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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)7 @* g* T. }  @: S' ^. I5 {+ C' F/ k

6 k9 D4 \* h4 a2 B6 ?1 u     One day I always remember3 m/ `# [7 X# A

& O- ^9 o/ C1 I  Z! G& ]  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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8 T- |& U8 z( A  g$ u! ?put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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" ^" `3 X  t. @# A9 W% S every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely # A8 l( E/ w0 y* W1 E) x: `. e5 `
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since   i& D# B& L- n+ Q4 k$ g( M

; Q9 x( K' O/ r7 Hthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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7 A# X6 R# `, ]1 U% E; o9 S; R4 s on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard # I, L+ N; M- j% s7 f, r  r+ ^
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my   M* H  X" f1 J
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will1 H, U/ ]' h0 `' m

6 @0 e1 X+ F; X/ n& L5 ` never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.: j' ?* [) m/ B  k

; ?/ ]* l! k( [- U[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
/ I9 F% J; B2 V; P0 Q& F+ Hwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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