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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 16:34 编辑
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井忘川
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8 N% E' J! G7 u0 \我尊贵的邻居
9 |- N/ b8 i6 \7 ~: W6 ^是我们小区  几十户
' S! B  m* U% m( m6 w唯一的元老
' w2 a4 A/ z. Q( e一住三十多年- R3 L2 W8 r% ]! U3 `5 z3 u+ Z7 [
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕, `0 l* m9 G, N
白发红颜  不见皱纹) Q+ b: H4 E0 A
开车铲雪  挖土栽花3 ~) Y- s/ E3 {" Z  ~* s" h8 }, d/ ]! N
似不识  岁月为何物
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环! g' Y0 y+ P/ e6 s# w7 B0 Y/ ^
邻居气宇轩昂
4 d# R6 t* `8 A0 f1 ~" n如同女面朱熔基
3 L5 u$ W) N' \0 n: l4 E/ Y4 \邻居的字. t) O+ @9 p' D; ~
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤! D) n+ X( t2 d( ?6 s

2 B2 x- H3 @, B! n* g' d, O1 [" Z邻居酷喜中国文化4 T$ H4 h& C1 n7 v, m. `
说她属土龙
% T" W3 B+ T, {2 e! j! i其笛声也悠扬9 G% q% q) l9 m. j; p5 G/ ~9 |
那是从隔壁传来的
" g$ J: \4 ?# i1 E1 t唯一的声响
4 ^8 l/ A9 ^7 Y# Q  z, ?/ e那不知名的曲调
1 z: w: H  z! q: x& M4 G) F5 U反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
鲜花(473) 鸡蛋(2)
发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 / p- R3 g4 N9 j) d/ S- V& I
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英文版,欢迎指正:
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Living here for more than thirty years,1 L/ N# n0 A* G* k7 T
my prestigous neighbour
3 h4 C; p7 k/ |+ U: `' i; Wis the only first owner of the unit properties
: x, E% ^# ?, k- C, P* G, ^9 din our community --- 9 J  {* V9 I) q* R$ s
tens of townhouse condos.
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Neighbour is more than eighty years old,
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She has white hairs and red faces.4 {6 h/ k+ O* q# P1 q
Her light-footed movement
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She shovels the snow on her door lane6 m% \; ^5 S/ e
before driving her own car;: {& @7 I2 i8 E' Y/ E
she digs her back yard
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as if she did not know what years mean.% ~6 c' x3 J7 h7 F

/ I) M$ w$ f7 j& ^  }With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,6 L. P3 n# k+ G( y3 ]
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
! W1 Q* M4 _- @0 f/ F' t1 u9 ?as if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
5 F" t3 n- a6 sNeighbour's handwriting- O! s+ [4 u# U( [( R" O' W# ]! x
is so vigorous as to be the old trees
8 W9 `2 _# l* r/ Q+ @' Sinterwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.6 y" w" l0 E% D( v' J3 X( v4 K( x# H
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.: ^( ~3 R/ T. f, U* S2 E' Z
Well, her fluting is very melodious ---' g( r6 K* G6 S7 j, h; Q: X
that is the sole sound going into my ears$ d# i* J# X% T: h
from the next side of my wall;3 V  D2 E/ A, C3 o# w' u6 m
the unknown tune is extolling
- U' k  Y  v4 i7 [% ethe magnificence and brilliance of the life,( t' E1 h3 u9 E" d' i
again and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 0 e1 f6 q) Q# ~. v
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑 " v, w/ {" \1 ]5 Z% M
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
; d+ Q( [( o0 B7 [3 p% J) Z: e- z* iJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

7 r0 `& s; M* F0 S从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。% f' h  L9 @7 d" l
另外,翻译改动一处:
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Her light-footed movement4 k+ q+ G" Y+ T
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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$ h8 v* j' q0 ^7 o真的是太像朱镕基了!
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑 4 z4 |* D! w, t' n4 ], l
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hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

# M, @4 G. v3 X" Z4 O# w* i我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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