我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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9 C- y4 C' z- Q9 ?- q* W6 n* \% ?Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
% D  E0 C, I$ IFrom the colorful nature
0 J0 W$ y* t1 Q8 FTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
) v/ A% j+ l! K, M7 K0 EGo to the wild rain
& f3 h- w1 ^' S4 M4 P) f% SWashing my heart and soul.
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* D5 S3 H' b" n+ oGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
; ?' P" O! @! C$ LI can prepare nothing;
7 Y' }/ {+ K7 j5 JMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

" j- i) D% k, F6 p/ {& W% [, ~一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
4 ~/ N: j; b2 G4 L+ {: XIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
. x, A" F4 w2 qbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
% r# l& i/ [# A. v$ D夏天来了