锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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9 ~9 L2 H+ ~$ k　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

7 u. v0 E$ o. g! L　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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; r0 o3 N" ]; e  K　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

3 e0 b* p. M) R; ]　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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4 n9 L( U: h  {3 M; s　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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5 T0 D! s* @8 C# |+ f2 b& Z1 G( O　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.

: d, ~2 r! I6 A# s8 E9 a　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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' `6 U6 R7 O) P9 s( d0 u8 u　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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" R1 e* ~% Z5 A$ y# n3 l6 v　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

: {* q1 z$ U! B0 T  Z" \　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

4 p) M. m- W+ K' k0 k; U; H+ H　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

2 @9 v: h( I; z& t4 {　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

4 {# s$ I# R; r3 a9 P6 B　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

" z- ^4 G: Z4 `( S' c4 y　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

9 r, m, Y8 c7 B, L　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

' [: ~, o4 N4 I2 G* B* S　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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% b: L1 K/ ]" v; h" S6 U　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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; u$ U+ \. I( k# w. U9 H　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

4 S( ?7 G/ h; k# J1 u, R' X　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

" R2 A/ n' f" W' |4 k　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

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, b& O8 M7 @( p; F( T- f/ n　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

9 m) a1 _) {: l# D5 p　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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2 B  L' i- ?) R, O( e! K6 ~) g- Q# b" y　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

5 ^0 @( g7 R1 ?4 g- f+ X　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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- |/ [& F& I! B) d- P" k9 n$ ?　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

& ~0 O  w) \, c4 s+ a" F; [6 b& ^1 e. E　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

3 J2 u; E% r" z) ~: U　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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# g1 M: \% q3 a/ E* L/ Z　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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" u6 I" t% R# o* k' W4 w8 x　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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3 l# L( b: ?1 C2 U　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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: Z# x7 q+ g$ X7 K8 a5 D, s　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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2 U% ~5 R; g2 W+ i+ n* x　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

% S! B2 \+ V1 r) \4 }, P0 S* u　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

8 Q( S" A* U8 t$ o& e; e& l　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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6 f. E% [/ {3 D/ @4 E8 Z　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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8 c7 a! y$ }+ }1 a+ [# X　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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# j0 n1 d3 q, S- |- e7 g　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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0 D, c7 O& w" |+ e　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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' e4 A- k* o. ^1 V/ H' o1 B　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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& H% H  L" l) c$ e- n; n　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

4 Q9 t* [9 e. d" [; n# L- I; }$ G　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

5 m$ c% G# O; p　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka