锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

4 f! c8 o. C' t' ]　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

0 b5 @1 v  ?) r, y　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

: n. j# o5 \9 c. r1 E3 Y) n* y0 A　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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' S: D0 z/ {) x8 B3 f7 U　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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9 k' _9 _8 s5 C, h: M& P　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

- b8 ?, u) a0 H1 u) n  V　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

& V" k8 s# S% @# ?5 F- r9 p　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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- v4 x' k% K, k　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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7 D& {& ?8 s7 l1 m8 E　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

' D' u7 ?, S( y- @0 H　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

3 P4 j; L, J: |# L: j( e　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

/ }' ]; Y7 Y6 x) ^' `' c# q, t　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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+ Q2 v3 m/ t8 i　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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, r% P, x, L/ Y$ c' s　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

7 ]: Q; i* _/ B# S/ c4 L) W　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

* ^, {, }9 i' Y1 l, t　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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4 a, l5 z7 E. f　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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. t; Y: K2 ?$ R# y" h　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

+ o3 L7 V& r- E$ M& Z9 g# C) C; q　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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* U3 [4 ~) b3 I8 P　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

/ h! l+ K/ Y- W7 M5 Y/ @　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

- Q) ]1 R! P- B# s) w( M8 X　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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' E: S) P/ M$ [9 s! p　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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; C3 K6 }+ z* \$ L- S8 S" x　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

/ E* q0 E4 }4 l/ o% T　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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) [1 }9 k7 [4 s　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

% q1 J8 h4 C" z$ W. t  s　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

  ~$ y6 p' J9 S  n# T! U　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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+ B3 k0 b9 J' p+ p　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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5 E7 e$ c! V* o9 H  S　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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& \" c0 e' _& K$ o. V　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

$ U9 l9 @* L+ b　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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/ E6 q* c2 t2 M% u　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

" C  o. m: f" p% _! z　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

6 S( [1 |' K, p( R9 V6 P　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

8 r& q4 |' K9 Z　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

9 P0 [1 R8 E# ?0 R+ W' y' i　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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5 _# v3 A  `/ Q　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

. b. l- L1 h7 {% v. ^　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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- v3 D4 P3 f) i  y: n5 E7 f2 s6 L9 H　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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. {2 L4 c, l7 |2 {+ z1 b2 t. z/ F: i　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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( z5 Y) y4 H" z+ C7 ^　　38. No one knows all the things.

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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

: O$ Y* y, O* `7 `+ @* v　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

/ F0 E: N4 x. w6 _2 t: v/ T　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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" L* E5 E, E0 {' Y6 [8 v$ c　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

8 G2 K- [0 Y! G' `- h3 d( F6 s　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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$ ?$ L1 N) r* u% s! N4 I: t　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

, x: T; u/ I, ?- h8 {# i9 d# @" {( V　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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. }8 S; Z' R# [* Y) G' U' _　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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% l5 l' I) Z5 C　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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8 P6 j  S7 @% ?' E6 M8 R! D　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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) `% L9 v: P8 @' \  @  a6 p- U　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

9 }! a, H: S9 R# N( D' a$ Q# g　　50. I felt alone.

/ q" ~/ H" F6 p1 J0 l　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka