Falling in love! E; e# v0 v8 i H' R
6 D( E8 L, Z' `
I fell in love with you _ a- `+ P" `- M4 Y; T- iAt the first week we met1 F7 b* i3 J9 W' b/ P# |& Z
& I2 @% o$ ?( [) c2 oYou have charm, you have looks8 k9 ^9 x6 X ?+ ~, {
with full of pimples in face& s- Y8 [% g: E( i
As spotting sky at a summer night$ w& }# `& [+ ?* o2 d
They are shining stars / L5 i; O" w3 T I2 B4 P- z + c: p( B" ]1 ]" v, ~6 m7 \! ^" _' OYour lip is so big: Y* o; ^# Q& G _$ u- w
And that’s good for a kiss' L) C# I/ R' m
Your body is chubby $ Z- \1 r- Q- i! J/ TAnd that is good for sex. w- l. ?+ N8 c# Y2 a& s
" ^" W( u6 b6 [% U1 RI was deeply in love1 W# |9 H h; V
Everything from you is positive9 s5 a8 t) k0 @6 W- h. a
You blame me everything and everyday , I J- b) `1 p0 pAnd I think all girls sound like / _. V2 j4 |5 X% L/ \0 ? 5 H: T9 R8 |. J1 MYou could not stand my eating- i; Q$ m. A/ A
Saying no good for making funny sound+ y( O: R+ L: j
I think you are perfectly right3 h% ?8 D0 B% n6 {6 d
Eating with sound is a pig Q. m/ g0 U* {+ M % Q# k! |$ w1 f5 {* I1 T9 HI fell in love with you * }$ ?# Q% F( H( x5 @2 d
Become a fool to think . w8 d }- d/ [2 pAll trouble things you did & V4 j6 S) m. r X$ Z5 E' n' S% sAnd that is the price for love 9 G+ l( y- k" U2 [4 \) {( W : B) P! T0 H8 d6 f8 A6 pyou are deeply in love; N0 ^+ ]% d) E/ Z
Everything from me is negative 2 F2 _( U# N5 `. n+ \1 @1 O"My man should be like this,5 e0 o+ C& l. B4 C, Q5 w- `. a: f
and I am helping you to improve'7 w. b; e3 M" A* h5 ~/ _: `
: A# h4 z& r& D. X2 h# JYou are loving me . Q% y$ o8 i) K0 V, W4 _
or that one in your mind?/ A$ h- i5 u" w' }+ e7 g
My mind is like a mud$ q& o: o# O1 j1 I
can be shaped whatever you want , u) P, b) a; _: y ) \! H+ l# \, [' O: Aunfortunalety not my heart! t+ q0 m5 X5 ^# d4 ~8 |+ d4 Y% D
It is slashed by you 2 u$ p# T4 a+ l: f- q4 rand I am seriously hurt/ f3 f |7 U) g
k( W8 d# h% | P7 i) x) f
I will never love another : z* L5 {1 j! h( Y5 |8 s; ZIf my heart can be fixed
sweeite, . \$ u9 q& K/ N# q9 Ui am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. # B! i6 J' ?3 d B) |: C0 RAnd this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed. r7 Z5 W- g) F p! W# O4 [
& A" U1 X* Z5 t
with the charm,, o3 Y) M7 I' n) q" m
with the simles. % M# t* e/ K- XI fell in love with you o. j( ?9 e4 ^ V$ p4 @& b: ]
In the first sign. ' ]2 S: k8 O; ~8 @4 b+ }8 fAs spotting sky at a summer ' I' L, @* @, U: F , p \& l# E) W9 R7 G# fYour lip is so soft ' q& k) N8 ^* j N; D% v
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss 9 r% O8 Z) t0 X5 RYour body is so sexy7 H( I1 ] ~+ W
And I cannt image the moment I touch u. 7 j0 w7 ^) e7 {9 T# X+ ]# P: y 4 [7 H; ~* L2 a3 OI am deeply in love 5 i2 o! a8 S5 ?$ H& g5 G+ [Everything from you is so charming 3 a" U- K8 i" y) ^2 Y' u. C4 ialthough You r so picky for me ; N" }8 q% [5 O. d
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. ; U' H( C9 T% B# n8 T% t' YBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem - T! ?) h" |; t% Q- x8 a7 `9 y 7 R8 {! n1 J$ j7 Y! z9 s0 h ; { n7 Q& `, _ x' U w+ @* b: \His hello is the end of her endings* ^: Y$ \' k5 R# S: ]9 q
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle/ N8 Y2 h0 {7 y$ I8 ^! ~
His hand would be hers to hold forever ! h, _9 f& W* X' {His forever is simply as her smile W/ H8 s/ K+ C; X5 lHe said she was what was missing . ~0 v/ o) g3 Q9 o$ p' g% E( LShe said instantly she knew! _* j- k d& X
She was a question to be answered" x6 d3 ~9 Q W( e/ k
And his answer is 5 K- U1 k* a/ h9 w6 l
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas( P8 S' C a$ H% ~. @ N& l- U
9 q2 C* F$ _4 \( g/ ~# P0 p# tBelow is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt / u7 v2 n3 `! D1 [ Z1 [9 r / o/ [- ]; f2 [' @* a wIt's amazing how I felt 1 A: A- I, q1 l9 w- s: v4 twhen I was with you9 p8 C/ x4 S4 {: `7 q6 B/ b
My heart beat so fast # r [5 Z- d& D0 TI looked at you and thought7 U' {3 s3 `; Q& L2 ^
Holy Jesus, you were so cute 4 _6 t! h r1 L) T ' {+ c+ g) c0 M( dYou left me without a word $ F" @- R. {( f7 D6 T% m: }1 EI have nothing except my emptiness 3 U7 N; D: `1 j/ L% ^. wMy mood is like a cloud 8 D, _% ? g m# k# DHow could it be dispersed? 1 p6 p" i) f% d: W# {! k0 F1 |) i: b
Feelings bite my heart + z- t" ?1 z; e& f! q2 _( }5 F
You are the right one I wait5 n. d4 s. H' f( N8 E
In the depth of my soul2 d# S' d% T2 g( w$ t: p
I will love you till I'm dead