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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,3 k C! R5 }2 x0 M9 N; E) `" F
,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. ) a% ]) P- u0 h7 `4 A; O! y
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
) a9 _* m2 ^/ k' D* e/ {4 V) {现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name." n% h* M0 g, J0 M1 E
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
# c q% I1 x m3 w6 t眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
. \0 K7 [2 Y2 D% i2 R* x8 X夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
) F: q, Y; d5 U; z C6 c猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
Q/ `) _$ f& v+ ^就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence." @1 V8 B0 ]; s( H3 P! p
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及/ y# \ [- p: f
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
$ O3 B/ O+ ~# U: w5 z; I2 W世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.7 T4 q5 F- J; i% k1 |
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.4 r1 B6 H5 z s5 u' |, a
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.9 L4 k4 L$ k$ y: g# O3 ^8 G
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild. 5 i6 m: C( _2 `( G5 e$ q2 Q
寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?9 R+ m3 f4 Y1 Z8 C- Q' E) K
醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.; H F7 s6 C* g* Z
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.5 Y7 l: }; F @; [
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.; @8 V3 K# `2 b! ~5 Q6 w- d; g
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?. a0 C/ m- r; `( w6 V% v$ ^
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
% ~' L) L5 d6 ~; G& o* c$ i多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously
0 L6 G, e9 M% g9 f6 ]8 L3 ]2 d不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
4 P# d3 L6 v, P) k, V多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, - |5 B4 ~% A ~- t4 ^
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
2 q! Y) @, F R6 ]多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!% `0 P$ {8 W% v# K( f4 w+ U) [) n
永难平息的泪( C8 H8 N( M: h# j) g6 ]+ g
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
; D) N2 J2 }# f: p( P1 H~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.6 Q& b1 d/ W4 A Z. ]; p
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.: v2 T( e2 x2 N, I* I
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
' ]0 j3 M! H5 f. w5 l0 {; [你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
& _8 Y6 h# y+ n% ?* `2 X5 H一抹微笑；
9 d& P7 }/ Z3 @, K一个手势；
' B v1 p* l# D- n2 d3 H一片话语，1 O7 i4 X& g$ m( r
愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、7 T7 m" B; m& N; w% g* I
明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
/ `* x2 w2 t: G% P) m% G, B; G D# m心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
( d: ~/ }9 ?1 s6 l* I这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling, N9 }9 ^, Z$ ~, o7 b
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
' Z8 A# w. n% ?. z# s+ Z起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
9 ^( Q6 C) |, _8 u3 K我并不以为然。( ^4 T" R3 p3 g7 ?" {4 O' H
可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed
; t- \' U, B( t' {' \3 ~4 V慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
1 x9 A* C3 B) v# o% o& [. ~* ?. {被一种情绪所左右，
. p" Q# i, I' }3 `* [& D总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
4 O7 K9 m; V% s1 ?即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
4 w; \2 Z/ A z X) k# T也不问我是否喜欢你，0 [- Z) ?2 a3 ^7 u
对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.! Y1 {" F G) @* P3 |
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you2 { W$ ?+ T% D) ]) I4 U
3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you9 w0 F! {0 {8 x; c0 ?& s
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
6 I7 i ?$ L9 }然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 5 u, O0 }' c+ Y6 G% t, w; @
你的身影已化成一种氛围，
' @: y5 [! r: d* v- i2 K" s记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.9 |: ], _- q) H4 H. X* f& L
你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! - J2 O/ O6 Q) S _% K6 y- n7 s
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字7 q: J) J9 h4 j# ^% }
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
/ a: P1 ^, b9 y! a, [: ~: Q. H* |一种声音，and your voice- m5 P/ ~5 L4 C& a/ A9 k) j
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
; S! p7 v; ]9 g+ x2 N* n掺杂著幸福的感觉。- {( c. Z% g z
与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land4 E; _+ b$ z3 I
象雪花般撒落在我的心田，4 B5 j3 M1 P1 a+ c4 ^
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.' H. [, S1 X$ r) Y2 R7 H% W7 Z
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。7 I: k+ P7 I; x& T" z! Z# q: [
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss8 A2 K: t6 B+ ~8 M M9 G2 s
有一个能够让思念的人，6 O: p1 a _( H4 F/ ~/ c p
其实也是一种幸福。) h. a/ l$ E7 ~# ^3 t* S" ]
尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
2 p+ h/ e" _- r9 q柔柔的海风，2 z1 Q" \$ O) ], I; l, ~
甜甜的夏天。& l! v. S+ c) p6 o2 ^5 L# T$ p4 @
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
x. M# p1 F' m& t只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.' N f5 _6 \7 Q( }1 q! G
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.3 n9 B) }# m7 L: m8 _: C
想和你有共同的情结，
0 a. m) L4 g+ F1 O4 i共同的心愿。$ N1 l" c) P" M- D: G' A
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- b8 y' ~/ g9 z( O) y好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
, y: q; G" D0 |7 o4 \* o. t一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together
) {7 U/ `- q# z3 C; A或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film
. F% _. I4 ^$ p% G或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.
! Z2 I, ]; a( K4 _# g/ N1 J, w『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
2 k1 ^- V6 n# R2 F我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
+ u# N8 Y8 }% G& K! S浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”! E5 [) A0 v5 k6 v) F# m% ?0 A
或是轻轻的一吻，
' X" ~; G1 H: N: _) @4 p5 f. R再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』
9 L& L; x6 I, P+ o: G0 t& E! w* @就足够了. That is enough.
. X }7 Y1 q P. [$ i8 z这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
# r3 ^( _* a$ A终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.1 {" t1 M) `& {& k( e+ H
萌出了芽，4 @6 `( ]% a" q7 b8 Z1 [# P4 v
一如对你的思念，the same as my missing" L' ]" f* A/ k9 [
浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
; V# d" B- @+ T& U如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
$ I2 I. t2 |1 ^能够牵著你的手,4 O: Y7 R8 G# q9 S
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.# _( }2 |& b J* z" j- ^
让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 0 n# W1 w' D$ W& P6 E7 w5 m: w+ ]
慢慢地细读，9 _0 k; N8 q q$ m) J5 J7 t/ p1 p
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
$ `- Z- R9 ^( s& N" o在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me
4 H- O$ ?, m: d. r; R$ F( f我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor ! W% | q( B. V# @: |
就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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