我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
4 V8 a  |: Z4 B/ o是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
: Q9 P7 C4 s  b' q1 D0 g! j0 @, nSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
. l7 R) d7 c& G; e6 tFrom the colorful nature
/ Y5 ]# p7 X. kTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
* }% P- L' I1 D* |/ qLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
" `3 n: K* [; a  @. JWashing my heart and soul.
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' h, ~1 T1 w; R% V( ZGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
* Y, e; f- m7 T" c1 ~5 v# Jbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
5 C9 m3 h" p/ _. N2 b夏天来了