锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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+ Q3 z; e; B! M# s" o: t　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

4 f( ^1 q6 R/ R  Q　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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& j' W' P) f- V0 |- U　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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8 o% T. ~" a- k5 b8 w　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

/ a! M* `' n& I, }　　6. Their brain is still very young.

' {7 w# n& q: r+ O* O. ?　　改进: They are still immature.
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/ u" Q" s% x7 [) p9 `　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

7 V! \; b, }& }8 ?* x; w; `6 z　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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! ?; R' v; g; c* s　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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# X7 d; _/ m: N3 g3 s( q! w# b　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

! g0 [  n+ h3 h- s# j: W; G　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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& _4 Q# g% B( d8 c: O7 q* _1 [$ Q　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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+ J1 k, `- m3 D0 f　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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0 D1 o( V: B3 t+ i　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

* W( Z% ^9 g$ X9 q　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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; @' [5 O. H2 U; c6 [　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

4 S% e. S' d0 Q5 j7 i　　改进: They cannot think straight.

' [  b! ]+ \3 X: H/ u) }　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

7 p) P% r& C3 q" W# ^* L* ^　　改进: Money can improve their life.

. ~9 n( U, l5 z3 Q( h% H  _: [　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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9 T3 e7 r  z, `# G6 J3 l7 N0 D: Z　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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" I- ~- S) c! X8 P# r- X2 ^6 J　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

( R# b9 ]4 ~" k1 @　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

) n( u/ ^) M) w+ I. u2 ]　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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  N# D4 V2 W* |$ S) U" l5 X　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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6 q) D* P# j. H) b1 A6 w6 ]　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

6 e- n( [0 w& G$ z0 c+ f! i0 U　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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/ f5 s$ x4 X' U# V　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

2 q  T7 u  Z' _7 {# T1 e) ?: r　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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4 V. r- H" x1 B4 M5 g" }5 _" [2 k1 t　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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- T3 x: I5 K5 g, \9 n3 S6 O9 |8 c# p　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

; K6 ?1 q$ n2 p) n4 a: q　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

5 |9 c1 H" N% f5 P- P: _  M　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

6 ~3 X1 f) ~3 v- h　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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) `2 Z% ?; k5 N* @1 ?8 N% b　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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* ]9 S  @- ?, {! }1 o+ c　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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+ F" ~! x/ }7 e　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

& j2 E# H3 Z# X  N) w　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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* C3 V' |  I; [+ a　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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0 ]) V  _( C* ?* H* Y: X　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

$ t, x3 O1 T# u- `7 U　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

  R9 l+ l+ j$ W　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

% v) [) f6 I2 w+ U, _6 C8 q! }　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

6 E9 A4 X. S0 e: Y" E3 K　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

6 [( }" ]3 A9 o) x5 [7 q　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

) P! q1 }  O, o( W( ]$ y, ~　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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5 r# Z! N: j( O$ L1 t$ G# x　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

; w) t0 j9 Q3 Z7 }) _  o" _　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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" ]3 E2 ?( A. |( u: t　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka