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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
7 b! f# \2 e6 E* l6 j- L1 ?2 r* ?I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  # \( ~+ }  H# U1 n3 L- b  _
Dreamers
1 W# ]6 A1 f# ?- ~Savages
# k" H4 J0 M: g- M- D" l6 N, uPoets
* C' D8 j0 o/ w% `5 R3 wBuilders of canoes,
; P; O& ^* l* n4 B8 xBlack smiths6 x, {6 N/ n" u
Murderers,
' w3 d% ?$ B4 F2 o  G/ rRisk takers,% x$ _- L/ Z8 Y/ d0 l
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
; Y- j; ^7 R' X: g( m% i( KAs I think of what could be.
  O, ~1 L( W; ~- B) _, H8 a3 cThe world is so big to me / [. ]9 s3 }. g
I wonder what it means to be$ u; r5 e" @# @) h( Q) Z- {
I looked up at the star and smiled 3 B9 c8 H- q' \/ C# d
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 8 Z9 ]& o/ t8 \% V) X1 ~. I* O* v& ]
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。. R/ @) x1 J5 j5 h7 {. H& p
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
% z* l& p* A. ~" X) Q顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,9 b9 h) {6 Y4 Z( h8 C
A poor old Guy;
  L" H5 v3 }4 G7 ?* oLegs in a bonfire,: v" |+ B& }! ~/ {! Q6 n
Head in the sky( G  F2 ^, }# b! }" m! H( R
Lonely, with the feel of betray; o6 V- v  I, P* S' @
Heart empty and hollow+ i" A, y4 Q9 J6 V/ [
Alone I stand
. _( M* {7 y. E2 l+ Y: m+ ?I am useless to all
( Y. e3 l0 ~  Y- @9 I0 TBut I wish I were a dove
# a* X: z. B1 X- {) C  e% ^Giving myself to the world, to the fire
5 M5 t! D+ t$ j" _/ A3 |8 v6 MI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
. m* v1 p+ H" y- @+ gI sent prayers to my god
6 F7 K+ D# u: B4 S2 D8 pThough he does not answer7 a: G; Y- b, b$ N& u4 s
He bless me with the gift of hope 9 I5 d% k( L% ]( b: }
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。/ q5 h* _5 m$ n# t* j3 W8 S' \  x
加油加油,经常写写!
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