我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
% a5 U" |( D2 j是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
0 C, T: z4 j3 `& f/ Y# HFrom the colorful nature
" H' Y" {9 Q  S* aTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
8 U* r- s8 D1 [- RLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

6 j/ r, j1 b5 v1 F0 JGood-bye, my happy spring;
: e# Q  y; E; ^( xGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
7 b+ I$ c: A0 P& l1 v7 K
; W% J+ L- O& j( e一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
; n2 y) l7 b5 X$ C5 ]1 y" E夏天来了