TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
% _( `. L/ K0 ]0 |The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
7 K/ Y! g0 ~0 e% L+ FWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
/ Y# y- g: e  o4 uFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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+ f6 p7 I% G% h/ H& `: w( hTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
7 X. T& C/ Z6 d7 r5 R+ `0 K# fWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
, X6 L3 j( Y* B/ E) Emoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
. X. j; y6 j3 Z$ S: d8 v1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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# T$ ]( q% o. t1 x首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
; z  Y6 h  Y5 Y# zAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
4 o' E9 h9 @& x' E! oThere is no denying that…
3 m5 p7 Y! L# T8 ~6 ~2 K( H  w$ w8 [Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
% C) }) [! l1 S" ^& t5 B3 u  pThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( X' t; ~; p) C8 A7 ~1 VWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
6 [4 f8 H5 K" ^It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
" X7 S- \5 _/ ?* R: k6 Y' WFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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0 C$ w6 P/ T0 FThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
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What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 w; Q0 x1 u5 y! x  ], W3 Z1 rC is superior in another way, this is…
% p1 E6 ?% s- Y4 g& Y5 _From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
  |- @. x+ [$ LFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
0 j" p* ?! |, x; ^(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
& x2 P7 l; l4 F8 l  T3 z5 n) L" l1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
: [* y* i( P) f! a: S7 w  p9 K+ QXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
5 o/ \% Q6 G( d" RTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/ h; k- v3 m: n* E8 I/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
% M- U( w: u, q( r/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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, n. E1 G+ \: aa more subtle point which we must consider is that…


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In addition/ furthermore

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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, F' S" d. B; a8 L+ g! A' _再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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