埃德蒙顿华人社区-Edmonton China

 找回密码
 注册
查看: 1983|回复: 1

TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

[复制链接]
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
TOEFL 5分 作文框架+ {5 x/ s0 A9 F" z$ Z/ v

! l- S/ D. [3 b. p, P0 O$ s$ @5 S: ^/ O! C
TWE作文模板汇粹
4 `, b4 \4 R# }  d1 Q+ y3 A1 B(一) 对立观点式 % I  W  f( k/ K
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) % d( J" g% C1 @! D! \
( w5 ~0 R7 s% h4 [: {. U+ @6 a

1 W/ Y2 w1 _8 b/ b7 ^# i- h+ e7 @, O$ Q- v
) b2 p# C& e3 J
* e) \# G" p' @; z. x1 k
(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
/ O: @/ {; K! F$ RThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… # U  ]; D0 h9 w% r
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 1 E; |- t) p/ M9 `4 e( p
A is superior in another way, this is… ! k* q3 g( Q6 H% X. I* C& m4 O9 Q
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 u& m% Y8 b8 @8 a: S3 z. eFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
$ I* z; `- ?4 t( [/ W' a; Y& r7 P" Y6 u" u1 e4 B2 U, P* z" i) J( m

$ o' I4 _. T! D% Q/ t! P
. _: h) f  r1 g3 ]/ u5 s4 N$ E8 K
2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)   Z. v- U* k+ L/ }
" j; O. p$ F. w# v

4 t6 B! y4 g2 f8 O/ n3 K2 y+ y6 `
; d5 B; w  _# x  jTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 7 R3 W% p4 a3 k5 Q2 L
For A, A 的一个优势
' `) e0 [, c/ y" V) i! Q1 yWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
* T3 ?/ l# {' k3 L2 l# aFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... / ]; \+ e) ]. U1 T- u! I
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 8 V; d3 t  _+ C% c6 V
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
* o  v. `  ]3 I) p8 xFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
2 _2 V! I$ i# l7 C& R: K; [( D8 c3 |8 G
6 _4 C  S. r( k
) c0 \: c3 w6 s! d& P1 n5 u

7 a5 R: S8 V  k8 C  _3 z9 \(二)单一观点式 & |" ?% H7 C6 l( O- F
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
3 q( {$ H6 ^* ~( v4 R* Z! o
* C- C  }1 P; Q) B$ K4 F# F2 J; p& x$ m9 M- {0 q8 i; G
5 f8 G% G# x7 \: o( J" @
首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. ) u  X& V1 M; B4 v7 O
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
/ Z7 {' D7 x3 F9 q5 x$ Z: b% wThere is no denying that…
% _( n4 X* l! Y5 L3 x: nAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… ( K! C# N% C! ~' B# l
Finally,… 0 \: n+ j. c) J7 @' d
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
% d: X6 `3 B% j4 o( c
8 u3 h1 h6 F8 N9 t; T- p& C
* d' T4 _4 I7 e& s$ O3 \% O) }# }. S
2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) * P0 a8 V" p" ~1 {% o
(本类型只agree)   s# X* ]+ h% d3 {
" H# t$ b0 d* v" t9 i# Z& k
6 D" ~3 D- v% u

7 D# }* Y. r& y( Y- g+ k0 ?+ K5 \(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
) }0 ~( Q' r$ u& YThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 Q' M7 ~% C9 M( Z! y  q& m1 b' ~$ iWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 R  P7 r& a' KA is superior in another way, this is… 8 U% y+ Z3 \! z% I/ ?
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 0 Z) ]6 c5 C$ L9 O0 g1 z
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 5 e4 u, p( W" ]( z  U7 {
0 Y; ~  E4 l5 V5 N1 P

# c3 x! H! @# K8 G( V7 Z- I4 ~/ g7 F! f

( H! e2 C# M& N# C(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 , L, S* ~2 J# P4 t8 V) d* X- F
4 f# a) N4 K# g# Q0 v- K$ H

1 E7 q5 L0 {6 L  e
* h  m7 h: Q, o" SThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. / M. c/ O7 y2 ^9 R- ~7 S
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
) }3 {$ H! [  R( WThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
: L9 P  r/ K. BWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 5 O" p& d$ p$ w
C is superior in another way, this is… ' d0 {) e" [1 R
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
, F! f2 J, S: S' x/ v  z. b: k4 Q! DFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
2 N% P0 m1 M5 ?' v( j: M9 [2 z(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 8 p( `! N& u% @- _, k# g/ w
# j* R( s+ q5 |

% \- [; Y9 {/ R( U! N( ^( e6 W6 o1 W
: u" |: _4 |% z% Q9 |1 X
(四)原因解释型 ( v* ^+ ~2 Q" i' P8 U
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 1 z. _9 Z5 p! |3 |# L
7 h+ k, O0 N# F! P. b. ^
9 i0 Y4 [, _" ^
! s, E; y: T* E1 t( P0 u6 E' G! O
陈述这个事实 / n* w+ v, I3 t
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
$ l6 n+ x$ I6 Z+ i0 t7 x* yOne of the primary causes is that… $ C% a1 J& Q+ x) c" T) c( o
XXX also results from… % O, Q0 z) f& V5 l3 ~0 ]5 N! N
… is responsible for xxx, as well. ! p* j  k1 w' F# x
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX * A1 C5 H' h" m

* B! t! O+ Z3 r& r4 O: E" c5 Z9 e' W0 E. K6 z; i- k

' T* G" B/ A1 ^1 e( K2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
# n; F. h% J. W) ^; t: `
# S6 c$ o( j, k9 e& J$ t0 K! Q1 V! w, y4 s! W* }* F
4 H1 ?& t4 Q0 T+ c3 Y
背景描述
7 C1 U9 l+ O5 N; ]6 C8 iThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 9 [+ G/ z5 z1 ^! `. A+ ~

1 T. O$ b2 j; b2 P3 z
3 T. p! H& o: @# f
/ D% g! ]. Q- ?! y4 k. ?3 J. YOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
1 U$ {' y. y1 a/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… ) H+ F5 E' j% t6 y8 }9 U
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… ) a( ]$ j  C3 D" p9 ^* H
7 q& O; L1 P0 e; c

* b: `5 w' x$ ^: q7 e" T5 t  Z6 d, E# F$ Y5 y0 i. N
a more subtle point which we must consider is that…   ^* A# L; u. o0 ?- N
7 g9 C5 p; n7 z; @3 w
) ~4 |9 d2 I& k: @/ n

( P, b% W$ t& `% W) x2 Q8 x1 {In addition/ furthermore + b6 Y' |, e+ i$ d

7 b! a$ G3 ?% ]9 ]# T* L7 Z: W6 B
9 y' L2 H5 [# `, j  b3 U
In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
6 L' B  [2 h! M! t' c! Y' s% }0 V, K. ^+ n) ]7 u
再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.( l0 O9 u. _1 v0 K# H2 q& m
; g' U, l6 |9 Y* Z; Q& d
[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 注册

本版积分规则

联系我们|小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|埃德蒙顿中文网

GMT-7, 2026-10-8 02:44 , Processed in 1.613650 second(s), 12 queries , Gzip On, APC On.

Powered by Discuz! X3.4

Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表