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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)' r( [; }1 C& Q4 m7 x; o' ]& u

9 d2 h9 E5 U! K2 p     One day I always remember
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  p0 v" `) T, E4 D  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was2 y: V+ t' E3 }  W
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to  K$ `) c/ T% n6 J+ V
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,$ h0 H* D5 h' X- X
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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- n) ?1 P6 a3 m2 Z4 a8 Y was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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" }  O  |4 v" y9 |0 c6 a- y/ Kthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing7 a/ y+ D2 Z# l7 K* F* T; O

; k9 @0 K7 p6 Q/ Y on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 4 f; d1 S0 U  x
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ) f( o/ m* ?: y* U$ D9 b
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
) u# H) z1 P) O$ B" i$ n4 kwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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