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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
) t2 }8 d; [& K! {. i前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
' ]) T% S2 P5 }. g* {Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
" v! U. K( m( d0 l; N" hPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.- G# `' z. |; y1 X5 K5 P: Q! t
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.
1 ?" |5 N# I+ h8 k( v: hThe same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.( J. J5 E+ r6 j0 B, u7 H) O) n
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
3 u! ?' h6 e4 p! q; zSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:0 B/ L$ J D& K _, o* I$ F
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool - h Y/ U5 b" A# _: t
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
1 r% U9 C. ]5 s- Y3 qI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.# p* O2 @5 ?% [9 U9 J7 X3 r8 M
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
: u% d6 k- ^- k; a; p, ]That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
7 ]* o+ T* f. @I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.- a+ d5 x: D" l2 S% P
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
+ m E4 {# M, N$ \$ }- ]) iIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
8 V, B7 n7 D; \; r9 TIntoxicated then feel cold,# U7 v; P) z+ W" T
the labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.9 z/ O+ Q- \, ]# m2 ^' a( J- B
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
* R/ A& b7 a! d$ _" x9 j% C. rThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
7 X) }- }: D+ xWhy I am always hoodwinked!) y3 Y% ~( |1 z4 \. y
I have told myself many times cautiously ' x4 v( Q" I5 M; S" D5 F8 ]
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
- v$ f8 {: z9 H% [- Y. iThe amorous women always get drunk by desolation.8 x5 y, ]" N5 C/ a- b
Why can`t I take it easy?3 `: I( D! z+ B8 `1 H* R5 ], J0 V) P
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!$ ~/ ~! E' @/ ~" s1 N0 ~) o
When the quiet night comes
/ b. x1 R7 ]$ T3 t; q$ q, v2 cyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.: }: X9 F! C: z. B- z/ e& O
The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.! C. J" Z/ ^7 u( t) |5 D0 s
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,1 u% P2 s: M9 T/ t
light the dark corner in my mind.1 h0 T# j% \4 v& o0 o5 G; a
I feel a bit of cozy.# s6 S1 `" J. \0 {6 o( b
The deep attached to you in a twinkling" g! L8 o; N5 g% P7 E
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
) L/ s2 J% D+ v$ o2 F7 HI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,& N. l5 c8 x$ W4 R+ b6 ^* u. t
but accompanying with the time passed
# m, A! s# g1 F' q! c' S; O. wI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,9 J/ O( o5 r" a' F, b9 v
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
8 h1 V' }+ s/ j' t& N1 f6 Y3 s/ kWithout asking if you like me or if I like you
8 b7 y7 _; [7 ^only feel gracious for your existing,) i! `$ r3 X2 p) ]! A' l
onlt want to do something for you.; {' A! d$ @: n% V
Every time when you meet me
9 w1 W) n: U" k: Q5 qthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,* l7 a8 `( s* {1 @6 b
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere8 W [: @/ n. @1 u6 S5 k
That live in my heart.) S, v, C! c, T4 ^6 b; B6 g6 r# Y
Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
7 `8 m2 W7 G, G/ R+ qEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice* r$ k; d2 s3 J8 L' z# \) {. u
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.3 S, c* R1 W3 P, b3 `2 {
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land3 l- ?3 b0 k, d1 y" p- K" D5 n m
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you., q6 I) B* s+ H3 M* Q0 P
Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
0 C8 E/ V9 P9 q# Respecially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.0 u& ?& c/ q- `* f+ d) R2 @% }
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
5 @ ~' |# s i# e' C2 u+ d3 Conly waiting for you quietly
# B9 q0 ]+ C9 I9 Xjust let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
% V! h* |' e8 G) OI really want to ramble in the small rain with you
1 |) v9 O4 S) v% mand enjoy the rain washing together
' L. J* w! Z" o* W4 e% h3 \/ Mor rush to a film
2 _ m, |$ \4 _6 z% Vor listen to a music quietly.
6 I1 @2 Z6 K# S" U" q& o5 M' p: g9 h/ aWhom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
5 n" S% a. c* Z$ v5 _If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,6 P1 j J3 a3 j& r& }
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
, }& z( R0 w( G/ G$ m+ sThat is enough.9 i5 j+ ~' P# Y- Z: b4 c
Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
: p, k+ N/ ~( X$ ffinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,; {8 {" C6 U' o
the same as my missing.
! d2 L8 b$ x. @! C4 k; dIt comes a little bit of verdure.
" }& q) Z; W/ P; o8 R# XIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
& N1 A' l* f0 u- L0 K7 m2 ~! g. I* qthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.& j T. P6 c$ P d% F8 ~) ?
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.3 ~/ _; N5 E0 e! F+ ?0 P4 `, n/ K
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.0 c: {' G' t7 `4 ?- W# y Z; a) m
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,, z% c E: ] o8 ^' p2 w( X
then I will have all care and ardor. v. y7 [; U6 {9 w) w% K% j- O9 l
Shall we walk arm in arm?
; S3 z u R( }5 o呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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