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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember8 v# j; S: k2 }5 ^# y
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was4 L+ u) E3 G0 j/ a, H

) ]3 f7 E# F3 B; N( ~# ~" Xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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& W/ w. g& A1 c" Mput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,5 h4 S/ a9 |6 D3 w, Z

4 E" E; V1 K% M( X0 c0 u every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid* Q: r, \6 Y) m) K6 c" ~

. C+ w, [9 m7 }$ L was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely # X% n- J2 z/ i/ D* U5 e3 `

5 @, I* \1 H5 \+ v' P: M" Ntrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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# V/ g2 p7 v1 \- z5 uthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing: F, x6 `! M6 |/ \- m0 n+ j

% \" e$ o% H- D7 s. c on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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+ j8 m  D( i, P! Yfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my " l1 _$ \2 O& @2 Y
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deaest daughter.1 b" `/ T2 z6 v! e6 c- e* _/ N
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will1 ^$ y/ t9 F8 R, P+ e" C6 P, r& f7 L5 V7 x

; A- D% z, f: `/ \! Y! l never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
+ ?$ t1 H5 S* K: x0 ]/ bwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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