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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember  Z' k6 c: l9 K) g3 z9 v

+ ?7 r9 f; x9 ^% A0 Z& t# u  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was1 R+ d8 ^1 ^* ?2 P/ H
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to" e! F$ ?$ U, u3 F* x5 N: B( \
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my$ @" ?& f( E1 a" w
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,: F& B/ C4 M& ?  M2 [/ }

# B" c% [  Y4 I+ f  T7 i1 i# }) } every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid# k5 @. A( T1 B  p

$ M2 W- k6 R! D' ?* N! t was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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- B6 @! |/ X5 S8 I1 L* atrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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9 r4 w1 x# `- B  k9 D' f% l! rthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing6 k& s2 X7 C5 e" D6 ~; m
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my : \/ H' F) f7 |: `% t7 a8 S
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deaest daughter.
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+ {" M7 O8 s* F. N6 Y  G* KAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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, r6 j; ?  ], ][ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
# D  X# F3 A4 @" Nwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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