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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)0 Y4 x( a  ?* b6 N3 h8 l
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     One day I always remember
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& S- y" j0 u5 R0 C: ]0 {1 ]- M  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was9 O" f* y3 {* C* Q) l6 R% P& ~
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to, \) b0 K+ t$ j& D% q. j' K

+ h# n/ m% u0 L/ s; A8 |* [put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,' R. B- v$ B/ @' ?7 g% Y$ }' x

' P) p7 O+ J; U" ~. v3 |8 H+ v every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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& {, |1 j  {* e: h* z was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 0 X) l- w% A  U5 N- e! @% a) B
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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2 Q9 R+ N; s% u6 Tthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing, b0 P: n* T; t) T
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard   F& k  c3 M" K1 i+ B

- x3 ?3 d& O( d0 A) jfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 7 @# X4 B; k& ~1 g. \- O

4 P+ G1 N/ H$ e5 J- x8 m/ D3 V! zdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will. n- M! h' [0 I# W$ J# `- J: V; _
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!, F1 ]5 V* M% e" A; d
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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