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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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5 |8 ~, e3 B) O(一) 对立观点式 / z  _+ @# a6 a. d/ F$ V4 Y2 L4 w9 o6 S
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) / v- Z& ]4 N' ~, [4 ]7 G* O( ~- D
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. . t, D; X  e! l8 E- M* [
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  K' a# Q1 `& W1 _What is also worth noticing fact is that……
6 V- s+ `5 O2 @" ~- v* UA is superior in another way, this is… / [: r4 a+ T: `& b
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% T* ~+ S& L+ |, F: HFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 7 q& d, K7 B1 t  u9 s& X

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5 r# ]) F3 \+ n+ H! M( E2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 6 a6 C% f  q* U5 i! Q
For A, A 的一个优势
$ M  j& \( Q) V8 s$ bWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 A: M' y* W! v% JFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
1 Q$ \3 w5 J) f6 hon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… ( S0 R: S& r. G- ?" [) f4 y
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
# C! t  v1 w# |& D$ i6 IFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 2 R  f6 K5 j) [3 l

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( ?% c: Q, E. P1 B- Y% M, |* s3 @(二)单一观点式
# j8 p1 K+ J/ x- E1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) : B, M0 W9 j# k5 z

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# U: H  c: j" v% E首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
" {  u0 R+ m4 x6 n8 eAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 1 b1 B' h2 \$ z
There is no denying that…
. [; \$ Z+ v& ], g# EAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
; v4 T$ Z# o' dFinally,…
. }& M9 V) F- f& P( f4 _5 CBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… - @# u: P. u1 Q9 P& r# K
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/ U$ v; \2 H  Z1 ]/ \2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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5 H" n. u# A# h* e3 b  Q  q(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
8 O5 x: N6 _! B- X$ jThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
' f$ [/ `2 E1 b5 }3 w- D) L; FWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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- U7 p$ T; _" y# C5 nIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 1 c1 ]* {, a6 m( ]+ `
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ! v' w- E, Q$ F$ g3 b
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6 T& g3 S& I. b" i  f(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 / i  z8 ~2 D$ m( X% U: H. o* H/ S
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
# [5 I7 _0 p% g& n  q0 T* O+ I& r/ QWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
7 m0 {6 |5 \4 O' ~3 q. lThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… : G$ }# \3 v6 V9 W; n
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 4 z5 S# ?7 I$ N2 z
C is superior in another way, this is…
' c' a2 d5 s8 s; Z6 o1 D, c3 d+ {# \# d! SFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
' k( j  K5 T( m5 a5 GFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. 7 N2 E* P2 z( u. r' I, _0 Y6 Q  R
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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4 |4 T. H& L- ](四)原因解释型
' n, U, `; x8 V" O$ _/ p1 L9 M1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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6 O- u. h( T7 O# O  p6 OAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. - [, i+ i. d( c
One of the primary causes is that… ; o$ |5 Y" |* P/ M3 \% {% l: x
XXX also results from…
" h: r  m( ]" L… is responsible for xxx, as well.
& X4 U( o6 T# ~! `2 q7 YTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX . ?9 U8 e; Q; ^, P  a3 d
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8 Q& V3 Y. y+ y9 |; R7 B2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 3 C$ m& @+ R; I5 y1 o
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. * ?8 O% k$ p% H7 O9 x+ h3 y

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
% E- d' N9 G) _1 W8 ]: Y/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… + ~& ^: _" @7 v4 N9 j
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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5 |- U( N, k0 e) X( ua more subtle point which we must consider is that… % v4 M9 _7 V/ C* a

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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?4 f& E4 ]( `: x8 z
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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