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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 2 }9 j) [  t( r8 d' i3 h1 y; ^6 u
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  & v- T+ W9 Z/ V. v' i$ ?6 O
Dreamers
: P% {5 ]  t% DSavages; R* k& @7 ~, s9 ~. m7 g, i
Poets
" R5 g9 p0 Z4 |* a$ A2 D6 T6 b+ oBuilders of canoes,' \0 ]5 d* S/ E- w. R" F
Black smiths5 O1 {& M) U; B; o2 S0 ]
Murderers,
8 Y+ O7 L+ b6 l2 c  @0 sRisk takers,
. X  s0 Q" K( M2 P9 }, @7 @8 }* q  rMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
. P) r6 ^$ M% U7 w; Z6 AAs I think of what could be. - R! t! d8 [' l; U% ~; z' g
The world is so big to me
0 J! p' Y9 d3 N9 I5 iI wonder what it means to be6 q' V5 g; \5 M/ ]. q  r
I looked up at the star and smiled
$ J! l" n; t- B. @+ s  a6 rThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
4 ^; r# ~/ L! D' u: v! P评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
+ W$ r% a5 h+ S' ^9 R顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,3 X. K4 i# M) K5 c
A poor old Guy;
# b( D6 |+ T" s! S3 h) iLegs in a bonfire,' Q& C3 I- }6 H9 z5 M' E- _5 k
Head in the sky
4 T+ t4 l4 Q# y* [% M) T' }Lonely, with the feel of betray
% y0 a' f( u; xHeart empty and hollow8 B5 J5 o6 \7 K+ c1 S2 c) ?
Alone I stand
  j$ j! L- |  e: h, RI am useless to all
* k' H! r" @+ j$ ZBut I wish I were a dove
. x+ B4 ~# h! w2 Z$ qGiving myself to the world, to the fire
7 ]5 L& {& z/ g2 d1 Z( D" o1 j! ?' KI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind+ }9 ?2 N6 k  ~- x8 P, q+ H
I sent prayers to my god, ?* `- Z: q1 c$ ~# a, T* r
Though he does not answer1 c2 Z. v! e( k& I( P
He bless me with the gift of hope ; f% K- E* {# Y( ~$ z9 ?; m
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 r* o* \/ k) E6 ?8 ^3 j# u* U加油加油,经常写写!
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