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Love the following translation very much:8 p7 m1 Q1 m8 v
6 {, d# r, N' N "what did i do to you? 扪心自问" f$ G2 J3 u8 A
Wish i knew 未曾犯君 3 x( w }( g. _8 t" q7 n- B2 g
Why can’t i live with you? 本当共存% U5 \+ d% C7 X- z4 t4 X6 u
We are all born the same 你我同根
! j j* X6 }( M& m; `/ |# J( J Then we seperate 世起纷争
- [. L$ u2 V% M/ q Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分) y6 T$ m5 J0 N3 }, }
and blame turns to hate 争执不休
" O. [( `2 w1 [. i {' G, ^ we must not contemplate 日久生恨
7 y9 o$ C; T$ I3 H2 O$ ?, W( b; P how far apart we are 不必担忧/ n4 @; S! _2 m: r
there is always a way 仇大恨深
7 Z& N1 y. ^9 e4 X$ e3 }& ?$ J" u5 o) J9 E to that place in your heart. 灵犀一线3 G' h8 _# W8 g; U" e/ n
可通君心"% b5 T* l+ K& K1 ]6 E
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except these two spots are relatively not as precise:1 o7 L. ^0 r$ K) j
"We are all born the same 你我同根"3 f: r# ]) c4 c9 Y& G
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"Then the world falls apart 兄弟生分"
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7 z6 m( K7 U8 o2 h: s6 D9 ~: V同根 and 兄弟 are a little too closer than the relation in the original meaning. 生分 is not strong enough for the "seperation"# w3 e* U. E8 P6 R( J% P4 v
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As a whole I really appreciate 豆腐温柔 (超级版主)'s great job.( w- U" K& ~- U |- V, G G
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4 X7 ]6 x3 f" ]Just be picky and wish to see a master piece of translation by 豆腐温柔.
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楼主: 九月
狗仔卡
发表于 2006-5-30 10:22
显身卡
楼主
发表于 2006-5-30 20:11
发表于 2006-5-30 23:28
初听这首歌的感觉和Sarah Brightman演绎的那首Scarbrogh Fair（斯卡布罗集市）有一点象，都是那种空灵的声音。不过我现在没有那首歌，不然真想和大家分享。
