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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% n) z5 X  ?; x" N
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     One day I always remember
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/ w4 E4 j3 p. ?' P  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was4 O/ H5 y9 B' t0 D
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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' b) d0 f" H7 h# H$ I little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid. f: I) ^+ S& I

& ^4 |3 E* @8 i: X* d" n: m% m was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since $ L( w) R8 V9 ^! u
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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- _5 E: v! A2 J# ~4 e' l  X on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 6 m# f0 ?! u6 H+ `( I  R1 N

2 R' Y2 Y% q2 |7 }8 n- Cfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.3 P# G; n6 o( }
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!# C8 \0 ]& q; q. |9 j
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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