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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 8 |2 l4 E( b% ^& s# v6 h
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  1 _8 d" J7 a7 A) Z
Dreamers- }% T7 K5 T& B4 x/ ^) Y. _
Savages9 Z, X2 T# x! v! a- U
Poets: x7 L6 Y/ p, J5 K! P3 b
Builders of canoes,
; D( h: M7 e6 ^; e; CBlack smiths2 e: F& |; W. g
Murderers,0 w; r' |% ~6 @# R6 {2 R/ S
Risk takers,
6 T" s7 m0 K' g3 l. r- T6 GMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder , R& E" X$ e# r3 ]# R/ @. M' ^
As I think of what could be.
( B& c; k( i- H2 U4 }The world is so big to me & i& x1 y! I! ?, r  X
I wonder what it means to be) r/ M8 @/ P, W" O! r% i& b
I looked up at the star and smiled
: O" l6 I  L" Z. }  R: oThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
* o7 `3 \' u) q# W7 _4 W  |评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
2 N: r& K8 p* G2 ~2 Z  h顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,, \% W5 R- N" P/ |
A poor old Guy;5 ^2 u0 x8 x8 T2 M) v. i8 C! C* z
Legs in a bonfire,
7 x$ C5 B: k/ @' g$ Z8 a' QHead in the sky# D# U6 v( ?( S+ W3 \$ P
Lonely, with the feel of betray) a! d8 p$ a/ {! B  ^
Heart empty and hollow
. k" E+ p, Y8 wAlone I stand$ [( w& V% V2 W, ]# i2 k# x; ^  T6 c
I am useless to all ; x/ |7 }/ I3 a
But I wish I were a dove
: ^0 R& K- a5 S, V0 n6 e8 V% dGiving myself to the world, to the fire
' H8 D* Y8 ]; x# |2 P: s8 z7 X. BI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind* C* i* \% r1 l9 m; M3 f
I sent prayers to my god
$ U% K% `) u9 p0 XThough he does not answer% ~+ R$ ~+ F3 |. O( x
He bless me with the gift of hope # V! j3 y  ~5 b4 i; {
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
" l# r# y$ M4 ~1 i' T8 w加油加油,经常写写!
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