SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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9 C9 g7 n% L- ^7 n/ p- v9 uAutomatic transmission
  ]$ i4 p9 b+ z0 iSilver
; [. _7 T: t" |" W6 t4 h, ?Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
. O) {6 W& ]$ q. J, y6 m& cFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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! Y# P) B& Q$ a. [" Y0 }Tire pressure monitor system
( C7 V. G- t+ W2 T+ F, AInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
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Power windows
Child safety locks
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5 {# U. y  l" r$ L$ TBluetooth hands-free operation
* L. H& u/ C& P- v0 e0 Z$ ARadio
Airbag: driver
$ V' ~6 U3 E/ D* oAirbag: passenger
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Alarm
Fog lights

3 p/ t) y& L; w) _**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
4 |6 L5 V8 A: ~% YIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

8 s* i3 M. D* c9 gPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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. ~  w1 P9 Q  s9 V. x# J" D* MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
1 p9 w) R! Y& l6 A3 b IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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3 c) n# Z! [" JDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
( D& F2 v: ~# t0 M* h' ~; D这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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% A' F2 `+ q; U$ ~: P/ q/ xFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
; k, j" g. w# Q  ^) s  {Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

1 h& Q% q, S5 K* HSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
7 o* V! R& x7 ZYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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6 D, a' y8 S, S( |, DLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

$ I4 v" Q+ R) x) V% I* jThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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