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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
8 a9 d' X4 Z, A  h0 L" I) sI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
! H; |. i$ k6 F7 X) I: z6 I* lDreamers
& Q; W  g9 {9 w- Z7 |' L, V3 ZSavages
7 o8 E, {; E& _2 P8 Z8 O& b: ZPoets1 l4 V/ F2 G: [/ x6 \
Builders of canoes,6 Q3 d& A5 J* N& v, r4 P! T
Black smiths) t5 a0 q& Z& ~/ ^0 K
Murderers,
4 T8 @  m' Y+ S3 l7 L1 f, K$ QRisk takers,- l. M+ U, {# J( Z0 D6 I- ^6 v" q# k
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder # ?9 f, W) W  I) R
As I think of what could be. 7 E9 ~" |, k% n2 \/ G% O
The world is so big to me 7 i/ H: K  B" i3 l# J
I wonder what it means to be
( t' l. }3 `% e/ W$ @4 U9 jI looked up at the star and smiled # m) ^5 g, h$ q
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.   Q3 i; j. k! V$ z  z

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
0 @% s. t+ P+ {评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。$ Z# s) T' \7 b( ?" h. ^
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
% c6 d" D  A: ]. TA poor old Guy;
) }, k: |7 k$ ~* Y7 {) [Legs in a bonfire,
; F+ t; D$ z8 x. y" I& t) jHead in the sky+ x% I' `1 ]9 M7 W
Lonely, with the feel of betray
/ h; a6 T, l( h, V! i( mHeart empty and hollow
7 P! @) w2 j8 t2 i" CAlone I stand
. I. R# U; [7 v% wI am useless to all
2 A/ e# W2 y8 r* X( vBut I wish I were a dove
# c9 b% j( ]6 ?Giving myself to the world, to the fire
: u  H* H- J% I; FI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind% y' H1 j$ @6 P1 a, X
I sent prayers to my god
) @; O$ R9 U! cThough he does not answer' r: b+ v: c7 t& R+ t% E
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
! N9 ]2 v+ L, [( i6 F加油加油,经常写写!
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