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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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0 }$ Q7 [2 E9 u3 r 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization. , G, D; Q7 `/ g0 ]$ M
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2. For example, you work in a big factory. / W& S' w& A+ g( T; d! T
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3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 4 q D& \" `# Q. l. O' J
0 J" {" b& ` [# ^! S2 { 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. % w. K6 F6 P/ ` B- `* z4 ?
% m( h8 ~. F5 D7 U1 W, v# y' r0 P 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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' K# X" o2 l3 B( |6 J 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 2 e1 w# k8 F! Y# q$ Y( H
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. : |, r+ X& I* @) I0 e6 ?
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6. Their brain is still very young.
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改进: They are still immature.
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( X/ O: I: R, [0 A 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. , `, q4 q; J2 I8 G7 p3 [; m
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. 3 H# y- P& f9 g" }0 ^
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. ' ~7 \, L4 {% g9 K
- C- o3 J: f0 x2 E& K( n& o, T% ] 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. N4 \/ {$ z+ g. h6 n
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改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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/ ~1 X M" J* a5 n0 i" Z$ V 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 2 t& G% G6 y; V0 L
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 2 a+ t$ i2 t& u: f) F" D1 E9 g
9 A* m# A: L( q: E2 I 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. + V) M0 e( E/ n' h! p# }
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改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 7 L+ Z% }, [5 {7 v4 q
! n) n" O2 F; O& F4 m 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. $ |$ I# R) d0 ]5 D# n
2 l9 t% G; @ V 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life. 8 I5 p" s6 ?! p$ c# d
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. . x- X4 z3 z! J" G/ ]
: s, d, M% o v4 t3 H4 T 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. $ p9 Y# D3 @- R$ f3 m p: ~: p
, t% F P; A+ B0 U) ` 16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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W" F/ Q9 S# a; ]% v 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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* p* s4 V! K2 v+ F7 O! t+ x0 R 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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! s; }3 _1 z" M8 z( S7 z$ R 改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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& s6 ?1 E0 U* n- ] 19. They cannot think clearly.
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5 T7 s5 Y- H! a# s9 f' H 改进: They cannot think straight. / |3 L1 B7 w8 R+ a3 C# A
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20. Money can improve their living standard. % {- I7 D. J3 b1 x
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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; F# L$ ~5 S" Q 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. 1 @# F. L* n. g# C
0 d- G$ w7 L ]& e) C/ d 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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; g3 p) e- G# h4 |( L 改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. ' G' Q9 \. }' n9 @# E# V
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24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. * `6 Q- D2 g3 R( M" z4 S4 R j0 [
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes. * b3 ]. t, H( E5 q/ ]) s4 u2 {! r
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. ! L2 M8 o' T7 M! D
) ^) g3 h% S, w4 W9 z; B) `& Z 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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* R9 L; d; ?5 n# q/ G/ s n 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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% N7 q& k' s. n: s( M/ K8 ] 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. / t" d; Q, y! v4 X- e) ^# \: t
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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28. What's about nonsmokers?
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% y1 D4 ] O3 I( n$ m; D$ E2 | 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker? ' Q$ z) B1 G Q: {. v, z5 V
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker? ' m8 B0 r% e" p7 K4 e7 L
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30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. " S* \ u. b: s) `: J4 f; _
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# H3 J" n9 S3 }3 x 31. I am not good at maths, but English
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7 S: I3 M8 Y2 ]" Z: d; n2 S: n 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. " h! b4 p5 C) R9 f3 q5 _; j
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? 1 }( X1 W7 }9 \8 r
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4 {1 r0 V0 d) @+ N8 s* m2 b' f$ N 33.It is children who clear about their interests. % ^; h8 \; T( j) g3 v: i( V
" y4 \# @& n: b- n 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. 8 N. j, D: K" Z: W9 Y3 o
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34. I agree the latter idea. . L) a- V( ?2 l1 L* `1 w, B7 ^- N
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改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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( w9 f* p& u' M# ^ 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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! V j" s: Z: _ j5 ~; S; p' p2 \ 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. ' {' m+ A' C. s" J$ v( ]* p1 R
( v9 R9 I, l( P. Y 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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38. No one knows all the things. ' c% B, d2 P2 O2 m
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4 V6 I0 @+ }# k9 { 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages 7 S/ @8 ]; a$ ?% ~6 m3 X
2 i/ w( p i" w# o2 Y. j/ ~ 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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n7 i5 N5 w9 i# m2 T 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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0 N7 [0 Z' \" n" f. Y, x 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply 8 A) q1 p( B* C
2 O, v5 ^- ?) R. J% k& S 42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. * `9 R X. v& F, O. C" u
4 {) ~3 o2 ]# \$ o' x Y! I) i 43. They will learn the bad habits.
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* s" d! G/ D7 h+ m% d4 a( E 改进: They will develop bad habits.
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44. In this continued process, people make progress. 7 D$ N+ c+ m; S1 m
$ S9 X6 B. X: L# m. } 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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/ B+ Q# O# A# w. o; D' j3 m7 T 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 2 }; o7 r/ u. o) v2 T
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改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. # {4 ?: q4 T/ a7 |+ Y* g" M: N) w( C
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3 L4 l3 ]. y- E 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. j+ U5 w1 Q; Y& x" U4 D7 h* T h
) H- f i" z8 m' m: y8 Y 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. Y) {; x0 N" ?' n$ l
+ J" I) y8 l7 [ 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. 6 i; d1 M2 a" N# {/ I# M* v0 X
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. }" b# w9 {' U1 K! S0 }# s
3 I5 C7 ?; Z) u: S 改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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# m$ H4 e% v1 ~9 u. D$ x 50. I felt alone. " @; M+ \# R8 q! {
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