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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember5 n2 _  ]. H4 _) o0 i7 h9 _

& z! o# ], {3 r5 Q9 Y" h  _, S1 T  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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3 Y' v% E, r+ texactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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, q" y9 Z: s6 g7 s  b7 K2 yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my8 \1 t: j) j+ h+ B
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,% V- M5 i& e. W) o' f
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid7 y6 M9 q3 n# c4 i' M- v

, A3 n4 N/ O: l  R( Y/ f was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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, y; f7 M  I0 k  @9 Pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing, e! A4 R( F5 b1 T* z& W

0 o4 p( m5 U- u2 D5 Q% m4 p on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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' N2 s2 _! Q5 [. M- Q( q/ Q6 Y/ w, ofor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter./ K. X  B. H! x4 l. @, E# V2 f

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+ S, u+ V9 h, f( s9 OAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will; g# J" D; i" w. i( k/ B# n
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.4 p0 r/ Y( [9 c- q( e

. f' Q* j+ \1 O4 M9 u- M, x' `[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
2 X+ |- s+ g" r/ G9 K8 m; |we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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