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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. 5 N; D3 w* S% l! U# T
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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+ Q3 z; e; B! M# s" o: t  2. For example, you work in a big factory. 8 L* }! e' f3 P) o7 W0 f& r0 @: O; ~; O8 X

4 f( ^1 q6 R/ R  Q  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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& j' W' P) f- V0 |- U  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. ! A4 L5 D. \( z" h+ G! G
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  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 3 g* H$ [# e8 S* _7 G
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  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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8 o% T. ~" a- k5 b8 w  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. ) \8 G7 T, e# A2 S0 R: t

/ a! M* `' n& I, }  6. Their brain is still very young. 3 x) _% u1 @3 {$ C9 T

' {7 w# n& q: r+ O* O. ?  改进: They are still immature.
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/ u" Q" s% x7 [) p9 `  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. + _- f3 Q6 a: U0 ^; {1 L

7 V! \; b, }& }8 ?* x; w; `6 z  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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! ?; R' v; g; c* s  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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# X7 d; _/ m: N3 g3 s( q! w# b  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 1 n5 t; y" V. g! m! ]' z5 v7 t
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  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 2 _# r8 a# A  z* Z$ t' E
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  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. " H" }/ A" p$ U& O/ V4 ^

! g0 [  n+ h3 h- s# j: W; G  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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& _4 Q# g% B( d8 c: O7 q* _1 [$ Q  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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+ J1 k, `- m3 D0 f  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. " Y$ [( n. M. A4 K: @3 b: p
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  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. # O9 _& B/ H5 W1 x/ a; }* J
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  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. 9 i& h0 U: i& W3 e
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  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. / F, m0 d% T5 ]- k( i9 Y: D
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  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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0 D1 o( V: B3 t+ i  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. : F- h0 w  |: k' L' E+ f

* W( Z% ^9 g$ X9 q  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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; @' [5 O. H2 U; c6 [  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. : R5 `1 m$ i4 Q1 B( ~
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  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. . U2 N, E% w" d3 s3 V( K. F! }
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  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  19. They cannot think clearly.   j- S- \6 E2 M" M, m

4 S% e. S' d0 Q5 j7 i  改进: They cannot think straight. ( B/ D( h& K  `9 H

' [  b! ]+ \3 X: H/ u) }  20. Money can improve their living standard. 2 y( J' n" y8 v; w1 h

7 p) P% r& C3 q" W# ^* L* ^  改进: Money can improve their life. * R( i5 u+ u, T9 K

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  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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9 T3 e7 r  z, `# G6 J3 l7 N0 D: Z  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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" I- ~- S) c! X8 P# r- X2 ^6 J  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. 1 Q3 T7 a1 X) D2 Q  J- u

( R# b9 ]4 ~" k1 @  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. ) M5 P9 n$ J8 O/ Z$ K+ n* e8 Z
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  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. . \9 t6 @' Z9 i$ ]1 I+ I
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  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.   \2 J7 u4 \# c! _# G0 A  X; y

) n( u/ ^) M) w+ I. u2 ]  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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  N# D4 V2 W* |$ S) U" l5 X  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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* u  A3 f; L; P3 n' g4 g  Q0 h  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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6 q) D* P# j. H) b1 A6 w6 ]  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. & C# e6 n6 A9 z

6 e- n( [0 w& G$ z0 c+ f! i0 U  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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/ f5 s$ x4 X' U# V  28. What's about nonsmokers? " O7 P1 ^5 R# J% `0 _& q# v( M: t

2 q  T7 u  Z' _7 {# T1 e) ?: r  改进: What about nonsmokers?
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  29. Why not to be a non-smoker? , Y3 l4 ]0 O# P8 w
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  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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4 V. r- H" x1 B4 M5 g" }5 _" [2 k1 t  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. 5 Y! P/ j6 k/ F5 H! v$ p% e1 P
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  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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  31. I am not good at maths, but English
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- T3 x: I5 K5 g, \9 n3 S6 O9 |8 c# p  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.   ^5 ?, N1 ^+ J$ h* U; Q' {% h

; K6 ?1 q$ n2 p) n4 a: q  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? " S; u& [; U/ R7 n
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  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? 8 w" m, |  V( y8 l1 T/ f' g; h

5 |9 c1 H" N% f5 P- P: _  M  33.It is children who clear about their interests. 4 H  R2 Q" t: W& T1 A% L/ i; [

6 ~3 X1 f) ~3 v- h  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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  34. I agree the latter idea.
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) `2 Z% ?; k5 N* @1 ?8 N% b  改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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% _7 x! N+ o2 |8 H- J  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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* ]9 S  @- ?, {! }1 o+ c  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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+ F" ~! x/ }7 e  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. - U( |! N5 d5 S. D+ [% e, j0 O( J8 p

& j2 E# H3 Z# X  N) w  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 6 M- T4 W/ j* x5 _
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  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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  38. No one knows all the things.
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  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. ' P  C1 x' S3 R& h) P
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  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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0 ]) V  _( C* ?* H* Y: X  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. 3 J4 w& p! U. ?. n8 t6 M

$ t, x3 O1 T# u- `7 U  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. - j- L6 W9 r( |' M8 k( D

  R9 l+ l+ j$ W  43. They will learn the bad habits. ( }$ g2 @. w( I5 T: g2 ]

% v) [) f6 I2 w+ U, _6 C8 q! }  改进: They will develop bad habits. 0 G5 y6 x) e* f' t! F3 k9 j9 b+ e

6 E9 A4 X. S0 e: Y" E3 K  44. In this continued process, people make progress. ! N1 s( A$ K$ g

6 [( }" ]3 A9 o) x5 [7 q  改进: In this cycle, people make progress. ; U" Y7 E% }7 L% o* {# I
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  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 9 {- k! s: c6 J* F0 O' I. [

) P! q1 }  O, o( W( ]$ y, ~  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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5 r# Z! N: j( O$ L1 t$ G# x  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. 1 o" g- P! W  q5 `7 r1 u/ i+ _" N3 c& a
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  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. ( [0 `: S1 x1 c( s2 {0 Z
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  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. 8 \) D) N8 p; B: p! R6 ?
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  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.   A; H% g* c! ]' f9 u

; w) t0 j9 Q3 Z7 }) _  o" _  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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" ]3 E2 ?( A. |( u: t  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss. ! F7 u4 g: k, R, z1 M3 ^; u
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  50. I felt alone. " a) {& z: R! s* {& R: j: Q

" k& ^' [5 {2 l8 |5 G' n8 b  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good. ) g# a5 X7 R/ N! m
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Thanks
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
理袁律师事务所
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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