我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
( J  h. ]" ]: n  C$ c. }  z$ O& D8 KFrom the colorful nature
9 P) [+ P: Z+ H: D% wTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
5 u. o/ [/ u, q( z! P& RGo to the wild rain
5 n2 c2 h+ ^8 r8 }Washing my heart and soul.

2 @+ D% X6 l" F  G& v( k8 `Good-bye, my happy spring;
- [, [8 I" V* f; N" Y) tGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
+ h& ~6 \% S$ k, CMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

& p$ n) Q3 ~" C1 _[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
. _& Z  ~( F% U: _3 U3 Bbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了