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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.4 H1 D8 ~% X/ k5 T7 n$ h, W0 U
前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
2 t" z1 V- z. K! k* [" { C* QEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
$ a2 C* a! K# ]Partial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.
% ~5 f* X. Z7 R+ |9 b" d- K Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.* S1 @( z$ ]: I$ @, `9 Q
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.) x9 G+ o5 D X6 d2 s
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
7 G! I: Q; \1 {6 ~- A* jSummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:3 a o* v- [9 W2 M& _" w; z
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool
- @: q: ]6 t. M8 B' v& b, jlike us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.
! Q4 f3 m+ c- `# S$ H; gI often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.) Q2 r: r) h+ t2 V! {
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
7 s& u* \8 q6 s. r3 _That shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.% c8 D |' q k7 a% b( D
I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.. T" D( B, u. _' a
I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
! V3 M' q- p: L& C; M6 g: q9 qIn this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
3 h. d% a' h Q: iIntoxicated then feel cold,
! _- v% v8 w6 o: m3 f5 Rthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.* J/ N9 l; _. {) Z/ C, L, `& R* z
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
- ?3 N4 t$ v: }9 ~* p% ?6 Z5 TThe amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
9 t# k; f t XWhy I am always hoodwinked!
% a) c+ W" x0 K2 K2 nI have told myself many times cautiously ; B- h2 z8 n; T+ m% U# D
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig., T: S% i, S$ k8 r( I4 j
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
' e: A- |1 [8 w/ Q; I& d( _Why can`t I take it easy?8 g% s5 {7 w3 b C% D0 c
How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!+ U7 e4 y3 m1 s! i; e
When the quiet night comes
. l( A! ?. e, |7 Kyour figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
* b& r: n# p3 c% ]; {The greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.) |, V) Q- @- `# p- C
Yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
3 V; X9 Y" ^2 P" {7 R7 llight the dark corner in my mind.
! \# }5 I1 {6 lI feel a bit of cozy.
3 C/ a+ |* i. N8 w5 t- `; f# v MThe deep attached to you in a twinkling
/ M3 V& f' S* A0 D' H2 y' nmaybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
3 _3 ]) O, f3 I. _& i+ S$ jI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,/ w; i8 z/ R4 B4 Z2 W
but accompanying with the time passed/ s5 E3 g- y! T* Z- t& p4 H
I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,
9 {) G& r* ?3 V( H1 Xalways feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.
) u" W4 L3 p6 d6 O, tWithout asking if you like me or if I like you7 u- C [% u- Y, |# E
only feel gracious for your existing,
6 B2 N$ S4 C& A+ j) M8 Z7 d) o$ lonlt want to do something for you.
$ ^4 {, \0 y6 {$ u& cEvery time when you meet me
: ~" }" h6 c( H& S$ x+ m% }7 |9 gthe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,6 a' a; R7 |1 U
but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
% d9 R. s, c* g& K" }; r# HThat live in my heart.
. k8 I# \8 ~: ?0 M* hDo you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?
& s. X- h7 a4 r# q. Q5 tEven only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice+ N( v/ l. y; C) V: Z$ K9 }
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.9 n/ `2 E' f2 ~) l4 y* g9 c0 c
The scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land/ I3 I' a M0 s3 b" c9 r8 B- K/ l
suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
w& i8 K8 L5 eDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,( m/ N, b: j) G8 K8 J
especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.* z% m& G: b+ V6 }6 O" _
Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy . X# ]+ a" X( r- i+ d2 p" R$ |
only waiting for you quietly, A2 r% i" y" A( v3 ~
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
- k8 ^3 I, b9 E% u+ cI really want to ramble in the small rain with you 0 @: G, |' F: ]2 y
and enjoy the rain washing together
2 h7 d" B4 [* f/ P% `# U1 h7 ]) n8 |or rush to a film1 B5 n' s" i- F4 G2 I# K% h3 U3 q
or listen to a music quietly.; r, Y6 A: c4 B3 \
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?8 Q: u* \. _9 z& d5 f
If we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,2 F% S8 K& a+ U! L: \$ j1 N5 A
smile or gently kiss then say: I really love you".
) X3 k+ p, Z/ j0 t5 S0 O& U+ KThat is enough.
1 H* {& b6 |6 e: A0 HMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
) n# X; c0 y; lfinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,1 I' P( W0 C. }9 x2 M; M" x# W' R
the same as my missing.
" n* R; @% `7 k5 N3 O5 d# d% lIt comes a little bit of verdure.
# e. @4 u# G' A4 }9 gIf, If some day I can touch your hand,
% ^; |2 ~+ P5 f) d( C! V, Lthen I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.8 Q8 w% x. O- ~5 B( h
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.
4 s0 i& S1 ^9 ?0 \: l9 XI will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul." {9 k% w, I9 t$ ]3 Y
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
! F. b- r# A4 Bthen I will have all care and ardor.* o# W Q$ Q8 g v+ O
Shall we walk arm in arm?2 X2 i2 ~8 ~" b1 U
呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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