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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was) w# z9 ]4 X0 A5 e5 y5 z# C" j) r: @  K

) _2 C/ T- _" x3 w$ cexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to! Z1 V; w/ L" o5 J+ i

3 h  k. _2 U+ @* N3 |% ^2 u/ t6 Y! iput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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3 L1 E5 C, |( X/ m little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,+ L8 x9 @& d# v9 I( |- U

+ j# W5 ]% C4 Q. k; t every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid# K$ |- Q0 h1 u  e6 I. I

- M5 h4 ?" s' h! s was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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% S& u4 Y4 X# q: ]. \0 D4 u7 kthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing- y* I" \4 n5 x/ I6 v3 d0 l8 m

4 l; m1 k4 h5 d9 N+ L  X on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard , j( Q' |; p( z
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 2 q  f8 T3 w( g7 D

, i3 C8 f. n" ~$ ~2 ddeaest daughter.# F3 A. i5 D& D
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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6 U' h! G) b6 g0 h8 `: B[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!5 G* ~" D2 g  s, \: y2 q6 L
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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