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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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* ?3 k6 [7 l9 @# D% e4 o% ]% Y(一) 对立观点式
8 \3 N1 B- |$ C; u1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. , x% m0 G4 G; p# @
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 0 n8 [8 j8 o" y$ o! s) q9 b, J
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
, f% w4 I  V8 c: s: ~9 @A is superior in another way, this is… ! D, C4 }2 L6 s4 T
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 h8 {7 Q, k2 G& x8 zFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) ; c- v' g" Z! ~
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: e5 J( }( n2 q+ V7 ]; \To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 8 L8 G+ ^9 e+ `; O5 O6 u4 b6 X
For A, A 的一个优势
' y' |  T/ n: MWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
) D: S5 U; P% b7 @* aFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...   N5 y* g& _' A' r( j5 z/ }
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… ( k, H- H- ?3 a1 |' R
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
! Q" {0 L3 d/ A5 B3 |From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 2 L: u" m5 ]. w' U% l1 T
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(二)单一观点式
- I" N- {: b- [. A* z1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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" _8 Z( R; H" l7 p1 D! Q; u0 @首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. 3 _3 X( W  m# z; N2 P% W
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
% Y1 j0 O. T4 iThere is no denying that… 9 Y+ o/ q+ F$ [# J0 }8 ?
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… & }5 J& Q  q! L+ l8 w
Finally,…
3 f; Q: z% m( D* P: aBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… % K/ l/ U9 P5 H4 g

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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)   [/ k. B2 l$ e3 `
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 2 S6 L, G- _  ^+ \
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… & m! T' r+ A! C
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 7 G% t. ~5 k) d! f: {' |
A is superior in another way, this is…
5 k# j7 N5 S6 ~8 _8 t! n& e1 RIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
* l: n: L6 A3 ^0 h& WFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
5 z% u* M( g6 j& n0 ?, H# R2 K! yWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
* `; e( ^2 s# C/ D$ o8 cThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
- `1 P% a% x( h0 pWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 8 s( E, R6 X8 F+ k
C is superior in another way, this is… 5 x2 h" F2 U- a; Z: Z$ N& o  T
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
/ x, U0 [( q! [' i) c$ LFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 3 f4 z: G% w& n4 n% [
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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3 r- l+ Q9 X* d/ _* p0 x8 |( x(四)原因解释型
4 }1 _% x" [, [1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. : Q  [2 S! K8 o/ D! A$ m5 T

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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 4 Q) r! s* I% H* k' B: T  O
One of the primary causes is that… % ~( D& {: x7 M0 i) S: b( J
XXX also results from…
, N& e; P: x: i5 ?' c+ M… is responsible for xxx, as well. 2 E* Z' _7 f' `6 m
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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. ^3 M8 B/ l5 u. l! e2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.   [# R/ B0 [- r4 c
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背景描述
" h0 w* h3 D) e" uThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… , l/ q; i" [# X) u, \7 ~5 w, z
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… & A2 S" J, R; \* Y
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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; _6 w0 N$ `3 KIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?7 z7 ?3 s+ A) L( d" |# ?. C' c0 H- k

; w4 [9 x/ [6 s8 r再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架./ r, `" \' P+ X; Q3 i3 {
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