我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
3 V- r& @6 s! g- l  H- vSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
, L& z  x6 n/ F4 R; f, cFrom the colorful nature
2 X7 s' e' `0 b* b) F) h( x) mTo my life and dream.

. v" n: O( _6 `- {Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
% v; N8 z+ `, B/ r4 @" Q9 dGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
0 l% [9 d) x* Z) |, M! `
$ w# u* L, P0 J; R/ w$ VGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
7 x7 }- Z" t& O" HMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
, r2 _1 W3 O/ z/ R  t3 A; ^but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
( u" a1 {& t+ G) U# n夏天来了