作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

( r" Y) [, U. k/ c. lexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

' c( q0 g2 G: Q- o$ ]1 v- J7 A2 u9 v little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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" K/ v) ~5 H" ~( X+ s, c3 d2 q6 ` every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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: `: K  d, T, X8 n+ \& [: u was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

) C5 N8 ?- V6 N6 L8 y# @3 \, {; strusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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) C9 \+ c! w4 y6 |& s on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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+ h. x7 @" c1 _4 Pfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

4 F) Q+ s+ k# O, o6 N! @( E never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

- d0 ]& O, H) I0 v; D[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
. i) q, h$ p* G# uwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！