TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)



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; r. q& M) A& V( u- |- N" w6 O(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
, o0 u; g. i5 |7 e# iThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% j9 ]% Z3 O7 _) F) wFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
; G: V2 S" m& Z1 T" f- \" WFor A, A 的一个优势
1 {) u! _1 z5 P& YWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
! n; u4 I" F9 T8 X2 xon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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+ @$ q8 F% Y$ n2 c(二)单一观点式
% A* @8 G- a: a3 h4 c1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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# h7 O+ G+ m0 o( ~* a+ u, x# T* j首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
0 ^8 {& ~6 C, m& `7 S" m1 TAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
( f8 o$ D# V# G1 WFinally,…
* D1 _6 H3 y, {Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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6 h$ x2 j+ u! z' B  G" P(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
$ h" c' G8 N, X3 r& dThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 a8 J+ r; z6 Z. P  O: |A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
2 Z( u  }6 G* S& E5 \' WFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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  b, D  a- c1 ]: z(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
  M) d- t$ K) pWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
' G! s! o( q# f! }The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
9 f" v7 [  j/ z3 p. X5 YWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
- P- T/ J3 x0 V/ ?& `9 a$ mFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
+ B$ Q* m. X+ e(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
- j- }+ t; J4 w. s. T1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
1 Q$ a0 l" Z: b2 j! PAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
4 F& ~* x9 t% ]$ j- M, l% Y6 ?One of the primary causes is that…
7 h# U+ c1 J+ L* F! O5 M* HXXX also results from…
; C. G5 ^7 I/ }7 O5 Z& M4 f… is responsible for xxx, as well.
  j* A* [$ ]* l; G4 R# k9 lTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2 P' b: X+ I8 ~* I9 ^# E2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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# @7 P! K. g% S' `" {7 I) EOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
( i2 k" j. b! S2 [/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…



In addition/ furthermore


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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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' q  w  u8 h  X再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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; I' [) v- k7 @[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]