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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
& ^% N% g0 |; m' ?0 ^5 b) k& LI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  " ~2 V4 Z2 o9 V" k7 J) M
Dreamers
3 Q4 l% n- c7 \) S5 q+ t- WSavages# X% t0 s5 {% s  X% z
Poets
2 x: H  H1 A  T5 qBuilders of canoes,
: `2 d5 Y: |5 W5 G/ K2 W7 ~; UBlack smiths
% v4 I6 i1 z! U4 ZMurderers,
' _; L9 w& y% ~7 NRisk takers,( k$ _  ^+ v  c0 W3 F( ?
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 @5 |6 h+ B- uAs I think of what could be. - `4 d5 h! S3 t0 M8 F! \/ ^
The world is so big to me
# I. B# B$ x4 |# BI wonder what it means to be2 `. G, F: c  j& f
I looked up at the star and smiled ; x7 a- v& v# a
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. + ]' u6 ?. Y" i6 g2 f# F
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。! Y  d$ d- w* T! H1 S, r0 k( F
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
, c. M8 V4 R, e% w1 j5 d顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
" M& Y) V, L; ]. _/ ], ~. ^A poor old Guy;
* k0 x7 D0 w1 K. }0 k' c( ~Legs in a bonfire,
$ |4 ~4 M+ N3 ?Head in the sky
9 ^" ^7 W  r! T0 w0 B- G. `" I# A7 ALonely, with the feel of betray4 B+ T. I/ L6 c
Heart empty and hollow
7 N* Q: m* f$ K8 p0 o- w* TAlone I stand
7 J! T1 B/ T$ Q$ r9 KI am useless to all
/ N/ o9 u& i, N4 uBut I wish I were a dove
1 w1 a5 n! f0 B' f+ q" q$ ?Giving myself to the world, to the fire9 j+ E4 o1 h9 p  _4 a
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
9 b6 r7 t9 p0 q( T) ~7 jI sent prayers to my god6 ^  H$ g- \7 d0 u% g
Though he does not answer
2 l% r$ u& d) ^$ V0 fHe bless me with the gift of hope 8 p+ l  P8 w+ K2 l/ h
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。3 A, z( w* b; J2 P1 c3 N
加油加油,经常写写!
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