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I just wrote a poem; D% o$ G4 q( }( g3 @8 F f
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.! @6 o5 \0 _, \' M- G! g, q
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem2 m% K) D. f/ U1 A: n
Thanks a lot!!!2 f' H; T9 J! [4 b. i1 v) T- }
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 2 P( C( \3 ^8 r* j4 W4 @" s, q# P
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
& g* c9 F: s6 _/ r+ Q/ k Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
8 }5 Z |1 n5 R0 n Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
; [$ ]$ J0 C/ Y7 `4 J" Q) d Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 1 Z/ ^4 F. `# ~0 l/ Q. I
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
0 k8 l7 b/ A' {5 j: M# i5 @- oHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday . U2 P1 {8 k# I8 M9 M
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 2 U' G0 ]; \# |' d; C9 P
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness( v' E C k. \. _
somehow I lost myself inside again 9 n2 g F9 q; F$ \- Y- L
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog j" U! m" G" a; ], D: }, B* \
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion# B* m. g5 m% |- G, U
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
6 s; P% j$ u$ D: y; {# v4 M! F6 O7 sBasically, I almost finish this poem' \* u/ _" X2 d( s" q: e1 ?
I am 一个人de精彩: Z4 y$ l& g0 ]: o- V. x2 Y
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything." p- T" c3 U$ E" K
But........
" l. J) b9 O5 r1 t2 CIronically? Isn't it? |
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