我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
% C. S% ?* q: g+ \9 j, x4 `3 I! qSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
' A, i* ~: X% o7 PFrom the colorful nature
7 o& I% A% T6 W7 i9 A7 tTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
- J. m" w6 z9 vLet myself go ---
: d$ w9 s" J  gGo to the wild rain
6 }& c; k$ v- h) r7 b6 v, }' k6 n- EWashing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
3 G) @- B* a" `1 [/ cGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了