锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

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7 |$ h4 p' F- m  w5 |　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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+ \; }8 D, }" i. Y! O" L: O　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

! x8 h) F, J' U  O, A5 E9 P　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

4 O! L% K3 B7 y( S　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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. T& z; L  o) {% X2 u　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

! I# L" Y2 ~+ L: u- X2 x0 i" V　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

4 {5 {+ Q: ~9 |6 H　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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4 a' g2 }$ Q5 o. s2 X　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

6 }/ K0 j7 @: M0 m　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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! U. u+ X* N' K; |! \　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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( e6 Q. c5 {6 k  o- C9 x# y8 z　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

" V0 A. g5 T5 `　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

* X4 l) ^  [; w4 L　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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' {# R  m1 g3 k- {　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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$ M' L6 W2 J: j$ w$ {7 L　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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. U6 N0 }: V( j　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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2 Q/ h( X* Y# T+ n　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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2 s8 U3 }& Y0 b! c) N1 Q5 l, `　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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$ T  j' ]4 ?/ N, ~6 R　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

$ e4 a( W8 w8 @7 j　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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7 {$ n% p% z5 q: U: ~　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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$ D2 x/ T5 o  U) ?# S1 q　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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2 z9 R' S/ L3 z( ~* @. z; {; J　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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/ U3 y/ w4 }, R+ ^3 _" k: k　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

. u1 n4 A# O* m/ w4 m　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

7 b1 M" r7 w+ ~9 x　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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- L  @% e; b$ @3 y5 I8 j# M　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

1 X2 L6 J' q& V  ^0 L2 {  ~1 ?　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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' q8 {: i2 q7 R- b* a0 _( c. K　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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& v9 M& Z. n+ J& P" D　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

  e' o" F% Y( H. B6 a　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

" T/ M' F, \7 w6 [( \　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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" W1 B& J* E5 j0 j5 Y" ?　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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( N: l0 ~: S0 T5 |$ f8 O　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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( G2 z$ a9 y% d5 g: |　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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0 x# M. C0 V  S( Z2 k5 j2 `1 G　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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! c2 f  O7 V# l  ?. w& C' L% `3 \9 W　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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: J. x+ b  F9 w  i) \3 _3 X3 n　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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  b9 Y) Q; M, ]. V, `8 u5 ?　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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# m/ n  C0 k# ^0 K0 q$ B4 Q　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

+ \" ]5 P2 ]! y1 p1 t6 t! k3 ?! p　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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9 v  A( W4 {" n　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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/ s$ X1 |- a) ^  l　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka