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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem9 c3 X) r+ f& Z. ]5 ]
Thanks a lot!!!3 q6 Y0 F% s' z$ D, i
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% |1 N9 w5 S6 o. Z" JFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
: m9 }7 Z9 Z. _0 |8 J Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
% B; ?+ ^5 [. A Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 4 J$ Z/ Q# |- ^. B6 D+ [1 |
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
4 B0 a; e3 q1 H Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
% F7 G/ v; {- d1 o; Z Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
0 X& V# L: A8 k% d0 C& r( SHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
+ y P# N4 O9 E* D9 x6 O5 R4 Y somehow I realized you were still in my heart p& r/ I }4 g$ R2 C) V
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
; g: ]6 ~8 T* a4 H$ Q8 ]) r somehow I lost myself inside again 2 i" B: w1 L9 b( O4 B; O
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
2 [0 M1 _" l% O* Z; A somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion) T6 y' `( W8 p& C# N
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
5 N& B6 b9 m; o) P4 w; S0 iBasically, I almost finish this poem
+ E" y' [/ ~$ @7 X/ W% | I am 一个人de精彩 a/ K- x: H$ d' Q6 m. @. x
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.' X/ Q/ I- m( G& i: }( ~
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