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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
3 x8 R3 j5 j: z- Z: QI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
* x- N3 J) G4 n& r- Q; UDreamers
; V: J/ g7 H, h) i4 S! GSavages
& `- J. q$ i( ?1 ?Poets
: V8 F8 [; T9 y4 O/ M9 O$ D) ], pBuilders of canoes,0 h% N7 S2 f2 W
Black smiths+ ^( S% D- f  r) l
Murderers,
- r- ~3 c4 [; h8 JRisk takers,
1 c! A, ]" ?% l  t8 I  }! rMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 7 A! d3 |8 P% H- ~; H# `
As I think of what could be. + k. x, k# X; z0 b7 w9 V. }$ v! s
The world is so big to me 7 q5 o7 R" h) v2 B5 W- {7 l
I wonder what it means to be! z# U2 J, U- [$ _1 f# w& }! e
I looked up at the star and smiled
4 j; F1 m2 r# h- A' jThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. * e, W  w2 t3 s  k" d/ M# |
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
; Y7 a+ r# _, V5 x, B评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。$ m6 @* L' C9 T: ^3 v" j+ d
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,- d: h6 C0 K* Q. Y" ~* A
A poor old Guy;
4 a5 m- w, j0 E' {! eLegs in a bonfire,
' R1 O4 ^/ A: B" s0 |Head in the sky/ ^5 i9 l. R% g" u: k/ C
Lonely, with the feel of betray% \* \9 y" w9 I
Heart empty and hollow
% _8 h" _& {6 ?' XAlone I stand
0 j. |# I- Q1 u- ]6 F4 zI am useless to all
0 ^/ @( {3 x: r- p3 _+ G. vBut I wish I were a dove
8 r  @1 P0 R6 B5 \3 MGiving myself to the world, to the fire
( V% Q+ ?) {, U8 i3 ZI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
; ^5 q- `6 l, E0 y! ^+ w6 MI sent prayers to my god
5 m7 x/ d, p1 \$ ?7 n% kThough he does not answer, [, w& ~" g4 |# `4 k2 ?  n
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。4 l$ c% y% R; S' W! x* Y
加油加油,经常写写!
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