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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 0 Z1 L- C' [2 M9 G8 i# ?) P3 ]! D
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  0 E. p0 A" ~. B. S8 ^8 g
Dreamers
/ [) @  v4 N3 S& E+ u# ESavages! O4 T/ L% H* f% \: M
Poets
! S+ L, d% C) u4 d2 DBuilders of canoes,/ c8 J% d4 I" }
Black smiths
) B( S' C" G+ V* KMurderers,& q9 _, C8 j' B, m
Risk takers,& s( }; g8 a6 w% x, |
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder # |8 d# u( N& {% ]$ Q' Z' J
As I think of what could be. ( A, M+ M4 s# s( N$ O/ u( u7 Q" l
The world is so big to me
; v! X4 W* ?9 _- v( t, r* u( SI wonder what it means to be
+ s- _1 W! V. |  qI looked up at the star and smiled
6 j  r- f: c) \$ hThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
6 o, _5 v: l1 n1 I, k) b评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。) ^! N/ b. ~. n4 r; ^- ?. M
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,# J& N( s  ^3 P& |9 M% i& l
A poor old Guy;
9 ]  L7 f' x! \7 @Legs in a bonfire,# |, |8 N% k$ X
Head in the sky  s3 b& M! ?! U% ?$ @6 a2 `
Lonely, with the feel of betray% T4 Y  L- r8 R
Heart empty and hollow
$ @: O: h  D3 n4 A! Q, AAlone I stand  e' o: v" k4 x# `
I am useless to all / \% H9 K. i0 C2 `4 @: V
But I wish I were a dove # s: Q% E0 _, a
Giving myself to the world, to the fire, |) P! D2 }, ?  F( h
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind2 o6 T3 i$ a4 p! ?! \% S. l
I sent prayers to my god) A9 J5 ?" ?* R  s% d$ j
Though he does not answer
3 q2 V* A+ \. l; w3 X$ r7 KHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。# z5 o; F6 L3 O/ F
加油加油,经常写写!
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