我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
- B( c) @! K: h- p! _* Y是十多年前的作品了——
4 ?$ T0 z5 Q2 G/ L9 ]( J  |Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
. w, a# N, h, `& {2 p( C& _Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
6 A( ?9 W+ X2 ]' r/ h1 w& rFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
: r% D% O7 C1 F: ^
+ G- w5 Z2 o4 GFollowing the summer's step,
6 Q# }4 f' G7 V3 W; d6 ^% Z- hLet myself go ---
5 O! u/ z( A& f8 A0 ^Go to the wild rain
. K! ?) J; r. [5 W# J% j" X' l8 rWashing my heart and soul.
  i- F& C. @/ u0 C& K9 R7 P
4 O5 G" L6 f3 @3 d# ~: yGood-bye, my happy spring;
: B" f( a; c; Y0 PGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
1 E9 a* o) S% Y& i/ V2 SMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
# \- _. U+ a2 w2 A% T- ?: F
, t$ V0 Y. C, H; Y: j2 l一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

7 B/ W' ^4 F' Q" D" \& A" b[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了