锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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( s4 @/ I7 t" r2 l: e0 N　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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4 F0 _+ f7 g4 w　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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9 E: g! P7 d! x7 q+ k- a1 M　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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1 G* [' B/ X: Q$ x* H1 e  w- F　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

3 Y+ B: Q0 I5 `5 a. I9 U4 l( j, p　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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8 q1 w! l' T4 }　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

& J8 }0 s( N: b: a2 N/ q! L　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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+ ^1 i, @" c7 S0 n3 h! D: `4 q" i  M　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

  p) |; A$ T4 Q& c) u　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

( n& Y0 B, Z, a3 @3 W  Z　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

. K* k, r2 q$ s% M8 |$ u) N- ~　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

* x& H) b+ u. F9 Z, U% J) c/ K　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

/ F! V9 d/ ^6 i6 B　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

* A0 E- J( E3 Y  c) d/ @) X" o　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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- `/ M& f) w3 p7 u; j0 _" W% ]  |( o　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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" n# F: j9 e: W- W* P　　改进: Money can improve their life.

& I: ]; n: i' B5 \( ^* }　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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6 F" v5 f, m: k1 v; V% [" C　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

' z1 {" L, C& l/ Y9 K9 d　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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! t! E4 N  q  e1 X9 t6 g# c　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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2 d3 _  m: }" u+ q% r　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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( K0 W+ F- W0 t' t　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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; D/ U) i$ Z# Q. _+ f- l　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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- c& v0 O) k/ f  O" M5 [5 T! P　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

0 t% p! X6 ~/ k" A　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

5 \/ W5 @  Y( S1 I6 H, t　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

8 x3 x  F- \: m; }7 O1 x　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

" _/ R: c; d9 f2 X4 y　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

7 W. B6 Q" Q& x6 n5 F　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

5 B4 J1 ^$ k6 h  `　　34. I agree the latter idea.

2 C' D. @6 M4 n2 g　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

1 [; u3 g! N% s1 X　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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" r- B8 s( G, c1 G3 N　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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  Y3 ?1 I- v6 b7 {1 j　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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2 ], [% H( q! N' H+ P, C% K) n　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

" ?6 ~+ ]4 x+ v9 c/ g% v9 Q) N　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

/ V  ^/ s7 v) e" A3 l　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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; C# y2 [! c2 `3 M　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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, X# N1 [) e0 j# E0 q  j1 s* P　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

, s7 l0 y1 k. R: W5 ?1 [　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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* \7 f0 s8 P* V* s, I4 L0 |　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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! ]) ~" ?& y6 K" A: v4 g　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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& L! f4 o& I) W) V# `! _2 X  d　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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8 \+ T) M% ~7 q: E　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

' J# d0 |, C& I, i4 k7 U$ S* w　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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! S# F$ q  @0 w0 `　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

) l: W7 f; k) m1 c" U　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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! p, E8 C  ]8 m( X5 @　　50. I felt alone.
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7 M3 ^; Y3 j% T5 R3 x* @. h5 o　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka