我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
( a8 o) k. ]+ V是十多年前的作品了——
1 L5 V7 Y- t+ ZSummer's Coming

& I! U+ e8 v, M: ~2 r- d0 RFaster, hotter and sweater,
2 \" T& T/ q+ MSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
. }" ]' ^3 g5 J6 Q) l! v5 I3 Q9 X1 qLet myself go ---
6 `- e  F+ o+ @* v9 Z: Q) NGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
% p  D) ^+ C; f3 X! c( B7 @$ w) JGood-bye, my childish dream.
$ ~* ~" S3 T' w2 X- `7 o, c, vI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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/ m8 ^+ o: v" H- R- e6 }一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
" Y( Y$ H0 B& n5 _5 HIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了