TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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6 G8 B+ B9 _& X0 B# Z! w(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
( b7 N: }+ X: a3 h' B9 cFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
4 B' M- c# Q. s/ h% ]. c/ @9 Y1 Jon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.



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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



) d: U% j2 }. Y' Z( J" g* X7 l* B首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
7 Q* n' W" m  c; MAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
' D) {0 y9 W7 e. v" v1 BAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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! w3 o6 y5 ]0 d; q２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 G0 U, @: T  ~" {) f8 {# nA is superior in another way, this is…
5 p- R+ ~( D& |  a9 `' f% C: E8 pIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
: K3 u6 K4 ]) @3 H# rFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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& H) K3 [* [! _# u(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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6 c7 g4 O; _1 M  {- s; b" G9 vThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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8 \0 F* ^( `3 B  `C is superior in another way, this is…
' Y8 b+ W: d! f7 iFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
! I( ^* U" }1 ]From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
) E8 r0 r: F+ `5 n( |(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
/ Y5 [. T3 L: V# ^) P; `# s1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



! S: m/ s" u$ o5 q陈述这个事实
: d6 D. J2 ?* j$ K1 Z0 q8 uAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
( u5 ?2 c; {/ l" Q; b+ B3 |One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
4 |( V: I! d% B5 y2 PTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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0 s' q3 L- y8 ?/ d9 I2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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& s% U2 @7 u- E0 M+ T4 x! B- @There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
5 q0 w+ t* k6 y9 P7 a, n/ y1 B. K9 n/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
3 @3 j1 W2 a8 h/ Z/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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+ f# _+ Q3 \5 s) N+ ~In addition/ furthermore
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5 |" o( F; O; K# K" J, k% G) lIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

3 z# i0 r0 a4 o5 @再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]