TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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7 l+ K* |$ z& w. E" B' N: E(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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5 f" L$ k: q% b$ }' O3 X& @(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
" Y8 f$ G' \9 X4 v9 Y" a* ]The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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6 [/ N9 U+ y, Z2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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1 [# s" U' G/ q% z- z3 vTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
& j& B2 R- @1 Y$ }  ~moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
# E1 q/ w' q8 |5 _% k0 mAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
3 t: D$ ^/ }2 {: x4 d) HThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
! Y6 e( Q" E" qFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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8 R" b) B! ]. d3 U& j(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
. f8 z# K+ l) @- B( Y, c, |What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
) D, c8 A( F/ J1 PFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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8 D3 g9 D% u. }$ |- k3 f; k(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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/ N1 E6 e. J( t) C" [There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
4 f8 V8 |( o& N5 ?6 I8 D: ZWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
+ f+ P. g( e/ [& `The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
5 T/ u' i/ `. o) AWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
# m; P2 ^. v8 C' R# H8 Q3 \, xC is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
  T- D* J6 H6 p2 t! }) h. |, AFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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  D" A/ P- x2 ^(四)原因解释型
; ~! o9 h: ^9 w1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
2 l# t. s5 k7 ]; s1 t! @& Q, j6 AAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
" D# P0 B2 f3 ZThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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6 N0 e7 N7 i. MOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
, E, G2 ]3 I" l- Y8 h5 U3 k5 Q/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
3 [2 g' X+ ~! v$ j7 v3 z! u3 q/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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1 F. q6 i2 ?; y再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]