我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
: Y; D9 ^; c+ L/ Z是十多年前的作品了——
# [! q9 x, K: F) KSummer's Coming
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0 l( j' [% q& E0 [1 bFaster, hotter and sweater,
6 N/ V, q" e+ k2 `; _$ sSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
0 y+ r$ R, x0 S' Z& Y. WTo my life and dream.
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, x1 J' q) v2 V3 M6 H% qFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
% Q8 ]+ |3 m6 d! a2 K) o3 xGo to the wild rain
* |* t' ~' F. v2 j5 `Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
% J+ P" q' P  UI can prepare nothing;
, y- R# Z, l6 eMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
: K" l5 v3 z3 n/ kIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
1 T/ S8 W* G: k夏天来了