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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 f- `3 Q  p* q
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
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% a8 |" v: [+ Q! u" u4 D1 J5 s$ lPoets( S# f/ j& s% |# y9 Y' z$ T0 T
Builders of canoes,
8 G" y! a2 T, W- O1 K' v* Q) iBlack smiths8 W* k$ _  Y/ |. p
Murderers,
! T# ^$ y, G( a/ y. _. bRisk takers,
8 m; D1 i& p& v% h. u/ B1 IMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
" z8 e! {# R; l$ hAs I think of what could be.
% o3 R) l% _/ V0 \% X( ZThe world is so big to me 3 K7 }3 K. q5 i/ L' W3 R
I wonder what it means to be1 j9 |& e+ Y* X. c! m3 @& K
I looked up at the star and smiled / R  h3 ]+ j4 X5 R
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
% I. J0 Z* B( Q% _% F评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。4 x- p/ B7 P$ W* @" C5 X% s9 O
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
+ j) m# [5 ^) t7 wA poor old Guy;8 n. N; W, o- E; J$ H* b& {7 h) s
Legs in a bonfire,$ f, m3 h; Q: G8 T9 q( C
Head in the sky: P) G  o6 H7 _
Lonely, with the feel of betray* t/ Y7 G1 T- o, S9 h& L3 Z% T
Heart empty and hollow7 a  J. V5 f/ c& {" }; m+ v
Alone I stand  S" R6 x# z8 n& z2 D
I am useless to all
3 O! D5 \5 k/ K+ [# dBut I wish I were a dove ! S8 _7 L& }" d
Giving myself to the world, to the fire" [# V& N4 J# r5 C; e5 `
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
. u5 x" V( P) `7 f* E/ KI sent prayers to my god! G9 Z( o+ B+ S7 ^
Though he does not answer7 n9 [8 U5 L+ R, W& P- V
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。. X: Y1 R$ S8 l& D8 w
加油加油,经常写写!
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