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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ) v& b4 R6 f: \1 q3 j) f8 b/ b
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ( w  t& j1 ^# {$ W  n
Dreamers9 r6 [4 j) H6 O& @3 x  W- A5 O, e
Savages" M# R. [* M# x
Poets% I7 b* v* _: y3 c
Builders of canoes,
) F5 Y. Z- O: d* p1 n5 H$ u; `Black smiths
) {' n/ d% ^* D3 K# v6 Q+ v1 j9 g" GMurderers,
3 v: u+ J' n" @0 t- |Risk takers,( z3 k( {# Q- h& D3 ^) q+ G( ^1 a
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder + b& \2 _! ]9 W6 n. Q
As I think of what could be. 0 {4 X: f" |' a% @
The world is so big to me   e' n" M  E* s7 B1 e( ~2 e+ E0 U
I wonder what it means to be+ ?# u! Z" E+ s! f( b: x9 r
I looked up at the star and smiled
1 U$ s8 ?+ _7 \0 _5 ]They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。( x; f$ n7 j8 L- |" o+ n
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
! ]# O, s8 ~+ B+ h# ]顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
: O4 C4 o3 I5 ~: B) l6 xA poor old Guy;8 _* V  B3 q; Z2 l' _9 X
Legs in a bonfire,0 [5 A" U4 h' ^- j6 a  z
Head in the sky8 j+ q2 o, U& c" ?, G
Lonely, with the feel of betray
6 w6 G, ]# J+ |8 n! i  WHeart empty and hollow
0 a" A7 M; i) A4 `+ [Alone I stand' V6 r+ v8 b$ R* ^* T2 o
I am useless to all , g8 K$ r* R5 T: x, G( d. w
But I wish I were a dove
& ?/ {! t0 \' q: i7 lGiving myself to the world, to the fire
* \# K, Z- ?5 V6 ~I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
: z8 v! P/ C2 \8 u' `I sent prayers to my god4 h- V5 ^" ^  j  ~% N+ _) B1 [7 A% p
Though he does not answer- @5 w; w6 k. V  q( U! C5 E
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。- d+ S1 k9 F! |/ w. h7 [* B
加油加油,经常写写!
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