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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was# o' r* J; B# x7 M+ c: }: y

5 O  X; c  U  k. z0 A( p9 ^0 kexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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. |( \4 M6 [7 Z# M* _put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,- d& r. b' l" R/ J
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid. c6 N: n7 x/ e2 R

; r1 `+ K) Y  V was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 3 y. H2 I4 y& c" g; u! ^9 |$ G- ~
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 3 r! Z& s' E( @; J% H* ]8 n
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing2 S4 ^2 S6 X" y4 t# r, {* F$ Q- z
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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1 k; @  m, [( F6 @' wfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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0 G/ Q! }6 g, h9 c' S9 O1 R( Fdeaest daughter.5 G5 X* H  h5 g* H5 c. g3 C
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* t9 V2 ?! n- Q0 j; |/ `, C2 ^9 Q0 sAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.$ E0 q$ a# P. b, _" E7 ^$ L
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!4 i( E  U) o  ~+ b: o1 z, x
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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