锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

0 F! i" m' Q6 \" Z" ?/ i9 J  `　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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- i! ]# ]6 B% L; [9 l* ^3 `8 t　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

( N5 X5 M" p7 p0 t5 B　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

" A" M* L0 A; _& O　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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& u- p( J. v5 I- Q; z　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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5 p0 A0 M3 @  h$ X! p2 L' ^　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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8 R3 N9 P* s0 h, W6 y　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

- U; n% W6 `1 Q( b" ?　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

6 @$ Z6 v) w) A2 {7 v- \　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

8 Y4 Z! ?4 Y7 H" S& l* `　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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, t  {. \6 O9 [6 ?　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

+ \3 X1 R; E, O　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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+ q* v0 H5 @3 ]+ w5 o: T　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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: \% \. P0 x7 L7 h　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

' i2 W7 O/ d5 n# N& `0 m# v　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

( I2 |/ n5 B! Y4 C% W: E　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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, C# ]' B8 \  q/ V! y  ?　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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; b+ J/ ?, d* W$ V# M. ^　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

+ Q! s5 [* t1 O6 n　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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8 H$ ^' G, ]1 q$ H; a; Z　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

( X3 ^, Z- l/ g8 }( u; S9 ~! c　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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7 z; R( S. o% z; j' y7 Y6 u% `& D　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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+ @4 L) q0 d/ S) t　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

3 ~3 L% I' _/ _( ]8 w/ w　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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3 _- c# O/ w# F- i$ r6 j% e5 }0 j( w　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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# j/ }( N) j2 j8 G! Q' h　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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+ A9 z2 w3 z4 e% s6 G( J6 s; q. [0 j　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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  r1 q6 A! @* i0 U* k　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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$ R3 h! F. X% L5 S1 i/ n' \  s　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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9 |$ D( I% e5 u7 U8 j' R: O　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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/ ]: b9 r  A: i# y　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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, _6 D2 E1 N5 I  c: z　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

# i( c. l2 ~; K3 s$ a　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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' ~8 ^+ Z  x  N0 N6 g3 g6 R- Y$ w) T# }　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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2 u# \( y; z, p$ r8 K% a# S; `　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

! |# ?- \0 N. Z# {6 j$ \　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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( @! ?: s- }. ?1 n　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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& |4 A" Z( [, S. R　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

+ [/ k5 f" O% M4 X5 d) Y5 U　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

/ Y! G, }: k% g6 v" x3 D! G% I2 G, K　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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# I, n1 T* S$ m7 Z) y　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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8 O- a" |) _' h2 z/ \  a5 G* @0 z　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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, E/ p8 o$ c# P: C+ d( P　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.
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+ n% _$ _0 k, F. Q: P1 e　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka