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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)1 d3 g7 L1 w0 s* n+ Q

5 [$ T1 R7 b& E     One day I always remember
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( D. F2 s( {' t6 n5 F: B: [: c  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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2 W) @( Z( `7 E/ P! zexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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/ l" W  G1 ~8 ]/ O+ ^2 i every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ( G5 B+ q1 I# K, n+ b

; a  t& o) N: V" p, s& o0 zthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing  |5 v1 f  |. ^2 r
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ) b& x# R: j! N0 [* ^

- c2 P+ z' F6 Y" g" kfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.( @2 Y) p; }+ \3 X/ x0 T1 Q
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe., s" v' O" {- d7 L
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
; d- O+ I" P9 K( d/ W( M# j' ?we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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