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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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' [; M+ p0 _+ J& L% w% y. B  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my1 F, Y# L; i$ J+ J* a/ {; k

) d* \2 B" W- d/ w! m: z- g' P little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 0 H8 P6 t: [" i1 g1 `+ q, w  @% g+ p8 r
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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( l) g1 |$ a& X- E3 J$ X on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 9 \: i8 O% S4 y% v/ P

- B; I2 h: E7 J- ?- Gfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my & f- H0 D5 y  t

+ H: _0 v3 _: ^4 y% R' Kdeaest daughter.& h' {9 U: n: ]. j; _5 L

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. n: A, A6 U4 p4 R) X( [) N9 SAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will! \/ Y% v9 M+ d' R8 j" V( X

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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
( H% Z7 H4 `' U$ G% `we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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