TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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* F( r# Y! u* K% O1 E(一) 对立观点式
6 G4 G/ ~3 `4 w5 X1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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# U: `4 \+ |: {5 Y* g- g(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
# d& |: ^- F" J/ P! {( I$ B; f8 jA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ \4 l$ {) v4 V% q8 ~0 Z: m4 ?8 dFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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1 |) v- z9 Y' Q" G. A4 M; Y2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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8 K& d/ F, S. _) xTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
5 }; O/ p- K2 Q0 h2 U! oWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
1 [, Y+ z6 p5 U1 @) c" X9 cFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
7 R3 E, ]$ i2 T8 V! X% Y0 bon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
, J. Z0 _' z' ~" Q9 X8 l, Umoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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( S. P/ \: p1 |" y& Q7 `, R(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
( j: D+ q, T$ {! n5 uAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
! \& q7 _5 _  [" PThere is no denying that…
9 V: h5 ~9 w8 s5 m+ O1 R5 y3 nAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
9 O7 @0 W  p7 [; M) fFinally,…
( `$ L2 \% N8 aBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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4 I2 x8 P/ J  N6 r２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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0 P+ E- G" O$ ]* k) q' ^, ^(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
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What is also worth noticing fact is that……
/ W9 j% V0 {" sA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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" ~6 u6 U+ _1 I. O9 ]7 \( [5 L(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
$ j. B0 V/ J! \% qWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
" Z% S3 \- t: O, ]C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
. y$ Q* _; ?5 Z+ Y  i% \From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
5 Q& V* g" s4 ?9 D* a& f(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)




(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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" ?& n/ b: Y5 c& D# @+ z1 S陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
/ A- a$ `+ N! F4 _' l& }9 l9 _4 e* v5 K% uXXX also results from…
* G7 m' ]5 J& N" E2 B3 c… is responsible for xxx, as well.
. r/ A- {5 W: Z8 c9 }6 \2 v0 O8 K* BTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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& C, i6 I6 K7 m" m! Q* rOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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& n4 V( M$ F1 kIn addition/ furthermore
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0 b) r% f5 m4 p9 PIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

+ C% ?+ x5 p, h+ P6 e; h再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]