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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架6 b( O' |0 T. S' u2 O) Y; B9 K9 E  Z

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TWE作文模板汇粹
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1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 1 ^1 G, B$ d; J
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ! l7 t. R9 z0 I2 y- c" \5 ?
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… & F4 H# h9 p. M. N% b
A is superior in another way, this is… 9 w: t! h& c. G" M) `
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… - u5 {: c6 B4 G0 e- b1 }
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 2 r$ M0 W) X' F) {" [
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) % _" K' Y5 Z3 J. v6 W
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 0 j- j) W3 V( a6 {/ |
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
) z4 s0 t9 C5 w8 {( ~: `6 p, ~on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
, K+ ], W' J1 n. w% R+ umoreover, B的优点2,for example… ( d5 N  x+ q, D5 _
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
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. e9 [9 W5 b7 y4 ?6 C& U  D首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
/ F( @8 p5 `; J) @1 d& wAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 3 h7 i, ]' @* n( z# |
There is no denying that…
0 w$ G, y6 ^) q/ H) @: i+ LAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
3 A; p9 ?1 g# G9 _8 n# r3 ~9 Z8 JFinally,… 4 ~3 N- e  l$ t+ l! k
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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, l; Q* @! T$ V+ p+ ]! m' P2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) & ^7 E* e/ x0 S7 G, t5 L( K
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
8 V2 C& r) h: V, dThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 L) w- c6 B5 M5 o4 i3 u% PWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 7 ?6 I7 q8 W$ `4 B1 {4 |( v
A is superior in another way, this is…
% D( c) @# T9 d5 L/ u- V  IIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… & g4 [& N) N# m
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ! D' q# }* T5 m, L3 c7 R. @- i. p
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 & J: d7 K+ r, `; g3 X

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. " J& w1 x: q) b8 L  V. N" U
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 6 T' r+ }4 Q7 l/ C4 P5 ~
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
# d% s) e2 S/ [& t' ~  p0 {% O  TWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 8 _; b- }+ q. |
C is superior in another way, this is…
- {# b& r& s9 S6 tFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
5 C2 ?0 }3 M. w' H% h, B6 I0 n% v  qFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 9 V5 @4 r) f) k4 [; G, m; S
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. + p8 V  ?) c: ^( J
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: x2 P- ]- E" s2 Z2 XAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. $ l1 h) C% \& ?% r$ w
One of the primary causes is that… ( t) o# T) [- [4 L6 t2 a
XXX also results from… - R/ H. W1 \4 ~; Z
… is responsible for xxx, as well.   d% X! i/ U9 |. J/ V
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2 C# f. e& X  {* h7 p, v) I2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 0 K  {0 R5 [: n: l, B

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
' y& [+ |- {& k7 i8 n/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 1 W  K. H7 ]; ?1 Q4 F
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… $ O' r2 }! v+ k* N! }

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& I& M" K: [3 u) ^. ?1 E/ j: Ja more subtle point which we must consider is that… ) B9 E, {; a0 U5 |- s* `" E
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" l8 ^6 ^: K: Q9 kIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?5 s! s% p9 j; Z& t" S) B

& E2 n. T3 U  j) V再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.* x5 C9 P- [2 ~% J8 M& o  y
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