我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
. b5 e9 [/ [5 t  h8 nSummer's Coming
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8 o! X8 o0 `$ L8 nFaster, hotter and sweater,
& s. e! z5 F6 Z, j# qSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
$ m# k0 V2 z7 k2 [  WFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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! Q$ b+ f5 M/ O8 ~Following the summer's step,
* }1 C) p: Z( ~* qLet myself go ---
1 v7 m+ Z1 S8 p/ \Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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7 e  v4 |% o9 E# y* eGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
$ i  m6 d' _  K) o+ U0 w! eIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

+ Y# T1 Z$ n$ ?* d[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了