SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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* ?9 l, k+ }; ~/ |9 vVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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) @3 O" y, \5 b6 {1 {- ZRemote starter and heat blocker
+ E2 Q+ T+ T% I1 P4 q# |5 D; _* DTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
6 P# `1 q6 L6 m" xFour additional tires with rims
# k9 s9 N  ~$ p5 ?Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
/ {2 B+ V# x4 e- \. R" n5 Z( }0 \: MCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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Power doors
Power windows
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Rear window defroster
1 A" v# U5 P& N( E4 [, k, o. S5 lBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
: z6 Z$ F* K% k7 c$ BAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
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( Q6 {  A, m0 Q7 W0 P9 n1 B**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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9 R7 u; X1 j# @Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
; K, a- k# w! D! R# ? IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

; y( X' y1 t. b4 |6 [6 s# }这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

1 _8 o7 W( o8 s' V* q2 o* mBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
( V( S. i8 X! G$ A; h这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

6 l9 u4 k5 s& ^! W7 s4 W" v: B哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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, [7 g3 a; g+ K; |( GDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
5 L9 Z- d* E2 l! c  bThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
6 |. C6 y  g+ {. \& A: ~. G8 M  zYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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' N: F7 g( O0 \% L0 e( }Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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; m7 W, ^1 ~9 {9 r"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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) e; y( M3 k% H' |Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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