我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
2 H2 r  v% V% ^+ ~Summer's Coming

, r: b# S: ~% m1 l" ]Faster, hotter and sweater,
' s  n" q' x8 I0 v0 r& n& ^Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
4 E7 ?9 v2 ^; Z% MFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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; u& v7 e1 x! WFollowing the summer's step,
/ |$ w, C! g+ V0 ^Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
. d6 w/ t4 T3 m2 y" @' ]+ dWashing my heart and soul.
: z6 q( t+ J4 w, C8 o' y
Good-bye, my happy spring;
; K2 a, N+ K8 xGood-bye, my childish dream.
* u* {+ d# U" i% a7 x  V; O4 H9 wI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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% v; C. @. v' V/ F一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
: j! u9 {* y& q- hIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

( X/ o; ], j4 D9 [[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
  U6 d; X0 @* B$ Y7 R  H夏天来了