我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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5 ?1 D7 p7 T+ e8 i3 NFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
0 R+ N& C% d/ EFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
; Y3 ^) m% K4 _Washing my heart and soul.

+ b8 _/ [$ ?- |. {4 ~; M5 E6 MGood-bye, my happy spring;
9 p1 a* h, }- X; x2 E) gGood-bye, my childish dream.
4 V5 A5 N; O0 v* d3 ~* aI can prepare nothing;
$ p5 j: p, U5 N* s! @My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

' y6 H9 z0 R: [1 i) S5 h一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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$ U0 A8 R& V" ]' W5 R9 f; O[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
; ^- W8 l1 l% y, T6 @7 Xbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了