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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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, r3 \" }7 X+ A. w' b/ A　　　　　One day I always remember

6 o+ z+ p, H0 Q& i9 h+ g- |　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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3 S8 ]; }& Q% V. h, Q/ X) i6 Sexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

* P! f( ]9 w( V- `9 p3 Z7 ]* M* V little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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& _$ `$ I1 P* r7 a every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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# x( k4 R4 y% c! Z: ~  Ftrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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' Y; x/ Y# C! i4 ythat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

& Y2 Z" B( z9 w& N' u3 v' v- N( w on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

+ F- `8 y9 ^; \" T' J% zdeaest daughter.
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+ g) d! Z: B5 P! R2 k1 \After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

% `" c0 C# _: i) J1 v3 K4 s2 r[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！