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送给所有的男孩子,我的小说:四族大战

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发表于 2005-9-23 16:26 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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                               The War of the Four
% B( R: N/ H' n3 d3 M" {$ |在遥远的法蒂亚(Fradia),一个地方拥有千年历史~像法帝斯雕像(Fadis,一个拥有世界上最厉害兵的国王。),他带着王冠,穿者王袍,左手拿着一把剑~还有一个就是择德剑(Zeder Sword,一把只有被群众拥戴的国王才能使用的剑)。所有住宅都是别墅,但是没有那么大,而且只有一层。整个房子都是用砖头做的~
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-23 16:27 | 显示全部楼层
在一片小农田里,住着两户人家,一家叫得雷尔(Delier),住着贝尔 得雷尔(Bill Delier),阿丽 得雷尔(Ali Delier),以及他们的儿子班帝 得雷尔(Bandi Delier)。还有一家,叫康德斯(Kangdas),其中有:萨杰 康德斯(Sage Kangdas),还有他们的儿子,阿拉戈 康德斯(Aleger Kangdas)。这两家总在一起玩,也一直教孩子们其他种族。
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-23 16:27 | 显示全部楼层
他们第一个教得,是半兽人(Orcs),他们是最残暴的一个种族,他们住在离Fradia不远的地方,死亡山坡(Death Hill)。他们最新的领袖,叫狼者(Wolfmen)。他骐者一匹狼,手里拿着一把剑。他有两个部下,一个叫克拉(Kola),他身上背着三把大剑,是个使剑高手。还有一个叫劳克(Loker),身上背着一把巨大的斧头,非常强壮。唯一分辨他们的办法,是他们身体,全是绿色。
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发表于 2005-9-24 10:28 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
呵呵,狗狗你到挺有想象力的么...^^
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^^鼓励^^
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发表于 2005-9-24 12:37 | 显示全部楼层

咳,不可以一个故事发好几个帖子。

如果不是连载请发在一个帖子里。是连载9请一个帖子多发一些~
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继续努力。
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发表于 2005-9-24 16:12 | 显示全部楼层
看来我没法看了
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-25 07:36 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Originally posted by 玫瑰上的小蚂蚁 at 2005-9-24 01:37 PM:& S2 M9 b. v6 z5 G) u# K) Y
如果不是连载请发在一个帖子里。是连载9请一个帖子多发一些~3 e& ^' Z' ^# [0 c6 b8 y
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继续努力。

2 X( j6 p4 y# R/ a6 y9 `( W" P原来如此!!!没问题!!!
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发表于 2005-10-13 07:20 | 显示全部楼层
快一点,接着来了!!
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发表于 2005-10-13 07:21 | 显示全部楼层
:zhichi:
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-13 14:18 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Originally posted by 宝日龙梅 at 2005-10-13 08:20 AM:5 t  f7 d% _5 D& L, {
快一点,接着来了!!
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知道了,马上来,对了,女孩子也可以看(如果喜欢战争的话,前几段倒还可以~)
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-13 14:22 | 显示全部楼层
第二个,叫黑暗精灵(Dark Elves),他们,是战略最绝的一个种族。一般,以骐射手为主。他们都身穿黑盔甲,他们的马是黑暗马(Dark Ride),两眼,为红色,全身黑。他们的领袖,洛达(Loda)是旧国王的儿子,目前刚上任。
4 N; ]' D2 Z  f9 M! }4 @第三个,叫骷罗族(Skelatoons),他们的领袖莫萨尔(Mosarer),是上任了三千年,一仗都没败过。可以说是非常厉害。他们的士兵全是骷罗人。; e( D4 E# E1 c9 {# _6 ^
人类与兽族的战争是永远停息不了的。当有一天,Kangdas和Delier家庭正在玩的时候,有10个步兵冲进了Kangdas的家。所有人都盯着那10个步兵。这时,一个步兵说话了。“Bill and Sage, you have been selected to be in the army. If you don’t go, your sons will be selected.”“But we don’t want to be in the army.” Sage大声说,“I already said, you could go, or your sons could go.”步兵说。拔出他的剑,“Fine, we will go,” Bill说,“When do we meet the king?”步兵想了想,说:“I’m glad you make your decision correctly, you will leave at tomorrow morning. But I’m afraid you are not going to meet the king, because we didn’t want you as captains, we just want you to be soldiers, like us.”说完,他们就走了。3 Y$ I3 f# U' U
第二天,天还没亮的时候,Sage和 Bill就起床了。他们整理好东西,没惊动任何人,出发了。在路上,他们俩一直在向一个问题,他们能不能或者回去……
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-13 14:22 | 显示全部楼层
Chapter 2
/ k$ d: E; t- n/ F# h* d5 @Sage和Bill一去就是5年,没有任何消息。他们的儿子,Alager和Bandi都已经15岁了。就在他们俩玩耍的时候,那10个步兵又回来了。带头的步兵说话了:“Where’s your mom, I have a bad news for you guys.” Alager和Bill都跑回自己家,把事情告诉了她们。4个人到达外面,步兵又说了:“Sage and Bill has died in the war. We are here because Alager and Bandi are old enough to join the war.”“I know what you are talking about,” Alia说,“You want to take our sons away. You could take them away, but we have to go with them, they are still too young!”“There’s a rule in the army that is no women allowed. So you can not go with them.”步兵说,“But you can live with them in Fradia.” Fradia, Alager从小就想去Fradia, 可是他妈说太危险了。Alager看了他妈一眼,Alia看起来并不想去Fradia. Alager说:“Fine, we will go.” Bandi看了他一眼。Alager并不理睬,并接着说:“But there’s one little problem, do we get holidays?”步兵想了想,说:“We will check, but you guys get holidays every week, maybe every Wednesday you will get a day off.”“We are in!” Bandi说,看着他妈妈,Ali和Alia点了点头。“We will leave next week.” Alia说。步兵点了点头, 就走了……
老柳教车
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发表于 2005-10-14 07:19 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
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写得不错!!鼓励,接着来吧!!
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发表于 2005-10-15 10:12 | 显示全部楼层
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Good!!!
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发表于 2005-10-15 18:10 | 显示全部楼层
Come on!!! Keep GOING!!!!!
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-15 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
Originally posted by 蓝齐儿 at 2005-10-15 07:10 PM:) L' G* X5 B$ L: i7 ]; b4 u
Come on!!! Keep GOING!!!!!

