我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
; F* U6 {1 N$ b! A, j  ?, bSummer's Coming
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  P1 x; v: I  B7 JFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
3 ~' S$ S' y/ J" p. S8 CFrom the colorful nature
1 \7 {1 U* V7 v) g% [To my life and dream.
6 W! H' ]8 o/ i3 |+ w) F
Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
( s5 O( f4 n; l( ^7 j4 yI can prepare nothing;
& D5 r+ Y6 k2 {9 }0 ]5 {: ]My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

4 I' g8 G' n. g& @2 n9 x; e[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
) [& c- b) `7 j  W  K9 Z. `0 Ibut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了