我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
9 z" x* O6 z: _2 V( e! j+ ]. L# ?5 k4 LSummer's Coming
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8 s, B$ M8 e5 r) M  j. TFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.

8 ~' h' Z1 ~8 Q5 l" b) ^9 QFollowing the summer's step,
8 i$ W( z3 ]) XLet myself go ---
' r8 D9 @3 i2 O% R, eGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

5 o* Q& Q4 C/ S1 K  [* S* CGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
& q/ s0 x; p% D, Y5 [# ]3 VI can prepare nothing;
' S& m/ A1 q# V4 ?8 gMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

# [0 M% C2 n. P一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
" k' N9 @$ V8 o$ S/ L1 R1 PIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

9 U) V% j( q% H- ^' _$ N0 _; Q& W0 ?4 N[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了