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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架" g2 P( N! R! Z, G. [# U
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: Q4 A. |$ R1 m0 W7 V( ^8 D(一) 对立观点式 : \# X$ O; O; F* c, u8 s
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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3 O1 ~2 y/ G6 w( \; ~" c(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. # B5 ~) _" N  B, n: L& r4 A% I
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… & V) {! f' b- |& ~/ q" {* |
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 6 L- H. T, J% b( d
A is superior in another way, this is… / ], K; o* h6 E" U6 N  Y
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… $ a6 [4 o  }( f: m. @  G
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 8 Z7 d. ?, h$ Z0 y
For A, A 的一个优势 - ~  z: w" |8 n5 q& n7 C" m
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
: C/ N1 w) R/ q7 fFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
5 u3 m& h, J# Son the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
: A. E+ B7 H2 \moreover, B的优点2,for example…
# l# l# u" C) b% ^' p6 r" E- q, ?From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. $ k2 ^  O. \5 g+ m0 ?

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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) . _7 c' H) ?( c& d5 h/ N
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
# E! {, b% [0 u3 J& P" NAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
6 `  w  e6 i  E1 DThere is no denying that…
3 q- d1 {: a2 J% n% \4 cAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ J3 w% \6 E" A; uFinally,…
! L, @' c# h$ A# r! kBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) # n* w. n' K8 q  o
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/ O. u: ?6 S) Y" r(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 4 g0 x- k- V4 p' {
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
3 n2 y3 U  N' y0 y3 eIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 6 Q4 b3 y" _/ d- d6 K$ K
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 5 _: U$ t+ O! b: A* C0 B, n
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9 Y2 g, w0 D# S1 F: N(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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# I. H6 O+ D) b4 ]There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 2 s$ x( V( S+ z! x
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. ( v, }3 i, Y# N0 h' h* o
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is…
5 H7 m( L4 ]. @. k" HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
' \- F( I. @) o5 {7 VFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.   j& {) |: R. U2 `
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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" S' Z9 s- A; |( x1 L2 J* m1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. ) h. `8 f! N0 N
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. u: J, K4 E% U! LAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
0 L3 O4 E' f7 ]# Z+ d$ H& fOne of the primary causes is that… 3 \; r. @7 R3 }
XXX also results from… 4 _; d& b6 X" S
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To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX ' b8 s7 I& K) Z- ^! n# o5 U7 Y

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! u' F5 l' v* |* L* a) ^9 J9 y3 ~There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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: b1 A- N0 Q8 y5 z4 R5 TOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
- D" u+ B2 @/ T" c/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
5 \  F; ?3 o; c" ~/ ~+ i/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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: G  N7 |! O. ta more subtle point which we must consider is that… / x4 W7 G' [5 k0 [" H

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?* @6 a4 f' o% X1 ~4 w
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.7 x. A6 Y2 v+ g5 d( W( t; `6 X
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