R, E7 ]" x4 I想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
+ a2 R, q' L' m0 V8 i H最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. ! N# ^, V2 I9 ~, ?
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?9 q6 |( l: |6 P- a8 O/ j5 H
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
+ Z. g" _0 d4 }迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.2 r4 Y' A1 r! _
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
! ^ ]3 A& s! X7 B) Y多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?; `9 @$ S! B: B) U( O4 y
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
! F5 _ L, }3 A/ p多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
8 U; ]6 U# |. H8 }不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.2 Q- g: ^+ ` a3 `5 R2 E; U
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, % |' M1 X2 |* N7 J
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
- i2 E: o8 Z# H2 J; E. e多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
4 H% m! r. K9 P9 X* i永难平息的泪
8 K$ q$ y" F( \3 Y每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes
! z: a ~4 f; g5 s~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.9 {, F& ?7 V- P% h: R$ V+ r# G
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
: }: @1 G' ]2 [8 {让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
2 f) s7 { v) ] y+ R) E你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul " M. m, W5 u9 Z' i, ?8 P% X
一抹微笑;2 z6 k6 V) }) Z# i6 X' T
一个手势;
$ A0 { U) x) j u" @$ m/ \! y$ f一片话语,
' h6 I1 Y% n2 f, K& E愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
6 N: Y+ c# Z6 `! ^. U; V% { v明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner D3 z2 L* X6 V' l: d: w0 W, z
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
* ?, O, O j/ h1 t这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling
2 _/ N" E. {# j7 S. {: m也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
* x! [8 x! u* @5 }3 `, d起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
1 |/ w$ `& K# P9 E% {我并不以为然。; ^$ Q3 g0 L' t: A. }- z
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed + K$ C e4 F: a' j$ ~( E
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .0 e6 a( ~' \4 w% w
被一种情绪所左右,
- k- s% w1 p; [* V0 a( W( U总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .% g: Z, C7 D- Y! E2 X
即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you- S0 m c/ M% N* g/ m- z# a3 ~% Z
也不问我是否喜欢你,! }) ], B8 C9 ?5 D
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.
9 P3 d+ n" h% v9 U, \. j$ \只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you/ C& {. @% q) R. ^& i8 J. Z Z
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
* x/ N' ^; \, X7 m$ j0 M3 s+ v心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil4 s6 l+ I. S( B5 n, c3 T$ Y" |8 o
然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
* R- j2 x* ~' ?% `& b" r你的身影已化成一种氛围,
4 O' k$ K! v+ R/ A' l5 q2 D' \0 [! _记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
8 V7 |" s% `0 i0 V7 e你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! - {/ ~- e/ q9 v( x/ s5 ~" d8 C7 x
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字: t3 J. j g0 |! @3 o
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
- b% r4 N, p7 p3 N* N* \" g一种声音,and your voice
; f0 Q( g" J. R# \, V也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
) ]% K; x* ]7 `掺杂著幸福的感觉。- W1 B3 [+ S/ z! B1 V7 ~. e
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
# S2 }( M8 N, a( |象雪花般撒落在我的心田,3 y$ {1 k/ X5 u8 b, h7 d# A
倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
% Y+ b3 N: Z" l1 L4 P纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
( T' u3 y4 V9 n% @6 F% ^你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
) N/ t' c- P& c) G$ x7 E1 x6 |有一个能够让思念的人,
$ H0 ]; b# B4 f) i' y其实也是一种幸福。
! p2 F* Q! k8 R) \: x* F尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
- P. D) _5 F6 x7 V5 N7 M* t7 r柔柔的海风,% ]$ j$ k! x- A8 P4 t1 t8 [+ [* S
甜甜的夏天。
J( w1 a7 b( n7 E7 p一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy $ R9 r8 x N! b9 c
只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
. H) f& Y7 F3 Y; [1 `' k仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
4 F# k* @' i, V$ |* i6 ^+ J0 S" P想和你有共同的情结,
( f2 e3 n! ]( |共同的心愿。- e5 m7 a3 y' y* k. o# T6 m
/ V7 R8 t7 c. E' N, i* z1 L
8 ~! [8 R I0 x( B) V; l6 S" g好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
! p6 S% y6 M' D( ]一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
" O+ ? L( C3 }5 Q或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
! T O" N" W1 g/ a3 K6 F或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.# M' ~$ v) I" U8 j
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
/ ~# ^" Y& ?2 L5 \' h我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, , S$ x. a0 {# v$ s
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
' |- f: Y4 e# `5 L3 z! f9 b或是轻轻的一吻,& p! o, z- p1 x: U. _
再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』( |' {2 Y) U+ e7 ~
就足够了. That is enough.1 J. {2 w9 Z6 n% y4 y" r+ }
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
9 |6 d& |9 |: V/ X$ j终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
3 B+ W* C6 X* C" S/ `萌出了芽,
' R3 n1 q2 L) C; h一如对你的思念,the same as my missing3 ~. E. K9 y3 O2 G! X, s
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.& O$ `. N7 z1 W/ E* T2 D# p
如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand6 p Q6 {+ V. D1 s, j/ Z
能够牵著你的手,. f+ o: @4 O% i7 V5 Z7 Y
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
: I9 g6 d/ s; b# j5 X0 f; o: Z让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. ; Z- ~2 g6 F# @! U
慢慢地细读,; m6 K* [9 n8 A/ e) b. H" o
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. : b3 Y) G( B& ?& Q( \
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ( x4 Q+ ?* e. T- {! E
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
; v4 M5 o3 R p& ^& r就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
|