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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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% q1 p& M/ |" ^: y$ m  @; \/ ]+ h little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,! Y1 R  o' |' {2 h1 R

3 b+ i( K& s" a2 f every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing. J! V7 h1 t+ C0 @. B

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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 6 ]; l7 ^( I6 D8 m+ H$ i$ Q+ B* T
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
, q( H+ |6 P6 n% Cwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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