锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

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+ |! U  d5 F& O5 x- P% e& I. e　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

, `0 F  j  o5 E; X4 b7 X& E. a　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

4 _3 l, b) i4 r3 Y　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

8 M+ Z$ v# x1 [6 H5 M2 e5 r/ o　　6. Their brain is still very young.

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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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6 x* [! i9 l. y' ?/ G/ x　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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& K' u; D( {7 {8 {2 l$ J3 n) J　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

& Z2 w: R5 W( a5 o( F; E　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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& X6 [" [; b7 k5 M+ @5 Z3 J( I# n' ]　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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' g6 c) F& Y* t4 M　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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: E+ @  ]# S) ^# v　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

6 F, m. N# N  W3 z9 u: b　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

) k" {. N5 }# A% [1 c　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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; r* ^: U/ I& B$ J0 r& k+ F7 N　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

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+ @/ u( H/ a7 Z　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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* J( ]9 Y# Y( ]$ X　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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  `. k/ |2 H3 j  |9 c3 W' V　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

5 x4 P' }. A& [) u8 L& @; p9 |　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

2 ~# x8 Q/ J* J0 i! f; `; z9 K, w　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

- |! K' m: d7 O% d' T% U　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

( m1 \4 p7 \8 t1 `2 L0 m( |　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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7 j. e9 G' r1 O4 ~3 i* _　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

: k" H* O; a) |* ^0 o3 t1 X5 k　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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1 q& b6 l, _& o8 I1 W% A  n　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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! q( H% o  ~6 s* f, ~　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

0 L! A" y& t! M8 U, ]　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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6 _( ?$ q5 A. @　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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+ y/ s: m. ?+ F+ O　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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: N2 B0 e6 ]: L0 H8 P) J　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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9 x# ^! D- A6 O　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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/ M+ B. I3 n5 B- l. L6 c　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

$ h, {: A3 U2 [7 H" h　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

2 K' M0 e2 }9 A7 h: A　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

5 J% [. o" u. i　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

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' a) T0 b5 Q2 q0 @  ~3 s4 r　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

% W+ \& [) R0 e　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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4 j( [0 ?; r+ K; K　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

1 _& ]6 b4 Y) d% J( u5 x' N* M) M　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

6 c* |; q. Y3 Z! H9 p0 M　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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0 H- k) \( `( B) b+ v/ {　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka