TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
  K$ t% M3 y, [( r1 D4 xThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
2 b: ]- ]; U4 [, O' {What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 u: n) M& L# [From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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% X: M9 }4 _. m# Q- v4 C- ETo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
6 s* a9 U+ I' l( q& aFor A, A 的一个优势
% R9 i1 M1 r) {9 K) i4 l5 hWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
$ _. z5 [  I: Z/ bFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
  A# z- I( g9 u8 ?moreover, B的优点2,for example…
( g$ |) W4 I, `From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
  |3 e) w. ~4 v8 m1 z: r" w& d1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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) |1 c0 K" p- D) M; l8 B首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
. N/ S' B0 F/ M* A, D. f; {1 dAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
/ o/ |# B/ L/ G1 u, Y3 jFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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/ ^$ f2 g  D. ?& s8 s２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
( W7 @$ F+ ]* L3 K(本类型只agree)


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( P$ j% H4 O. C* Q) P( E" J(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
  x1 F3 y  E% D  ]7 Y. Q; ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  C$ M( x# c) O9 B. b  y+ \( BWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
  V: G" v3 |- H  @" R' ~! ~# TIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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3 F$ k* ?7 A# G# p4 |# X(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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: D5 s8 E! y4 B4 y! dThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
: B6 K- C3 c5 K& pThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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, _8 v3 i2 R' I/ g  bC is superior in another way, this is…
# j1 U, e* y2 vFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
/ T3 t0 ]; Z  {  U, S# p- s9 b(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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. z# X: C3 B, Q4 {9 W(四)原因解释型
. K2 J) d  l4 e1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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: T% a' F! C5 n$ D' i, C5 R陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
4 y% R7 }' R$ @# tOne of the primary causes is that…
+ R& p; R1 z! ]6 q/ i3 VXXX also results from…
- ]/ i6 C3 M# v2 U… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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7 a% E9 n( J) U" a' T. _There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
) K. O2 s. F4 T; `) O" o/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/ S, a" |* S7 N# n) x/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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- N0 x/ K) f+ M8 UIn addition/ furthermore
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& m1 u& z5 j+ P' FIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]