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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)& A! D: v- B7 ?! l% S, b6 ~  B4 W2 a

$ P5 p& W% ~! R7 N$ g2 \     One day I always remember: I3 z3 y' J& N, y1 P

) x/ g, c& ~9 j. V3 @2 p  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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" @) ~" |# G/ `# Z: I& A7 Hexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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! v# E$ s7 f! }( ?: B! N& s  ]8 \# _put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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  E, b$ H, l4 N7 H2 p% C7 a little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,8 G" T8 g* w" E6 g

  E7 d$ N% ]& D* _6 ?5 r* P% u every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely   Q, X" k* E2 s- V; h. G
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing& h" d4 m" ~  `% b7 s0 A4 e
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ) f3 A$ R7 z- o7 D% E; ^
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my % u$ }, v5 ]( t1 y* C& n

3 U- B& {! o5 P. A  H5 ndeaest daughter.
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( O6 K/ d9 T( K& M  ?1 eAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will* g! K5 c- a2 W8 v: B
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!' t! I$ j3 y5 I7 x
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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