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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
: V, w5 F3 E, |( ^I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  , m: @2 C  K2 x
Dreamers; p: S1 Z6 R( l2 a* U1 \
Savages
6 c& J4 f3 J. r7 ^Poets
8 P3 |' r7 g" z6 |1 aBuilders of canoes,
' J; L) D  o% g2 XBlack smiths4 @1 t5 V; _3 u3 s) \' G0 `8 R
Murderers,, V& ~' C  m& L- P
Risk takers,
1 s, Y1 m" t8 Z  Y+ t0 c" ?- B- VMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
! H, s1 r2 [& mAs I think of what could be. 1 M/ c2 U. N/ T% H$ a$ k- R
The world is so big to me ) U3 \/ ~4 S# i  l
I wonder what it means to be
, t/ o9 I' |: l5 k" kI looked up at the star and smiled
& g" T. Z4 |0 a; c' `They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
& C2 X- i- ^- w( S: j评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。6 S# j  E% {. j7 Y0 a. w! \& }
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,$ ?( C% C! j+ |% k  `) I
A poor old Guy;- Q8 U" `3 K' c4 |) V7 t
Legs in a bonfire,
! D! k" k! u+ v3 k3 ~: e" [; `Head in the sky
7 _7 }( l: s6 }$ e0 `Lonely, with the feel of betray
$ @; q' J$ C. T% |6 [9 rHeart empty and hollow/ R; n0 \* T2 e5 ]: N0 K$ d
Alone I stand
0 u" y/ S, G# b/ CI am useless to all ! W% h2 ?) g/ f( B2 O1 w; S2 D
But I wish I were a dove 9 Q$ h7 e3 O# r+ P/ U
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
. }3 K! W6 ?8 F& I& BI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind: M7 v( ^+ A6 T1 e& P! Q$ K7 E
I sent prayers to my god
9 o& p5 l2 ~3 @3 q: G0 S9 f: FThough he does not answer; \  y: \& O( R# \% ~6 E
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
6 r( m3 L! o( L  E% |* A$ u加油加油,经常写写!
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