请大家帮忙看一下这样的雇主信行不行？(CEC 申请)

zhddz

June 20， 2012

: A  F2 r& g% ^! hAttention: To Whom it May Concern
/ H% h, \/ I9 J9 J7 v1 I5 HReference: John Smith's Employment at XXX Company
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This letter is to confirm that John Smith has worked with XXX Company full time (40 hours per week) as a junior structural engineer designing steel connections and developing connection design tools from May 23, 2011 till June 20, 2012. Mr. Smith's annual salary was $xxxx per annum plus benefits.
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. [7 R7 u" U1 x6 p. nAny further questions about Mr. Smith's work at  XXX Company can be directed to me, contact information given below.
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4 K" S  c* Z+ @$ A) `& g& B  c( dYour truly,
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XXX

trixie

看CHECKLIST (IMM5610)的要求. 篇幅这么短小惊汗,一共三句话:) 看上去还挺全. 语法和拼写有错的地方.然后就LETTERHEAD, SUPERVISOR'S PRINT NAME AND SIGNATURE.
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davidli

路过+学习

zhddz

trixie 发表于 2013-1-19 22:51
  M1 F% d: R4 l  u. g  t7 [/ z- y看CHECKLIST (IMM5610)的要求. 篇幅这么短小惊汗,一共三句话:) 看上去还挺全. 语法和拼写有错的地方.然后就 ...

/ K' D$ H9 t1 w4 Y! S6 Q这是我雇主写的，我对着checklist检查了一遍，该有的东西都有。就是短。不知道行不行。

trixie

内容上除了"BENEFIT"没有写明是什么福利,其他倒是都全了.最最重要的是它的LETTERHEAD, 签字人的头衔和联系方式.用正式的公司信签. 最好出信的日期晚一点, 你的都是半年多前的了. 留原件,交复印件. 想要更保险,连同雇佣合同/工资单一起递交.

littlefish2011

楼上的正解。

flying54739

我以前是自己写的，然后让雇主签字。雇主也省事，自己也可以按要求写。

candytree213

they need to write job duties,

renwoxing