我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
, h; Z* r" J, u是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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: x, V. v! @% [8 T9 A! W7 nFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
6 p( F0 M, c5 f& h: B4 Q' |To my life and dream.
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) \1 Q- e# D4 z2 V9 qFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
  G0 e* h; }7 s( W9 ?* q7 ~Good-bye, my childish dream.
8 z4 B5 t$ H: s+ t' J7 Q4 m$ oI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
6 k$ e/ j; X# X' V+ O) H# i: AIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
& q- }2 N; e# p3 _, X9 k6 U夏天来了