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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 2 R# J& c5 ~  Y
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves    Z3 |" L6 Z! u8 s6 M  C
Dreamers
3 E9 w" Q" |# Y" L7 v9 m9 zSavages  J" f3 k: K' c" V2 w; w
Poets8 X# v4 |! T- @8 n& i6 M1 I; R  ~
Builders of canoes,1 H7 Y( _" n7 ~1 L" z1 F
Black smiths
3 ?9 C/ ~2 y; a1 DMurderers,) {. g- N8 I2 I' P# Z
Risk takers,
6 K. `2 E" }3 R) l1 @My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 7 W8 w! B7 S, o. _
As I think of what could be.
' O" m8 I6 g1 _3 o; cThe world is so big to me ) j% H# u0 j# j9 n
I wonder what it means to be
. N, y2 y7 R$ J  J/ |1 LI looked up at the star and smiled
% \# e; ~- X: d" d( u6 M9 y9 s/ PThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. " E& o* C1 u8 P% G! K
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。5 L% @0 U6 z3 |
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。& w/ |8 [# e/ E) d6 t. j
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,( M+ p. x4 G; f$ G  H
A poor old Guy;3 ~2 L% b- o- \! _, ?/ K/ _
Legs in a bonfire,2 k2 Z  D' B6 [1 |9 h2 V( G6 g8 L
Head in the sky3 {; Q6 W/ o' [; d* `  n
Lonely, with the feel of betray2 _0 @6 y, G1 X: D) u( Z, z; J
Heart empty and hollow8 ], E  u' U* x  y
Alone I stand$ f& i& ?$ x" D+ P- h
I am useless to all 2 i" Q# y% p& G4 e' R' r+ q! \
But I wish I were a dove 8 L1 P2 S! `1 b( ?! Z9 f$ `) |* Q/ [
Giving myself to the world, to the fire. n6 @& K' V" [9 ]- N1 ~
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind7 {4 v6 A. \' t3 Q3 I3 _, t
I sent prayers to my god
) X3 z* f# g) b$ P* A2 ]Though he does not answer
% q6 J7 b; f$ d% CHe bless me with the gift of hope 9 z4 w7 y3 b# L0 B% {4 N
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。8 A  p. f* r* J! k/ S: J3 {
加油加油,经常写写!
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