锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

' @, L& y) }5 m& R　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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6 t6 H& K" x7 w) p+ U2 w0 _; X　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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8 a% Z. ~% S& ?; A; W　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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. a& \2 c# @0 R$ A( G5 z7 T1 r　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

; \& `3 O# t' l6 [0 L　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

) N, @7 i% ~" S! E( V* D: L& V　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

7 u9 l5 \: ~( G" D) i) y) U" o: |　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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* P& I% E  s$ `0 s9 y　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

- ^# w6 ]+ I- b  G　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

$ M4 T( T. Y/ ^) |" j. R+ n　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

9 }' [6 m! U6 P# ?$ j, h9 \0 S　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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4 F; `  \# K: |' B6 o* N3 X$ ]　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

9 N& |, h! Q  e　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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6 Z+ }; U* R% b2 x& Y  S　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

' q4 q- A- E: T* E- n( x" J　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

( x: J* u) T# x) k, F3 k　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

& F6 j# Y) `: h+ {' E. S　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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$ L& c7 E% x  P- L- w, Z+ a  ?　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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. t0 G* D( n. b7 M5 |" j6 H　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

- R* a* h* `* q6 c/ |- N　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

0 S' \& E- G3 R  N　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

. S% |" A! j' l5 c$ Z: ?3 x# i　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.

0 R" b, @, t) x6 [/ A; p　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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* l+ [* c" F$ ]- C- O4 x　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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( J$ D( B& H  m8 g7 {7 L　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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7 u4 e: g6 E( L5 m+ R  R　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

- a9 S% m- q( N$ V* Y　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

1 K8 `" C  f" z( `6 w　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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) T' E; e/ @% \$ }* V　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

% O1 N3 T( e- y5 c1 F; S　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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- ?0 G6 R8 M1 w1 \　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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3 ]0 ?6 \, ]+ Y5 w# D- q! l2 Z　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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7 M& X  {) W- S5 y, h8 J- m　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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# K/ P0 E. a4 l& U: _& @　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

6 [0 V5 E7 ^5 t/ _. Y+ B- b　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?

　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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* F1 x) X+ |% [6 ?# Z　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

6 K) y4 k3 u% u  C; T) w　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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8 N3 e2 h1 ?. y/ P2 G6 |/ k. A% k　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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" t+ `& y. K- S5 K8 E+ C- N& Z　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

! K; K0 `7 H, ^  G# l　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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5 S' Y# ^: |; u7 W　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

/ ~8 x6 q, z$ o0 f2 a- V　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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4 E7 }. |2 u' q7 V* _3 q1 j/ {　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

+ f. G$ u7 M* m0 j9 p6 e( C　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

6 t% d, G- e% P( H) X　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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; W. k  z9 r6 `  ^5 a　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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& u2 c5 a7 H9 h, \　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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# [+ H, S, e7 B) d9 I& e　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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' n7 Y5 h# a& `3 ?　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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6 {) V0 b; u! X$ k$ U, j, S8 G& W　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

  ^4 {% A5 f* l$ S3 AThanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka