我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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6 t( n. t$ }1 |  s/ }) B9 i' OFaster, hotter and sweater,
) d7 ^# b( U. ]Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
3 C, V! [) c0 e2 N& tFrom the colorful nature
$ }. i1 W: J+ Z  S5 RTo my life and dream.
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1 j" A: p2 K5 J7 d7 `& n: O5 ?& Q. yFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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6 H% s2 N& a4 `, ~( e" B0 MGood-bye, my happy spring;
: i: P7 a" B% e, {. kGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
- F% N" `+ O! `( Q. C. D3 o: WMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
2 M/ [5 c3 y4 H( _+ j6 G0 dIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
* ~& A# @- K  A1 Zbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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