我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
6 a, w, M, g4 o, W7 Y, lSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
/ Z4 v, @' u$ O; y+ lFrom the colorful nature
) u6 v7 S- \+ y7 @$ [5 `To my life and dream.

$ u) O0 ?& _9 s  h, C1 cFollowing the summer's step,
+ t; I' ?8 M/ bLet myself go ---
7 @1 h% @8 g% p9 _Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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$ l1 H: P$ Y; W& O2 \; V+ N1 {一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
+ T% ?8 h5 [$ n$ j# y  K1 fbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
6 l' ?0 k1 h# n夏天来了