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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ) @0 G/ E, H' I+ b* D
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  7 T+ d7 z$ [' @% \$ p" d
Dreamers
5 ?* f% f0 p. d/ }, G$ zSavages
& o8 H# F4 E& n& W" W( W' jPoets
+ [. }/ P+ I3 C5 `Builders of canoes,
1 o8 L3 T& T5 b9 b8 l" p2 E. T$ ABlack smiths. Y/ N1 {! `5 A
Murderers,7 {3 J% X; k  \) i! X4 M. }7 \
Risk takers,
- X' o/ p& n4 iMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
2 ^* }8 h! n  K+ V% a& F# {) nAs I think of what could be. , \6 A$ g8 |$ R7 v/ k: H& Q
The world is so big to me
4 d) \# G8 _4 C" o# G" H4 u" U/ bI wonder what it means to be
8 y/ d' b, F+ m) ?I looked up at the star and smiled , }; [$ l& Q% _" @) ~
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
2 J9 `# c/ a5 M* e9 {评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
: v: z% j$ {/ @8 u# I顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
- o4 T! @7 r- S7 xA poor old Guy;
! O! j# g4 B: w; z& cLegs in a bonfire,7 O. Q* t& `+ o2 o4 U! q, p: T
Head in the sky
' R( X: x3 T5 s# M. Z, ]( p( {Lonely, with the feel of betray( Y4 X1 b& N/ p# a
Heart empty and hollow
+ p- `4 ~( L" O$ IAlone I stand1 d8 s2 X. G0 r- G4 ~
I am useless to all . |! A5 Z) _' }/ {9 K" J
But I wish I were a dove 8 Y4 R2 Y; s* L8 C6 q/ a2 X# ?, b
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
7 O" g) ?; f+ g+ d8 PI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind! g( f. k2 l" E8 J
I sent prayers to my god" T! t0 ]) S2 I4 I4 G- E
Though he does not answer
4 d6 q9 h# f* Y3 K3 @3 D- I3 q. [7 p( MHe bless me with the gift of hope + k, L7 f& P6 N" ^% v. f
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
9 O* ?! v5 d! |( H4 q加油加油,经常写写!
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