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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
4 u$ M: E' _5 W3 M7 }" UI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  8 |/ [' g2 T4 n& [1 V( ?7 a
Dreamers3 T/ C; h4 F' M1 F. i  _/ k
Savages
7 P( C, Z$ ?+ n( L( JPoets
  ?, D4 p$ `9 A3 E2 P  p, UBuilders of canoes,( c) O2 L' I5 F' s
Black smiths, F; K2 d% b2 J
Murderers,% D, N) _7 T% x* e& T- ]9 q& e9 V
Risk takers,
+ z0 q7 [, e6 O) |5 S# _4 i- R: @' mMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder , J0 T# l! C2 j) P" s: Z1 j, ]
As I think of what could be. ! {- x# z6 A+ N* I
The world is so big to me 4 U6 ~, C8 }- X  Z
I wonder what it means to be& T" u5 T/ U# o- ?# K
I looked up at the star and smiled % K* N! h4 J5 u  N
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. : W2 P0 y4 F8 m) T, p+ [+ \$ ~

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
9 J. i  S0 \3 a( r4 k# j# g评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
- \3 [0 @- T' E" }* o顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
. B9 u( j- i+ ?4 E4 h- ?" lA poor old Guy;
. z" v$ H5 D' r) G1 R  o/ u$ }# S: XLegs in a bonfire,
6 k3 E1 Z! r. p: w/ c7 `: q$ jHead in the sky, v* L0 V6 `- m' x
Lonely, with the feel of betray' J& r" Q, r/ |6 t
Heart empty and hollow
; q: R9 q6 n& R& c0 vAlone I stand: X& e8 a$ ]9 E' g' {& c  M" i
I am useless to all
  n& O9 ]/ W7 n3 bBut I wish I were a dove - f( @) P/ |  f
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
; X" E4 i& I5 P, X0 P! w0 ZI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
  m5 T% K9 J' A, @. {I sent prayers to my god$ r; p! \" S0 G  m; s
Though he does not answer
0 L) S! ]' Z7 ]; uHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
7 `5 ~: I* @# F$ Y- |加油加油,经常写写!
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