TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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) g, X" r/ I2 p) Z" u! l. P8 r(一) 对立观点式
' q3 H2 ]/ z4 u1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
  t! o" A$ c( j. ]1 e5 M9 E% NThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 T4 o3 S5 j" y* mWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
& S* t' c9 P; [, f" |  k* f2 J0 a4 oIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
! ]+ l& K; j( L) mFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; F5 q4 {  ^+ U* bFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
0 z; y7 r9 e$ A4 ]& ?6 rmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ x/ ]% e8 p! X" A! y$ U% ]6 sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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  j) K! [1 _8 F2 R. k(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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9 @: N9 L$ ~- ?; a$ J1 N  t) P首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
! c+ v' t+ n8 Y( yAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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4 w) L. {8 w& I$ N% F(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
, x5 v! C+ R" k. M4 mThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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. K3 u0 F# f$ j, a" sIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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! j: k; K* m( {; d3 z' IThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
: X+ t6 H0 g) ?% b- K; k- Q8 kWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
& {) ~# R, E  w  v8 pC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
1 w9 U+ C4 d3 w(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)



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! y6 r' \8 C6 P2 t" X(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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9 A3 h$ j6 k7 I7 y% b( {) A6 XAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
6 L7 Q7 `* z) Z, @" X8 \( c/ ?To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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2 E: ]5 `7 x& f0 Xa more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In addition/ furthermore


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. ]/ ~6 [6 Y! `3 P2 D- c4 uIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

+ T: _2 ]- s% S. L* t8 A( G再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

9 d1 ^" N+ J% h8 [3 V[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]