. e/ t9 m, Z- [6 d+ I5 v对不起,最近学习学的脑子找不着北了,还在想在故事中途遇到怪物什么的~
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发表于 2005-10-17 07:14 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
Originally posted by 斑点狗 at 2005-10-15 08:48 PM:2 v/ P' z$ R( D

1 L2 G" ?- q0 [7 c; L9 A8 n对不起,最近学习学的脑子找不着北了,还在想在故事中途遇到怪物什么的~

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. C3 X$ ^$ X8 P4 U 就写到这里了????什么时候能接着来呀????
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发表于 2005-10-18 07:16 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2005-10-28 08:08 | 显示全部楼层
good
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发表于 2005-10-28 08:14 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
it's that a game?
理袁律师事务所
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发表于 2005-11-12 20:35 | 显示全部楼层
Originally posted by 斑点狗 at 2005-10-15 08:48 PM:
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对不起,最近学习学的脑子找不着北了,还在想在故事中途遇到怪物什么的~

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1 ]0 L- b: p* C# B; m; x; B7 b头像不错啊,I like it!
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发表于 2005-11-12 22:33 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
看不明白
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发表于 2005-11-13 09:58 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
请更新!!!!
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-12-4 17:47 | 显示全部楼层
Chapter 3 The Journey   part 1 :  Gimily
" F! O2 T- {4 c9 v, \1 H. `“Everything’s peck up, we are ready move.” Alia说。这时,太阳刚出来,照着这片农田。“Where’s our first stop?” Ali问Alia,“Moon City, the smallest city as known in our life, it’s only 233Km long and 263KM wide, even smaller than our farm.” Alia回答到,“But there’s one little problem, if we want to get to Moon City, we have to cross Mountain Nergo, which means pass the Flame Cave.”“No one ever passed the Flame Cave, the legend said it was full of scary monsters.” Ali说。这时,门被打开,Alager冲进来说:“The horses are full now, we are ready to go.” Bandi也跑进来, 看到她们严肃的表情,问:“What’s wrong?”“We have to cross Mountain Nergo to Moon City.” Alia回答道。“We can use the Shortcut Bridge.” Alager说,“It’s only for Army, if villages use the bridge, they will kill by the king!” Bandi大声回答。这时,房间里没有了动静。过了一分钟,Alia说:“Let’s give it a shot. We will ride the boat, cross the Blood Ocean.” “Are you out of your mind? The Orcs will see us, and we will never see the sun again if they catch us!” Ali回答到。Blood Ocean是一片海,就在Orc Land, 很多人死在那儿。“We are in trouble now!” Ali说。“Not quite, you and your friend can use the shortcut bridge, but not the boys.”一个声音从外面传来。Alia把门打开,外面站着一个穿着银色盔甲的男人,腰上带着一把剑,金色长头发。后面跟着10个步兵,穿着银色盔甲,带着头盔,持着长矛。“My name is Gimily, and I am the boys guide. They are coming with me, and Ali, Alia, you are following the soldiers to the shortcut bridge.” Gimily说,“The boys have to train, they are going to the hard way, which means cross the Mt. Watire, Flame Cave(a dangerous place and full of goblins), go trough the Dark Forest(the nest of the Dark Elves.), and of course, we are going to the Dead Graveyard( the nest of the Skeletoons).”
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Bandi和Alager一直跟在Gimily后面。“Do you know how our dads died?” Bandi问。“Yes, but I have to correct you, they are not dead, they just went missing.” Gimily说,“I was guiding your fathers with a friend. When we arrive at Mt. Watire, there’s a huge snow fall……”“But isn’t the Flame Cave inside the Mt. Watire? How come there are snows on Mt. Watire?” Bandi没等他说完,就问。“Mt. Watire is a very strange place, it has snows on top of it, and fire inside of it.” Gimily回答到,“That’s how it gets its name, Watire, water and fire. As I was saying, the snow fall brings a huge rock, and it crushed on all of us, when I woke up, I saw my friend lying on the snow, with blood coming out of his body. But I didn’t saw your fathers. I check on myself, my leg had a huge damage, I won’t be able to move like this. It took me 3 days to heal, and took me 5 month to get to Fradia and tell the King the bad news.”他们三人到了Mt.Watire的山脚下。“We will sleep right over here.” Gimily说。
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发表于 2005-12-4 19:08 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
顶```支持
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发表于 2006-8-9 18:25 | 显示全部楼层
你怎么不写了?
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发表于 2006-8-11 15:36 | 显示全部楼层
呵呵,是呀是呀(半途而废)。
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发表于 2006-8-12 21:55 | 显示全部楼层
要英语,要不中文。
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-8-13 19:39 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
我k, 谁顶的啊2 c6 b" m  @- t, Z+ \+ [" T
到时候有空再写
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发表于 2006-8-13 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
要不然写英文,要不然写中文,不要两个都写
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