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应该是 I have been tutoring IELTS and SAT since 2011
5 x. Z0 ]; |/ M8 J, o- Z6 ?第二句话 应该加上主语 I just graduated from...( p3 t/ z# Z( u% C* }# Y
在 in my spare time之前应该加上句号
) g3 t: N" A/ Z% ]既然选择了用 help sb. to do 的形式 应该保持一致。help you to pass, to achieve, and to advance (advance your career 这个用法貌似没听说过)
* L! Y0 Z ?0 E Aif 后面多用虚拟语气 etc. If I were you....blablabla
E$ N! q# K. E3 b4 e: @, k% b所以这里应该用:if you could not achieve the score that we had an agreement on, it will be free of charge. 后面那句话就不用写了 已经free of charge 了。而且一句话里一会用would 一会用will...4 {) q/ S5 t/ g: b5 ]2 j* M$ r
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