我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
7 T) {0 T6 A6 `+ `  h( W" L7 o
- T$ t9 P" E# [9 R; D0 NFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
0 c" M8 k; C3 t, M7 D/ G. U6 ?From the colorful nature
1 U( D4 X0 j0 c5 uTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
. o8 G9 M. W- ?% J, eLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

9 y; R2 V* Y8 `Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
, S2 C( d9 D/ Y0 i$ v/ [) oI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
/ I1 F0 s* c& f0 `4 cIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
1 s/ Y) c* W& R5 @4 P4 r0 s; M2 I
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
" b' K  ]4 G9 m; A1 zbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
5 t" \. s8 V  B! C0 d夏天来了