锻造地道英语句子

随便

　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

9 `( R; a1 ~3 S; `& [: [5 V　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
9 W" W3 F  q- m8 a
　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
1 x& p# a/ M3 R( [
　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

5 n& X+ m& |7 c8 H! O　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
9 E& N2 f' Q2 y( M4 [5 Y
　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
& j7 e! `0 c6 M4 I
　　6. Their brain is still very young.

4 B2 B9 y3 U/ X3 z2 E! D　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

. K- x& F# ?* n! v' R( A　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
! D3 n: A; ?) B2 p
　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

  c$ l* v) J# }+ \6 Z) B　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

! m6 A8 N/ b8 ?　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
9 V$ G+ @% }; O3 E5 H
　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

' r7 M% l! h: p  p6 o" Z　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
- A' H; t  `4 c
　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
8 f% P( G# b/ m( L4 D
　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
! ^% z5 T9 A/ R$ H
　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
& e. ^: L% D0 L/ S( w( J; H9 Z; I5 I
　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
: g! U2 ^5 o; _3 ?
9 F2 o$ }- m- p. K9 E　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

; n( H) {5 _! K8 s2 i7 P# ?4 v, e: u　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

, \  t( N* n6 z2 L2 t1 F　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
8 Q9 X- L0 B& \  C
　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

! M8 _0 K: Q4 \% j4 D" a　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
; o; T/ z- r2 v- R0 y  k
　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

: x( X5 m8 A1 D5 O3 {' r　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
+ ]) t) }- X$ S( W
8 t; o( z3 u5 y4 c1 \2 H5 W# L　　19. They cannot think clearly.
- Q. X, @3 z/ N4 g" M* C
　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

% U  b/ x* p( |0 B. r　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

: `7 [) ^" [& o" k2 b( E6 @5 O　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

/ L3 o% t/ n4 q- ]" g* R# G　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

- ^' v4 r- m  G. J8 _5 j+ O" l3 K6 y　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

$ `4 o$ Y/ s% B& E. I8 W3 D9 k　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

, m+ O$ k6 Z7 ]  b  l7 X　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
! B: O& e, r8 j; L; [% D. y% y
　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
6 V% L; q' u2 \8 Y  W
! [/ I) ~& S- L$ q$ v. \　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
* ?$ U$ x, Z6 j1 X7 e! T
　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

$ Z: e" z' d! f# b　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
$ D  P# Q9 Z, w3 `: V; M* A
4 `; ]( t1 h) m; _　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

! V3 w2 N5 [- G6 K5 ~　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
& ^/ H4 P+ t, ]& M
( p7 [4 F8 o; y1 I% L2 P, U　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
; E( o1 f% u+ _/ |+ V6 P
& {, K! ^/ E3 N: @% ?+ Z& b2 ^　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
& A! H2 i' M. y& G
, C9 V! L% T4 V　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
$ i; L5 D% T1 t& J; x( b% b
8 S, i9 a8 h5 h, {　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
* p! L. H3 P$ g0 a0 \1 L
/ S9 c% f, V0 w0 Z1 f. n* S　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

: [( y' g$ G. z. B8 \# V# a$ K+ a　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

5 Q, V% w- Z; p　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
* q9 a3 ]/ F! [* R' [9 E
　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
7 P5 ^' f6 Y7 d: |+ l" Z5 r
, Y; S+ v1 I9 G: {' B, v　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
( ]5 Q% ]# q1 _1 R5 t: Q
　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
# L. B# w5 f! _! K# a/ W
　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

/ `! }2 e+ V: U. n4 G　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
* j2 J( s/ o+ N5 i" e
　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

! }7 Q7 e" x7 c　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

$ M! S5 d6 A$ J9 l　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
5 N' w( \; d) p$ h1 q) t, i1 b
8 E7 ?  n+ f2 |　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
, z7 Y5 O" W8 P- V$ z
% o: M. L1 |! G. Q, Y, ]  V　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
1 P3 {) @5 L/ H. J0 |/ v3 P0 }
　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

9 a& H! D, F0 |1 m　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
7 G1 Z% H0 \2 ~
　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
# ^" M( v3 @& S" Z$ L" y  H
　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
" L" X9 @/ N: a  D
1 W' N/ e& `  T0 r　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

/ N" g# C* t7 y& X! X' ~9 y3 ~　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

/ \9 L6 `* ?7 `5 e　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
( y. N) C$ w+ G* X1 l' k% _
　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

, V7 H2 X: @  U　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
7 G5 y2 K& f% B9 g* [( m" v& J
6 |+ ?/ z, ~+ p1 s1 L　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
# a0 _* Q3 g8 Q, J
　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

5 D; I# J5 R' ?# K  W' I* z5 s3 z　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
4 j! n0 C/ ?0 s- J8 j+ @
　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

+ b% o/ u- l+ D9 S6 W　　50. I felt alone.
- a: _, `: B/ `
/ i4 k+ h! n$ R: k　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
" O# `' @% I4 w3 f  ~4 ]
Thanks

sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka