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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, , J9 f5 H+ e0 {- n1 y" ?
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
1 ^2 q2 m5 K/ I8 hDreamers# V- @: B3 f7 z
Savages9 {6 U  D' F, y2 J. j+ \3 K) |
Poets
  W% B  e! z, I) Z) c& y1 b. OBuilders of canoes,
: d$ A" w; \: P7 k4 h' \Black smiths9 H- }* v' M4 Z# m( B" ?: V  @
Murderers,
9 \8 n6 s' Q  e5 g2 VRisk takers,
& K! ?- \; u0 g. J) @  R/ TMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
3 J/ n5 ~' u2 ]# d3 FAs I think of what could be.   a8 K) n8 Y* F7 d  d7 F% K
The world is so big to me 3 ~, D. ?- X' {5 R
I wonder what it means to be
4 R: Q4 c+ j: u' k2 `9 DI looked up at the star and smiled
/ R  r9 V) ?1 L8 BThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. . v* b: l5 r; C0 R# X  ^- @- ~2 [

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
! k# u( u/ i3 x1 O& \- Q, A" D9 L评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。2 t; |- l+ O0 {- ]; `
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
, s; O/ V6 t: B/ GA poor old Guy;
& Q8 U0 y+ R- p" C0 q8 @. \Legs in a bonfire,, ^0 x2 b' k: C- g2 ^) U# E5 w
Head in the sky5 z  ?+ Y  k% M* r! l
Lonely, with the feel of betray
1 `2 `  K1 H  f1 I* h8 f" w+ FHeart empty and hollow
+ m( V/ P0 M  U! V: gAlone I stand. u4 r9 u+ e6 D! W$ u2 d
I am useless to all
  B, [0 B, Q6 O3 O: r7 y3 lBut I wish I were a dove
+ |! H. @/ f) Y' E4 m, xGiving myself to the world, to the fire7 F! q) |+ m6 h
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind* X% Q5 q% R# b- S) z! L" O7 s
I sent prayers to my god
$ ^4 {8 Q3 s$ R, _& o5 ^Though he does not answer
% g, O" n# Q% x5 @% DHe bless me with the gift of hope 3 ~" }6 f7 ^' c4 n. c

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。! d4 d( p( Z" Q9 A8 Y6 d
加油加油,经常写写!
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