TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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3 a0 ?: @. |, z5 h* f(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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- s3 w, G8 m$ Y: L0 b$ V( E/ |6 E(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
8 }8 H2 u1 l/ T  H( NThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
% D/ F3 j5 w4 G% e+ q' l" J& [A is superior in another way, this is…
4 _8 I6 E( r. H* J9 x* M6 T% @It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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& w# t+ P% `. g9 z/ b+ C2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
7 u, b4 C2 h0 A: T0 GFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 o* ?! Y. f# i9 p& BFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
6 I! s/ v- R0 O2 D% G3 jon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
$ H3 y' O6 D3 f, Gmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
& m& Y, M2 t$ @3 m& h& [8 c- P) \' j- PFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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+ M6 x8 l2 S2 v5 g: H. }8 ~(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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- Y7 o. d( A5 m6 M5 W9 a首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
: t- n0 h3 V  J) hAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
- U4 [. J  U% z# aFinally,…
5 @% w( H% y& Y' q+ h3 j& B$ w) KBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
" |/ ?2 e1 ^* B8 ~0 GThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
: c7 {6 _+ g3 y8 L  k) g/ M* {: mWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
1 j+ ^( h' [4 ~& IFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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) f# R7 q  [1 T- y# j0 d3 HThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
( O0 q, [( z1 x* Q3 Z. J0 bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
) z, U7 K6 {, L: y+ qFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
3 p! B& n( \# F2 W1 q5 yAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
6 Y+ y% t, f  E+ }One of the primary causes is that…
8 s. |% P- u+ a% D6 P  cXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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, t2 t! f2 Y6 ]3 @2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
( [; H+ g4 d7 S4 F/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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5 ], N, H4 P  z9 N# \; za more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

% d' x: P/ W+ ~8 @( d2 t$ a2 {再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]