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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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/ o2 K. a& Y' V% ^+ v; r8 Xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to5 p/ L, I+ a& k! v
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,& a. ]# @' e% P+ C

" t8 U% u$ J' h1 t' y every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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. N' ^# E9 S: n3 P was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since % S6 T4 l. N2 y9 d

  M- T, D) ?; m/ k1 @that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing, y; D. R7 f0 {" |
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard + n4 X7 I! G3 c

) P, ~# M3 M( c) `. x5 Bfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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; }: }/ S$ J0 i9 ydeaest daughter.# o. @3 K3 M: M4 u0 n2 `
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will2 [' F7 G% d! C7 \3 ]% ~0 x7 f

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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!# E, m2 J4 W2 N
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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