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发表于 2011-1-2 16:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
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' B% b7 e/ y5 U2 S我尊贵的邻居1 L6 f/ B4 }$ N6 ]
是我们小区  几十户
! P) v9 R4 W! V唯一的元老
$ z( j0 e' C3 R一住三十多年
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邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕( X( w! C4 U) x" ^" U  i; ^
白发红颜  不见皱纹  [' v; S/ ?5 n$ X
开车铲雪  挖土栽花+ r+ e. a) }: d' n' B6 W2 s6 G
似不识  岁月为何物" G5 ?) d3 C" Y" I- W4 W+ t8 c) w0 R/ P0 @
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头顶英国文学硕士的光环
& ]8 y  c" Y% F( A邻居气宇轩昂
7 B& i  }' l' N$ @2 ~如同女面朱熔基% h3 s& J, e; ~% ]7 ]
邻居的字! E7 r/ Z0 \+ u. z+ q, \
则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤/ k/ O  ?7 d9 e7 D4 P  Q

! V1 ]1 b" d/ f; p邻居酷喜中国文化
+ T: V, p5 z7 Q, n说她属土龙& h- \+ X9 b/ [
其笛声也悠扬8 w, t3 Y* T- \
那是从隔壁传来的
. B9 X; z( h  d8 t, Q) U! E唯一的声响
) O  d3 K! ]; f0 O那不知名的曲调
% B4 t# l" Y& N反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 17:13 | 显示全部楼层
这首哪天有空好好翻译一下,写张贺卡送过去,顺便取取经。回帖备忘。
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发表于 2011-1-2 17:26 | 显示全部楼层
老人是宝啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 22:30 编辑 0 C& j  b) v7 x& Q/ p

, |$ _8 R% I1 b英文版,欢迎指正:
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9 H; e8 D; F' x2 xLiving here for more than thirty years,# H3 H9 g* |, H
my prestigous neighbour
: u/ G" `: J( Z1 a) ais the only first owner of the unit properties
0 L+ E; f1 m2 x0 _in our community ---
! m! q% p# c; @: E- f+ b4 V- Jtens of townhouse condos.( t! j' b6 Z( r4 v

8 F$ j/ S& m' r/ RNeighbour is more than eighty years old,9 q0 _5 x9 ^* X" \: C
magically, without wrinkles into your eyes., M7 M; d3 D% Y/ o  i* e
She has white hairs and red faces.# p1 s/ l) O# h% _% P, Z
Her light-footed movement
4 [9 E8 b) F, [+ {( w9 I$ I5 F" his just like a flying swallow.
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0 `8 d0 d7 a4 oShe shovels the snow on her door lane. z& N. P0 C% @
before driving her own car;
+ d. }" Q* q. \+ f9 |) kshe digs her back yard
" ^0 x, |+ z: ^8 mto plant flowers ---9 W% E4 r$ N' ^7 l/ G, J
as if she did not know what years mean.
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# r9 X% Q# D9 j0 e/ Z* xWith the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,: \' B& R/ M* d
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
( \" W; Y2 {$ c" F8 {5 `5 ias if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu." F/ M% ?8 e: J  ?& q
Neighbour's handwriting0 b1 Q3 G- R: F
is so vigorous as to be the old trees9 s% d2 K6 d1 m- K: t; j' Q( S
interwined by dry vines." i. ?. v6 ]6 v* O$ ?* F
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
) \. r) h- V/ eShe said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
: f; T# _. J6 D& {/ q, @Well, her fluting is very melodious ---0 Z; a& |4 ~' B) U; O/ o* Y3 L
that is the sole sound going into my ears
' v' e; {" A: p* |6 Pfrom the next side of my wall;
6 s: N8 r) Q8 z0 K2 Gthe unknown tune is extolling2 N! Y& q8 ]1 s! _1 t8 d$ v
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
2 V0 O$ G# Q, l/ W3 n  f" Oagain and again.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 22:52 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-2 23:13 编辑 ' B7 T' g1 |4 h+ b6 E( d
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土龙,1928年,与朱熔基同年,具体到月份,邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-2 23:55 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-3 00:01 编辑   X, ^0 y. K4 s" \- N5 b! u8 O
身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换5 _0 `( H4 }0 Z4 i  e% w
Justing 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

, [% h  I( R! t! y, g" K从音韵角度考虑,还是不换为宜。我写新诗,仿照古诗平仄的要求,比较注意语句缓(相当于平声)急(相当于仄声)的交错搭配,这是我的独到之处。
2 |2 M- R( J3 X" @' s另外,翻译改动一处:2 {8 h/ }8 G( b3 u& h4 E
Her light-footed movement
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Her light-footed movement7 g/ C/ J  @8 E& Q" ]+ n$ z
is just like a swallow flying.
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发表于 2011-1-4 23:35 | 显示全部楼层
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& o5 L# C/ a9 W$ L真的是太像朱镕基了!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-1-4 23:38 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 Justing 于 2011-1-4 23:40 编辑
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* ]) a. Z8 Y7 |0 n7 L' v真的是太像朱镕基了!) h: W& t4 i8 E" R
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

- g6 P" f* K. k我贴的就是朱熔基啊,邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。
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