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翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

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鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你是老杨的话,你会怎么回?翁不愧为才女,英文情书写的如此煽情,就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的,把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
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Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
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eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge; o3 ?! `- {4 N) J. R' I  ]2 M  U
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此处冷,彼处更冷。枯叶凋零,君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁,含泪而笑。君热泪盈
' q( q& [! x/ P8 {$ j1 [眶,喃喃自语,难言再见。妾心沉落,泪涌似涛。; p4 B4 {) ?: n2 y0 O

$ Z# S; c9 Q, o% j7 eHot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another1 S+ w7 r3 m9 _7 s$ U5 |' o
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.( {( S; Z% l0 a. c5 z* b9 w# G
Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
3 |  q! n# U6 _0 iface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
8 h) C1 x( m" ?6 F2 p3 r8 e. ghand, danced along the crazy theme.* Q. m( V8 T* t5 @$ a+ w% I& m5 J
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酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手,共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧,长发束于脑后,英' ~! Z$ m0 n$ U$ W% L2 W3 F  `
姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转,君执妾手,疯狂舞曲。
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/ R/ Y! [4 b7 a2 wLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
( S, j) s4 e( _. ugreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on* \+ P. H' A% K* |
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A masterpiece
+ R  x/ m4 K. D2 j3 u9 Y/ Rfrom God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together." I, O+ H/ Q5 c7 p' c) M9 J

; K# n2 @, @& |) w) v灯酒相辉,芳雅相应,祝辞笑声此起彼伏,芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁,美目4 u6 w* E& x; n& T3 m. T) ]
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作,使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相' J+ n# X+ p/ z9 y" x: D3 @
近。
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8 ^$ G5 X8 N7 K% uDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
" J+ W4 A4 y) N6 Y7 Oski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a) J) _# i; G2 H9 q8 z3 _) Z  O. |
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted
* _: [  C  U6 ?. i9 L/ i% _my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I& u$ \- \# E' ^  j/ ?8 e: S2 y* W7 a
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
3 A; c$ c: _9 C3 e6 a% hdisappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
2 ~9 C  R# u" [" r5 H2 w) a5 h: M* Zfeel all the same.
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" ]0 c( y+ |5 s5 V# L% x往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾,滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还" y( r" @, U( F
休,但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝,妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹,君已窃妾心,妾当不可漠
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6 P/ E' R% H- z7 `* X( F0 _于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失,然无可善终。妾信某日某时,妾将告君妾心永驻。6 c7 v- l/ {) M) I- x( h
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My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in% x- e/ q) B$ t7 k! K! G! p
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,
" A7 u1 T7 H5 v* v. }6 L' Lyet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow
- ]" E4 l' t( d# [6 p! F. j5 l: Z- pmeasuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
0 J" v5 S2 j) W" Y, L  L! XChristmas bell!* j8 `% Q5 c4 e0 b( S3 p# d8 f
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妾于忏悔中挣扎,不时退缩,犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚,然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
; j" c' V( H2 m( w  R皑,君挽妾身,妾意甚欢,共听圣诞钟声。
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  s- u1 e( }# r' ]) eThe bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of3 d8 U' y1 }  Q$ o& r; p1 W
Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
) w: Y7 ?  ]- e% |4 g$ F- F: Ntrace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
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2 K/ @1 u0 ]4 M" X, B& E钟声忽止于急雨,乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑,黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪3 Z7 q* q8 n  y1 P
而不可。妾伸手欲触,无他,但枯叶一雨滴耳。) H: h$ q0 o/ h0 U

6 N  @7 y- T" h7 r$ E/ j. w2 TSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.' p4 A% [, j/ ~4 e' l/ p
雪花渐融,妾与君仍天各一方
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:32 | 显示全部楼层
有人问过洋人吗?这段英文咋样?
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:46 | 显示全部楼层
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:49 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
) L. @1 O' E* h1 \% z5 ^! }) B刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~

3 ]: |# e/ b2 [: y3 g你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
鲜花(7) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用,即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 12:02 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表
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+ k7 K$ D. u  T% l6 d你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
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6 A& s8 ^% E$ i) M俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
鲜花(10) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 14:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你又知道是人家的情书!
鲜花(28) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:13 | 显示全部楼层
为什么要翻译成妾啊,那么别扭。6 W! v* b" q( r5 m! O' z
不过比奴强点。
鲜花(129) 鸡蛋(1)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
看了这篇情书,偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
此老杨非彼老杨也!
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 21:33 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表
% I9 h5 ~' z, G2 h+ Q4 U% `* J此老杨非彼老杨也!
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+ r8 }& C5 f* ]8 w+ {6 B2 P+ f相信地球人都知道吧~~/ y1 g, z# Q' R* _: _2 H& U: r
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其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”,俺故意改滴~~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:07 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:23 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表 6 J. d( K4 t' D- `/ t# N' N$ b

4 @: m5 t# N+ E# b7 b7 [  o是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
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, L' S3 y6 B% m) m1 L* p我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 22:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表
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我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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9 l, [& ~8 ], G( v3 x7 ]. t7 G猪兄可怜,严重慰问ing~~
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:08 | 显示全部楼层
偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:09 | 显示全部楼层
翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:10 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?. E2 L! i0 z$ i9 h9 W, G2 j
晕.
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
6 I$ G7 H$ {( q% l$ B  s怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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) R& @- V/ X4 D7 z不看年纪,看地位~
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:01 | 显示全部楼层
初看标题,我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢
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