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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪' y; i! y+ b, y& {# T1 b0 k0 ^

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SNOW1 F1 V- F+ [  g/ w" `) v
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                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun9 Z, C% F. p+ X1 l9 t# n, `$ X

4 p' N/ @' F; E                                       February 1936
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  North country scene:7 [7 t" I# H5 l  p  D. U
                                                                                               
6 |8 M1 N% `$ a  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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( k5 g) C' q  S, M- H7 m, I  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.1 S, t, c. H9 W% A$ |' Y- E
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  Both sides of the Great Wall
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. o3 k% W9 M& i  One single white immensity.
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- E: r* g1 Y! W( g# T+ W4 S  The Yellow River"s swift current
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  Is stilled from end to end.9 |8 f, V' t9 R

' |7 r  J7 m( O  The mountains dance like silver snakes
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1 O7 }2 A8 ?2 _  l0 u6 b" _. t$ o  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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  Vying with heaven in stature.
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- z9 ?: }6 R) j. q5 T  On a fine day, the land,0 D* _4 n! |: S' S3 i- l7 g& V

3 e: y' H& k: Y6 s6 g: i& j4 c; O  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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  Grows more enchanting./ X5 T9 X1 W" f( P; D
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  This land so rich in beauty
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  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.
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# o. d' [& {7 P) w/ v  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti
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  Were lacking in literary grace,, Y4 W% Q, s* d

; q* q( z2 T1 k  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu
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' |0 H7 o1 H$ D( @  Had little poetry in their souls;; t# b* s: T! b( K% D) W: {
  And Genghis Khan,
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$ F" S7 P8 ?9 i- Q( I; h5 `  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,* m% B. X! O2 t, @9 Q

+ X6 t) B5 U- ?  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched1 u( A, I# o+ P- l$ X
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  All are past and gone!3 C7 l  {3 {2 Z2 F' F4 H9 T
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  For truly great men
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  Look to this age alone.
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: M, u( |) _8 n$ v  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.: |. F9 m2 m# c8 z# H" [9 E

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  一九三六年二月
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, V. Z) d2 M5 G: e" c   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽
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  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆
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  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采  v3 e  G1 T2 s8 g) k* d$ d/ x
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  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕0 E/ g4 j9 ^' p4 J1 s5 v' s1 c
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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