锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

- r9 S3 p% x# I, c& u) l　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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& R, N; ~  v  O! }+ X6 g  m" }　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

7 p9 s% s) \$ ~1 W( a) _　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

' w+ I9 T5 b2 q# O* j* v) q　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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6 v+ k/ [3 B) R7 W　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

# q0 i6 c  k! ^: `2 D7 l6 L　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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* H+ [+ j/ p% Y  z* v1 g　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

+ H' Z+ D7 R6 h3 Z! c, i* D5 a　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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0 {: m. E2 R$ s5 P# @% P, L5 M, D　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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' L3 D& |( p  K7 h4 ], _3 k8 u4 v6 D　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

6 V4 Z( `. @0 N7 V　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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* X' U2 w) [" v# K　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

; T3 B6 ^' Z) `5 u9 Z　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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# t; u" \2 p7 ?4 y# r　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

) y5 @  f6 O' r# [　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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7 o) D/ {1 t' A6 ^+ r1 Z/ W. w　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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( R8 H6 y3 D; H: c( r( i! S　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

- ^* T4 `" M! W. I  K　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

6 U1 B. _' r/ g# O: L) _　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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+ z& u' i6 ?  w　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

; R! f" H! f" Y5 }$ \, n1 U　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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( f3 D2 x8 E0 q$ L　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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+ ?: G+ `- G% m/ Q, X  e/ y　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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( m- W4 t) F/ U0 s6 ]" q9 `4 o# O　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

3 z, w3 j& w1 O7 x" z' o. o! p　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

" Z' t2 m" z) h　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

8 ?9 o, @* x+ w1 x3 v/ ?　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

( g. E, R$ j9 r  w( q　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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& u: D9 w: A4 {; u　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

1 Y! `( f, K2 r5 ^4 R　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

4 i0 S  U- X5 `7 O0 B　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

) J6 z8 s* w* f　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

; x  \% x) C7 u' J　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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+ ^6 I/ K6 o6 @　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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( x; ~0 H: B, _! \% j/ }　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

4 d  t! q$ a: t9 z( i# {4 r* w/ l　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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' O1 V1 F9 p" v, q- B: e. |/ f$ f% T9 |　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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9 y( o0 r( K* t! W, R: w4 z" ?　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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$ D6 b. t0 U$ m& E　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

1 Q8 ?$ d* \! Q# l　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka