我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
0 @3 g. n. y. H- ~是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
1 v, \' m& \4 ]+ U' U+ z1 M) A& u/ GGo to the wild rain
) C. a( z) K7 t2 x* |# qWashing my heart and soul.
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4 @- I  D% E# a$ E+ I; [! q* uGood-bye, my happy spring;
$ l7 y! t) }  T# M+ E8 NGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
; W1 H9 `; w6 {' u3 O% t$ J1 n; N* ZMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
4 ^/ x4 g* }" {- U: lIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
; z& i/ g* ?# ^+ m' @. i  m. N" S% K5 Pbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了