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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一), K' u, C( _2 K6 z1 H7 y& u* {6 s

6 E' y# X- b, j9 E2 \% M1 Z     One day I always remember& F0 B% y/ J' x

, R  g- G' B) {5 ^& e  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was0 i- b" W8 {- z: z

! r* p$ f9 h0 x: z& c. ?  _, rexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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( `- A) h$ @& ]7 H. p) f) C5 a every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid, _1 X8 }1 ]1 }9 U5 [- m
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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" ]+ n" W/ O2 v8 ctrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ! i) s$ N: ^& X& o3 O7 L& w) B) q

# r" U1 [+ |$ S  F* g, pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing8 W" _& S7 X; S( ^. ~! ^# I
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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: G" \; t1 n- n. F3 k; w! L( J; wfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my $ _6 S' P6 G4 B* i9 y; q% s
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will0 u/ F/ J" S3 K* P4 N" P6 K
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
- i/ M: f" \9 [! fwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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