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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
) L: F8 O5 s3 @* r,.清晨，急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry. $ q, R. X- h, T5 \! q- k" ]
零星树叶的飘落，松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running . 8 t( b E8 w; ^& `
现在的我，一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.4 Q: r+ \( m2 `: U+ r! h q" Q
梳相同的发型，背同样的背囊，不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.) b8 C: u% |# K0 ~" R4 P2 E
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽，又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
- U: U _, M+ z# L W7 O" i夏天过得那麽快，我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
% t4 [( V% X- g4 e猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉，追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
! z5 X" l5 o3 B' p- a: I& e就像多年以前的我们，似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.; O2 o$ @7 n! |- C! C
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天，I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
: Q% R2 U0 g% y) T5 z }7 V那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
3 B. W, N( ~+ |4 Y+ f/ ~. P# ?( v( s世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.+ G1 i# x* a0 }: A$ X2 P
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.
% [) \# l- Z) E; Q想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
N9 V# g! u# }8 p最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
* c9 S3 M- V% |1 u$ O寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
* |5 W0 M9 }* q; w, C醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
* {6 @0 Z! y; {- E9 Q% c. ^迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.) w8 I9 Z- C" P
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
0 |' A; G) D) R4 z" L9 s多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?. _9 n |9 |3 R0 F; j7 I
Why I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
L* F# Q9 ~: l- v3 \4 x% L6 x" j多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously, _1 d5 F2 B& X
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
8 `, j% Q% w3 {% E多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
' P/ |0 j% H& I$ ^# q5 _4 J为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
7 ~3 \* C# g- ]7 |$ x$ P/ H多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
% ~+ q7 J' f/ P) ^永难平息的泪. V3 Z/ e- `, X* d, o/ r
每当夜深人静时，When the quiet night comes
( ^( }( H4 j1 ]9 k( A~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.- z+ U, d" q1 q* q# Z
当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.
6 \" c! O5 f- D" S2 \3 O让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动，
% y& ]* f+ i$ w- |你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul , p {6 l+ E" \, W1 \# W( r
一抹微笑；
8 {# A& d7 i6 t M一个手势；
0 P) s! ^! ~ t- L' X0 G一片话语，
$ X V# E' y1 N' d% H愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、- w6 {, S) ^: ~ h, x; X) A; x
明亮著我漆黑的角落，The moon lights the dark corner
4 b6 p1 v0 i# H3 P( X) c心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
% K; X4 W" w* b0 m# p这一瞬的爱恋，The deeply attached to you in a twinkling: X( y- p; D0 l
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..) C0 v' \# S: m7 j% f
起初，对你的出现，I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,. R) e) a3 }$ Y1 i! X
我并不以为然。& y! I/ z0 V1 i2 k
可随著时间的流失，but accompanying with the time passed 0 w, X2 O( E7 k
慢慢的不知不觉中，I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
. q. I! I6 U# K9 Y8 e0 [7 }1 ^# G被一种情绪所左右，- x+ x1 R1 N% K7 O) g$ s
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
6 d. D- B; i( m; l$ v) M即不问你是否喜欢我，Without asking you if you like me and if I like you
8 g( A9 i3 S# f; n b也不问我是否喜欢你，
: S( U' ]8 p. D; d9 v% K对你的存在只感到亲切，only feel gracious for your existing.8 p9 p. M9 I, ]7 Y. x+ g, R* ~ Y
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you
* D8 {( c3 H. V3每次有意无意的遇到你，every time when I meet you
, j- @+ m# |; m, M$ _- J( e心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil/ s) H& J0 {3 e! h3 V, ?
然而我真真切切地知道，but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
* P* W9 ]% V3 [: I你的身影已化成一种氛围，/ r2 |) Y. E; n/ F r% t
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
6 u; v& m' [( C* G1 y你知道吗？Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
" E$ ?- g/ d& i4 F R0 B% @* E随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
% J- e0 o6 q3 j7 s哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud，
b& {* `2 _) D! r一种声音，and your voice' w* \5 C4 U! K. A
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
: E. Q/ y8 V4 B2 n掺杂著幸福的感觉。
0 ~, S+ L/ |" [2 T! y与你相识的那一幕幕，the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
3 u( ?3 t' f! F象雪花般撒落在我的心田，3 d* p9 x8 g( c
倾刻间，suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.8 L* H0 F1 r1 m k7 ~, P
纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。: k4 `; f5 |2 R, D+ W1 @
你知道吗？Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss7 Y, m6 @; L0 ]2 H9 g1 _
有一个能够让思念的人，$ d) t/ n+ L2 S
其实也是一种幸福。
. G2 d! y" A2 D尤其是在这样的日子，especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
B# o& a! A* V5 o柔柔的海风，
5 ~5 k4 C( }5 o- _ U: N* k& T% V* B甜甜的夏天。2 s( }& Y/ O6 T7 d+ ]- n! Y
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁，Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy + \3 k E1 U* K
只是静静地等待你的身影，only waiting for you quietly.7 ~: J1 x6 C' z0 g/ j
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人，Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
% @+ a, l& x6 W$ ?: G( f! b, W/ a想和你有共同的情结，
: U$ [7 T3 P: y& Y+ p共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步，I really want to ramble in the small rain with you
& {6 {( z: M% x H5 j一同感受著春雨的洒脱，and to enjoy the rain washing together9 f3 r; p4 ]5 u% R9 K" Q8 D
或是赶著看一场电影；or rush to a film 1 P9 E5 N& Z. {: l
或是静静地聆听一首曲子，or listen to a music quietly.
/ z# b, p$ X, T5 d7 R! p『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?' j/ f+ z1 K8 N- j" v/ {) Z
我们相拥旋舞，然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other,
6 G% F! W# G. b: }4 m+ N+ G浅浅一笑，smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you” P+ X- z& V' J# O
或是轻轻的一吻，
) o' X8 n. m1 m! p `2 O再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』) T, D; k/ b/ w2 @) ^/ _* D
就足够了. That is enough.. y+ Q2 c I' e4 ]5 N
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子，Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago!
! V: C; p4 J" ?+ _2 E终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根，finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
* g9 p! r& w' t4 n! N$ u萌出了芽，
" f L, j, u& V! c# `$ c/ m一如对你的思念，the same as my missing
* y; [) z, [: B& X浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
1 F% n# ~; u. z7 b) H: T' w* W+ k U如果，如果有一天，If , if some day I can touch of your hand
$ \9 [5 D- S6 ~! A( h+ H5 q能够牵著你的手,$ z; K. g. F% F/ A3 n* V
那麽，我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里，then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
! S0 ]2 V8 [7 @/ L让你细细地触摸，Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
/ [" ^! C0 S5 X% `0 n% W慢慢地细读，+ T+ i' E O7 r6 Q
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. : o( X+ F3 u# R6 X
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬，At the moment you reach out your hands to me 0 J4 N; A! Z9 e8 y
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱，then I will have all care and ardor
6 i; @2 |8 X; T; t; L7 K就让我牵一次你的手，好吗？Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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