我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
1 p8 |0 [* r- t是十多年前的作品了——
/ }! f) P2 i% j6 aSummer's Coming
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2 \7 Y  \3 a( o' zFaster, hotter and sweater,
8 A5 W' q' M" \3 C/ W" n+ K% \4 QSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
3 G' m$ i+ S, K8 j* V  k+ Z* J6 DFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
& P! A, U$ p- y' E: j/ R- M/ ?Let myself go ---
* H- `4 I* v/ z" cGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
, r# O$ p, V3 O' v: p3 f- |I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

+ D! r  n; P+ Y3 U' [1 e0 Y一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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1 O9 {7 c; B& @! r9 n# C[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
8 D) N. ]1 W" m" d( d$ h" Cbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了