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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架( i! K# q! Y+ S: S) c: I0 \  b

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(一) 对立观点式
0 `) ]( z0 b$ p3 [  J+ v1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) / _" q9 @1 Y2 l& R& v9 c
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% E( d4 R9 ]7 E- }: s(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.   f0 i& P- a2 v9 a% w+ c
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 N- P2 l0 b6 c& a( SWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… ) Y+ d* B- U/ l: E2 {- b8 `
A is superior in another way, this is… 2 \; @9 C: ]1 j
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ G3 ^( X' {0 m6 JFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ; }( x$ D( {: b3 y- X8 w6 X0 O

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) ) D6 w' t0 X1 d! ]: N' {
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! ~( u- j, @3 @- m, P- P+ oTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
% m# s5 ]' V1 l( W5 s, e% gFor A, A 的一个优势 9 D  K" l7 L' N  e1 v8 p. h. Y
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, ( X( W7 N) u; Y) F7 R$ f# {
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
' s; B4 v% h+ ?6 }on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
7 P: r; M9 }8 @moreover, B的优点2,for example…
2 R! U3 S6 J: A) C  ]9 Y7 _2 |From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 7 b/ b7 x; l- o+ N! d# I2 N1 N" C
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) . a3 T" e5 D7 H( P; c
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
, _2 z+ i9 U0 ?( N5 e& h, wAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
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Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… $ J# r; p' C  o' X: b* n! c1 ?# i
Finally,… ' z" v* L6 t& f- S$ ]4 N
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
: r9 Q1 ]. N, n. P/ A, e) w  ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… . M9 Q7 u6 \: |
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
+ v  ^4 G% C- ~- V* eA is superior in another way, this is…
5 B1 g6 D# \  l; Q7 BIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… % Y( H& k" j! G# w: S$ ^. }
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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- D; P& j! M2 F# u(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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7 d( h/ O# T9 N: bThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
$ f8 X0 I/ L/ A; Z0 g% YWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 5 l; f. C. {& b# [7 n: O5 I; S
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ; x8 w/ F4 Z. Q
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 1 l4 _  o7 ~& H$ f! h% `
C is superior in another way, this is…
: S4 u7 C2 ^/ d* f5 }2 K8 ZFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C * J" q) W& n/ I9 F0 V  N) t
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. / Q+ {9 F6 R1 m6 n6 E" p
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 7 L# ]7 t6 {& ?
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(四)原因解释型
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
( x. B( x; {' k- [; ]+ HOne of the primary causes is that…
' v6 K9 k/ u$ l8 U4 eXXX also results from… , n3 I0 }  g7 u! u0 C
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
: R! B( y. r8 NTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 7 T% N$ t* p- _7 p
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) v# v8 S. ]% j8 u2 ?3 i9 P; ^/ cThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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( C" f- Z( m- COne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 0 L, [& a1 j. Y: l
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
7 ~. u7 m0 g  e( _; k( J: N* E/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?/ k" H* D6 |& l# k3 h9 s: e. B

, y/ ^/ d. r8 t8 V0 L% d0 a再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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) _4 z+ v: e5 h; L! T6 v- G[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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