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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
9 o- f: z5 b8 W" ]) D! [2 lI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  4 m+ e* ?( X) R4 O! w+ [
Dreamers- o7 M2 Y3 s- z7 `# r4 D
Savages( T  b. p! _2 ~9 z  h' t" W! S
Poets, }3 [' H6 f  V0 A3 e
Builders of canoes,
' w8 Z% d  M" `/ ?Black smiths
1 i3 A7 q3 F! }; h* L/ IMurderers,
( e4 P, F6 H1 q% ^2 H1 TRisk takers,) \6 X$ u3 y( n  d4 h% u) n
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder , J3 P: C* @, D( N  }/ E' l2 }6 n
As I think of what could be.
$ @7 ^3 y/ f5 p  L7 k: I1 rThe world is so big to me
) P6 R6 [" t1 \" m; oI wonder what it means to be; q  A( u: D- z) N- a) @
I looked up at the star and smiled
% T# P: `" n; \7 ~/ C1 JThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。* `1 k- ~/ |1 l% h) E" q2 D! F
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。* D/ b8 [2 F7 ?3 ^
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
& }8 e# \. e& d9 }6 a& ?3 T  e  ^A poor old Guy;
" T7 ?! e/ k. R9 N  DLegs in a bonfire,
8 t% T9 ~! \, D; h0 VHead in the sky
5 @& D$ F% L4 z' A* `: I+ f2 F; rLonely, with the feel of betray7 y8 n. m. k$ _# N- G1 o; a: E
Heart empty and hollow( K, \- W- W8 F0 z5 D* t
Alone I stand
) Z- P4 H; p5 B: R6 uI am useless to all 2 u# ^: ?2 Z  @+ c& _* I
But I wish I were a dove
+ I* W! Z- V5 j7 t8 a! m! z1 MGiving myself to the world, to the fire
: c9 X: Y. m* l/ ~( iI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
5 V3 P4 F% z1 E! L* DI sent prayers to my god
! b2 z* }' W+ F- p& TThough he does not answer. o3 C" Y. T; A
He bless me with the gift of hope ) a/ I3 x$ C5 t- o/ `

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
5 U- N& m+ w/ X9 z1 ]加油加油,经常写写!
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