锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

! y, E3 X0 p- o+ r! p' e) I　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

9 c8 j- v! Z$ a9 ^　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

# z, ^! j5 ~2 z  E$ P　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

) U& n5 h  F) I. |+ s& j% P　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

2 K( i1 O1 ~" r6 z$ i: h. |( J  c; S　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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0 ^+ J9 M- \7 D& G& M　　改进: They are still immature.

/ \+ A8 i9 x8 ]" J: u9 {6 N9 ]　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

1 Y6 E: \( J* _7 ~　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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$ y) ~4 D& Z9 V) R　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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) x, O( z" ]( \1 Z　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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' {+ }) k2 @, Q. k' V　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

% H. V) a6 K6 e; b4 H7 U% f7 c　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

: |8 P( l! X' f3 j　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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7 |% b3 v/ h6 f; ^　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

  ^$ I# {$ T) m+ Z　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

5 t6 p( @" @, J" C* C* M　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

6 a3 m3 E9 x7 `( a% I' w% {% n　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

6 m, _: Y, Z$ w　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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7 e7 s/ m7 ]" H9 |/ v　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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" c% w( i4 f& s: \. @　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

, j2 `4 P/ M/ ~1 ]7 g7 w9 K1 G　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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6 y2 s7 j6 F) G+ q　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

+ T  ~! e% k% O1 d+ i　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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0 B! a) e+ A5 R& `3 M　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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% }2 p8 s! Z' d) b4 {, D　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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6 V8 }7 a* R. S9 q; H+ ^　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

' \5 }# d% E- i  v. b9 s: @　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

# K' `$ A7 Y5 k) L" C+ O　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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. C3 R. a5 o  _6 [/ ]& B# m　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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0 k4 E' Q, @1 r3 ]' O! c　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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2 h/ b9 F; ]0 `, \" e/ \2 }/ q　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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5 g$ _+ p8 M- z; `& o, P" h$ D9 P9 M　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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2 V( n, x$ b/ a8 H& W+ ?1 f! x　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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& [8 Z0 h# K+ z1 N% E$ Z& `　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.
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, r0 R* d  |& d  y0 Q. O% `　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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; F6 @+ d3 \/ J* L3 l9 f　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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1 `+ ^1 K6 w4 N4 g　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  F9 ?. e4 r0 u, |) h　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

; }% `2 }. k. ]- y1 j0 I　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

9 e, w6 J) X. k" S+ U$ S　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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- V7 N8 Z) J; f! {$ U8 R　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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2 P$ z( `" V0 J; E2 t6 E　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

* _5 p9 T8 ~! H/ F2 |' W* D　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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- j8 T/ b7 p" K9 p4 [. Z　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

# e# \- \2 R4 n. L　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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+ `8 d4 w9 q6 z4 @- C1 N　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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  ?, _6 i$ K# x% W# l7 {5 K4 u6 s　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

! ^: m8 O6 E! A0 ]　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka