我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
& J$ i6 D, P- _, B是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

; j  J" a8 G/ b/ D8 ?2 W4 gFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
6 a/ Y4 v- q4 ]- GFrom the colorful nature
5 \  W$ b3 l6 Z3 N4 H8 ^To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
1 |- b6 J; V' U/ GWashing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
1 L# L* o% S& F, e' mI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

: T8 L1 o% f( T  Z一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
) k* |% }7 Q! v, A0 Gbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
" }! D: K! B* Y( n! ^: x夏天来了