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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, - B4 t9 v/ `+ a
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
2 j: _5 b9 I  w9 d/ Q! oDreamers; v! o. I. V( s9 S6 R
Savages& Y2 E* w) x. C# W) N& [$ I
Poets
- `. `! b2 Y# @  k2 \Builders of canoes,
4 m: ?( i' P: T6 zBlack smiths
$ y% s5 ^+ s& U0 fMurderers,
+ [3 A4 u  Q1 }Risk takers,
2 T$ L1 T- B3 j6 |4 w& B/ d6 W6 W  CMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder * i) v4 d; H0 r1 v$ K$ n/ u. Z
As I think of what could be.
6 h1 o/ D# W* |: tThe world is so big to me 9 u! l( g; ~( G' |
I wonder what it means to be
& u" ^9 @1 k. l! X! ^I looked up at the star and smiled # s8 P+ `& Z5 z
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。. H5 |$ Y: i3 e9 l# M, I% J
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。$ A1 S) \- t; F4 Z6 g" M5 l$ e0 {
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,' b5 f& N* p3 _
A poor old Guy;+ @# h+ a9 @  I% x7 ~
Legs in a bonfire,
9 T2 I9 i8 e2 ^! dHead in the sky- X) p& v1 F( T1 C* d
Lonely, with the feel of betray
6 W/ _! I0 @2 S9 X' R" @8 [, NHeart empty and hollow
+ N0 E) N8 z8 t6 S5 U/ B+ ~5 r4 O- g6 kAlone I stand7 Q! g9 X; ?* Z
I am useless to all " ]5 F2 Q* \# Z
But I wish I were a dove
: [, J$ M9 R6 G- VGiving myself to the world, to the fire  \" n/ s0 z# G# N2 t; k7 ]
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind2 D3 V$ `  ~1 f' G% v; x  n. p
I sent prayers to my god1 I! d9 {0 p2 b: a, W: H
Though he does not answer# L1 \' x# i% b/ d
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
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