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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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. U% w! s- C. J7 r     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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: c8 [) S9 k$ r' o( g+ {3 l0 Dexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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8 m# U3 a* o- r( I$ i2 yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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2 V) l' T% |4 s- D little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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) z" ?* Q. A0 T1 D) E every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid; X+ y, E. j$ y* P7 G, e

- S% O! h: I0 L was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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$ T5 a. W) _2 Ctrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since   J) x: E! q% e0 b
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing+ Z) ^5 ^; m% V2 R8 C

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* {! e# p* _! r* L2 ufor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 1 `+ L+ L3 B( O' G

/ }3 c& S8 d4 Q, r$ T. Gdeaest daughter.6 D8 j7 n8 ]% f
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will  V5 a8 g4 ]" ]3 q" ~) g/ E" A' I

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; {7 F9 S8 h8 q3 N3 Y$ J[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!. Q9 Z4 B, o+ n% I5 m" W8 |8 _
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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