TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
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+ F/ Q, P- p' k$ R% L0 Z: X8 m(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
* F" U5 j1 S- w! N* s! p+ gThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
% |7 k( S* M" k* K* Z9 MA is superior in another way, this is…
; ~6 x3 a. m6 U" j, jIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
4 l4 |" p3 i$ a; K! ]% ?9 P# |) ton the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
. }4 y6 t# L4 {From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
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# l, s( w. d$ i( p, g; P首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
+ L( y$ h+ Y% @After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
/ `- S' R* w) H/ O+ M: V$ B# v" LThere is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
$ W7 @0 v; }% E2 GFinally,…
, c% B7 d6 v  L8 OBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
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What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
/ ~9 S+ A: T$ Q3 x/ wFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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; v0 z& O" c, X/ S(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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3 a1 r& P1 Y1 s- q% {7 [6 K. C0 `There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
  D  B6 r' G4 M. YWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
' Y' z, c: T( a" kThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
4 e4 }# ]7 s4 y1 KFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
3 m  W1 _1 K% I7 b& o9 j6 e0 HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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+ H$ {. r8 a2 ~) w(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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/ ~3 U/ k; k) m  R% _陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
1 l1 o" b) Q  q  t7 FOne of the primary causes is that…
3 n/ _9 L8 m. F% \9 f9 DXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
7 R7 r5 \9 v. O4 {& d+ O* fTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



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; x: f4 ]; J  e/ W5 d6 h2 e) DThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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3 K, P* U' W& v, m3 j' }* OOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
! c' V4 |( p7 H8 Q& [3 }0 P/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



1 Y* q7 a- \. M7 K1 ~* Z( Fa more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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. h8 {- p9 ^9 v- J/ C) m% dIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]