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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
; R1 D- Q# a. i2 U/ HI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  3 u4 I/ a! r+ ~
Dreamers
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Poets
1 t8 F6 E$ P( j9 cBuilders of canoes,, z# Q! T' c: W* k4 c# G: A
Black smiths  j' R( z) o7 F, ]
Murderers,5 A& X* h( Z+ S& T
Risk takers,
# m& ]/ X! ~. @; yMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder * P5 P0 [2 A8 u8 j) U
As I think of what could be. 5 v) {7 W" e: d3 R) I, V( E
The world is so big to me
2 \- W8 e6 }" p- K( p$ X9 }I wonder what it means to be
& `+ ?. C1 }" EI looked up at the star and smiled
; `  e/ i3 U( q7 ^  IThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。% O" H& o0 S5 M: s- U2 A
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。; F# l7 s1 A0 G
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,# Y6 n2 {2 j- B- Z: E! d& |( A
A poor old Guy;6 I' X  e' F5 a* X
Legs in a bonfire,' L: T+ t! ?6 O- ?( H! u
Head in the sky; A5 g* i! l. I. W/ {
Lonely, with the feel of betray9 Y- b  Z" L* t
Heart empty and hollow
; s+ `4 a7 U. h" PAlone I stand  q  V* \" S" a, S
I am useless to all 2 b2 K( h+ M! I( F- w  D: _
But I wish I were a dove
* o. j1 J  U5 k7 E- ~. ^Giving myself to the world, to the fire
. D3 E5 H4 G  S/ D& H. OI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
8 @; y7 I. [- F$ r; M- y1 z1 u& nI sent prayers to my god
! w! v- Z! w  y- WThough he does not answer- |$ I. w* ?! i7 W+ `
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 ^/ U) y, H2 a3 C' b5 J$ B: j加油加油,经常写写!
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