SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

VEICHLE OPTIONS:
& k+ c+ W- j# n% W& `  `3 \; FAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
* x5 ]! I4 f" D$ s& RTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
- }9 ]' s' h( q' E# x7 {Four additional tires with rims
3 ?) b4 @' `. p! iAir Conditioning
! H% I1 z9 W$ X8 s0 z0 bABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
* n! e. _+ z7 v! j, S3 g1 ]/ a7 DInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
9 v( I+ P5 T6 m7 i- OPower mirrors
3 z! s2 f. Q( ~2 O# u4 X" ^# z2 sPower doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
1 x4 k9 |( e; |! A' v, DRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
0 X- G% c' {2 cAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
& b& i$ k$ D( G4 R' I7 w: uAlarm
. x7 l( \( N7 R/ V8 i8 ~9 \: KFog lights

$ E9 M6 s! c' u0 H5 U9 w2 l; r**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
- `* ?8 I1 a) H# H) `& S2 EIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

: ^+ v- n! p6 j. v4 g' y; nPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR

+ M) @3 W! K# A! t2 i- XDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
# I* ?' T) q+ C* w3 U3 Y. r8 _ IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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0 P3 U0 j& Y0 G) M3 ABy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
( r7 l" L; W) O$ w9 k: O这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

! \- p' L2 g# z2 M8 ~: x! ~Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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% d9 x# u. e6 m# B& Q8 i# [9 s% jSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
4 X+ k. ]2 r+ |. n. d/ S. o% R- rYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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% `! N! d5 _, q. FSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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