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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, / R( M* x5 T7 z' a
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  7 q' }) P7 c; r7 ]
Dreamers5 x, V, c  a4 o0 ^( j5 {7 h
Savages7 S& {; U( G! u7 Y
Poets6 V: C7 B8 G. S( u* h' @* k
Builders of canoes,$ t: v  T/ g+ N8 \
Black smiths; e7 x( K3 E2 {8 z" ]% M2 @5 K4 \
Murderers,5 o& G9 Y/ N( T5 V! C
Risk takers,
8 S* c9 ~) Q5 \8 o6 Y9 xMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder . \8 l+ a2 ~9 Y3 k1 p  O* I
As I think of what could be. 6 m, w( n( u( S2 z  z' w) s
The world is so big to me
+ {' l& k; _" {/ k! aI wonder what it means to be
+ k1 W& G  S' b- k# ?/ g4 |I looked up at the star and smiled & V6 f% N. b  }# T6 l4 n
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
+ l! b/ M3 X, S评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
' o5 o6 ~3 v& ]5 A3 G0 @6 g) `顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
% I* R' f& A+ X3 OA poor old Guy;4 _$ A- i. W( K* h' B1 G% v0 L& i
Legs in a bonfire,
2 \! c4 a1 a* H  Q0 b  uHead in the sky
# h0 T: T3 ?5 \6 \2 I" CLonely, with the feel of betray
% S7 O- B* q. r. LHeart empty and hollow7 f5 s0 y2 J: b, C  H
Alone I stand1 m# g+ {; W" ]
I am useless to all
) e( R5 W% m* XBut I wish I were a dove
, ~7 I) V# _% p- l( `% j/ AGiving myself to the world, to the fire
7 k0 t1 o& I0 N# x( ^7 I8 CI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
$ v# x, A* n  p1 H# xI sent prayers to my god
8 g/ [& e3 q, i) UThough he does not answer8 Q4 W( y* B2 B0 Z  ?% k
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。! Q, }" J: P0 b* [( |
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