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【五周年征文】The layer

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发表于 2009-3-31 12:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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【五周年征文】诗歌一首,根据Stanley Kunitz的诗歌 The layer 改编。- G$ X) A- Z! \/ I3 b/ l- r7 H1 B, o
写这个东西就是觉得好玩,现在没法征得Stanley Kunitz他老人家同意了,在此谢谢Stanley Kunitz
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: a1 _: R! x9 ^# p& `; b    The layers$ h- v: w+ e1 q7 e  H9 U$ h% h7 I$ Y

) p9 A8 l" A% W, [. x( p8 g( PI have walked through many websites,0 ^' l: W- P* e* l) Z& d
some of them I like,  a" v$ X1 n7 h4 f: R# h# V. u/ o# J
and some of them I do not like.
0 b. [0 d) Q9 e- gOh, Lao Yang have made a tribe0 R/ ^. S  {8 P! ?( j6 A  F) F
out of his true affections.
2 E+ H: m( S; s8 Y( wI go, I go* E7 ~, q: z1 |1 K$ `: O
exulting somewhat,
3 @9 F+ ~8 O  v0 \3 |with my will intact to go, y. i5 {# M, i- |8 c+ V; N! A6 t( z
wherever I need to go,
. r& g0 o5 X4 a' J% }; k# J/ Aand every post on the Edmontonchina Community ) ]% l/ Q1 M& R
Precious to me.& _; R8 S. O& f) y. p: l  u7 ^% h
In my darkest night, 1 f; J+ Q* n! Z( [$ A& Y- X2 ]
when the moon was covered. ?. e6 B' k1 P& p3 Q8 l; b; a
and I roamed through websites,8 `2 |1 A8 p" ?. b+ |4 S
a nimbus-clouded Lao Yang’ voice
; e# h7 g9 n' ~directed me:
; O9 P' E9 n3 _  I1 o( g# W# X: s/ H% k$ GLive in the layers
5 Y* o! t0 K, ]- ^  l/ V5 Mnot on the litter.  f' E% ?6 z" S$ U
Though I lack the art ' u3 G- \- w+ R; n* j
to decipher it,+ h4 e* C$ _' ]: U( t; D+ f" r9 ?, J
no doubt the next chaper, e; c. b6 G) h  q0 q
in my book of transformations/ t8 B$ m0 I. L7 Q
is already written.1 Z6 {1 X# A( `5 W" o0 H& Q. b
I love to live with Edmontonchina Community.
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原文在此:
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The Layers
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  z9 i/ C8 b) M! K7 }, Y0 v2 @I have walked through many lives, " L" H7 Y, T' j
some of them my own, 3 d. l( v$ a4 e% X' F
and I am not who I was,
- f8 ?9 Q9 ?* ~1 Mthough some principle of being ' Y4 q; a4 `3 D0 z
abides, from which I struggle 3 U" v' d% C1 _! r
not to stray.
# `& B( Z! f( M  E. QWhen I look behind,
+ H( i7 j* U7 l9 Fas I am compelled to look 3 g+ S, T5 _7 _+ f# \  F/ I
before I can gather strength
4 f! |% c7 Z( m0 L# ?7 Gto proceed on my journey,
" n) H6 @- o2 ZI see the milestones dwindling + e5 p5 t1 t: r! G) y. x* }( t. }
toward the horizon
% a: M% f7 A8 @2 X$ j; eand the slow fires trailing
5 d4 C! B) x4 T' Q& z$ Ofrom the abandoned camp-sites,
+ N0 e5 Y% a, B" G: vover which scavenger angels 6 N& w" K2 Y, t; x5 @, }. ~. H
wheel on heavy wings.
, j3 |" i8 r5 G1 S# z: IOh, I have made myself a tribe
/ {9 b1 S7 @3 m# P- w/ [out of my true affections,
. h9 M5 P& j3 N' qand my tribe is scattered! : I- ?+ b/ J: I/ `7 m. G2 v0 F
How shall the heart be reconciled 0 p. b: p. M  x' s9 }
to its feast of losses?
- M7 O9 h4 X" Y1 NIn a rising wind , m7 P8 i+ N/ o# Y2 p
the manic dust of my friends,
8 J) k9 C  i" w0 E% @those who fell along the way,
% n7 u1 P7 G1 L8 q3 o& u6 ybitterly stings my face. . s8 x* ]) X- e$ W& ?0 M  ]: Z
Yet I turn, I turn,
( V( V: S. A2 C% |6 Y. iexulting somewhat,
5 _9 ^! g9 C6 q, C  B/ g" _with my will intact to go
! M5 L$ ?5 o/ H; x; n( T+ m8 t1 nwhereever I need to go,
2 B% X, j  l9 X! d# Mand every stone on the road
% ]7 q" X- M; ]precious to me.
- A: O: U8 }+ o) `In my darkest night, % O5 a9 p* ?* O9 |1 B: Z2 J! t
when the moon was covered
- Q9 T+ [. l" f9 O% hand I roamed through wreckage,   @) U' B% ~; T0 O6 A% }
a nimbus-clouded voice
. p& G' `0 G1 f2 E' p3 c" K% wdirected me:
3 v- E) c4 l3 a7 n# E  N"Live in the layers, * V$ r  h" N, E# Z7 B
not on the litter." 4 y' f) e9 E  n) j
Though I lack the art
9 O+ _' v6 |0 z, D5 |  uto decipher it,
1 |* e  s: {9 G, K* Dno doubt the next chapter , l; E( M. x+ N1 x' ~3 p
in my book of transformations : h! R" \2 Z  D3 u
is already written. * Y! l& Y; k! ~3 H
I am not done with my changes.  Z6 p# n0 Z5 D
—Stanley Kunitz
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[ 本帖最后由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 13:31 编辑 ]
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-31 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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发表于 2009-3-31 18:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵
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发表于 2009-3-31 19:34 | 显示全部楼层
这篇征文好强.
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发表于 2009-3-31 21:58 | 显示全部楼层
好诗,送花—— 一句也不认识,只知道有老杨,还有他的中文网~~~~~~~
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发表于 2009-4-1 10:14 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 小熊之家 于 2009-3-31 19:38 发表 9 K2 ?, b1 `  Z! d# C
你如果用杨氏英语写成,估计老杨就能看懂了,呵呵

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老杨已经精通除了杨氏英语的英语了。
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发表于 2009-4-1 20:47 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 betterbest 于 2009-3-31 19:24 发表 $ b: D7 ?+ h* D
谢谢版主,能给点花鼓励鼓励吗
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没问题,送花~~~要常来哟~~支持原创~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-4-1 23:34 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
谢谢斑竹,我一直想把它译成中文,但觉得自己的能力翻译不好
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