TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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: R% j8 Z9 @* m1 J, C  ^1 u) g(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
& i* V) e  M3 A0 ?The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
' _- I. h) l& [. R0 S  Y4 q% tWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ I) L5 ~: X6 y/ {8 c6 r/ i9 O/ }( P2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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2 u. _3 G6 Z: f7 CTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
/ Q; t" v) u" [For A, A 的一个优势
3 x& m% d0 Q! V; m& {. cWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
2 n' l: F1 `8 z/ ]. n& Z; M$ dmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
' i0 v3 d8 J  O9 Y9 [, CAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
% i. C: N& T" O. \9 Z1 {) C7 Z1 iThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
2 [6 r! `: F! X; ~$ z# iFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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" D  g4 }2 {. x/ g& K( `1 X$ H２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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8 C! H( k6 m3 s% SIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ s6 H; T1 [- X) i4 [4 A. CFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
# m; `0 Z0 b) F5 b" @2 v1 kWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
5 B' c+ B2 N8 S. PThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
( v4 s) {2 u- o: uWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
6 x9 ~  h7 k5 F, t(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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8 g+ s3 T' U8 ^3 V8 z9 z! M. P(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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; K/ O6 f: _8 H* V# B8 I陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
" u2 R" q( W" c" a& J& S3 p5 ~, J6 rXXX also results from…
# a% ^; {! A9 \* L# g# L0 h… is responsible for xxx, as well.
1 \" F; e( }- S0 yTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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1 p0 b0 W' I* x! _  N2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
9 h! K0 h! X" k! ~) t/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
( p; q+ C& k$ A/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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  @3 \8 d: \: lIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

, L3 p6 f" i( q$ w% ^7 c4 s+ Q再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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