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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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4 E0 x1 T6 r; l0 C# L2 ?, h' G     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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$ D3 ~- l8 [. i6 V) ]exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to( @3 M1 t$ F; h0 U

/ x3 Z2 m, t) F' V6 O- S( [put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid$ Z8 r7 ?0 d+ y) m
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely % S. x; }( C( B
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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8 C: H0 z, S2 H- _# l# v; gthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing( }8 s$ _/ S+ \: _+ P1 X( E
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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4 n) t  l+ j' Y- g+ ]! [5 Nfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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2 P$ [8 h; K7 w- s- GAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
1 k+ u+ [4 V* Jwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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