天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

; D5 [" x7 s; @1 @2 g/ L' y- X鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
1 C4 |: [9 j9 aTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

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" N, g4 `2 ?. f) w# d) \8 MSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
; B1 f' ]" ~! y/ k' R& U' R, ^I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.