天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
/ y4 _- K' b1 o' j9 S$ t; g+ YTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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2 Q2 r' ?  L. c5 M0 h- a- B5 W鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
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珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
$ T% I4 s) q1 lI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.