IELTS SCORE GUARANTEE PROGRAM

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Hi! My name is IELTS Ninja. As a private tutor, I have taught IELTS and SAT since 2011. Just graduated from UofA this summer and currently full-time employed by a company I love, in my spare time, I want to help you to pass the IELTS test, achieve the desired score, and advance your career. So here is my IELTS SCORE GUARANTEE PROGRAM: if you cannot pass the test with the score we agree on, it WOULD BE FREE OF CHARGE and all deposits will be completely refunded.

4 M' D2 {# h4 j; c$ Z7 I2 p' NThe program will run depend on your current skill level and score band. The advantage of this progame is that it is completely test driven, so there will be no long hours of talking nonsenses or frivolity.
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If you are committed, I am here to help.

All questions are welcome.

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ielts.hacker1@gmail.com

virrr

这里是谷歌和wordreference.com的结果

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应该是 I have been tutoring IELTS and SAT since 2011
第二句话 应该加上主语 I just graduated from...
在 in my spare time之前应该加上句号
既然选择了用 help sb. to do 的形式 应该保持一致。help you to pass, to achieve, and to advance (advance your career 这个用法貌似没听说过)
/ C5 m7 w. J# P8 Oif 后面多用虚拟语气 etc. If I were you....blablabla
所以这里应该用：if you could not achieve the score that we had an agreement on, it will be free of charge. 后面那句话就不用写了 已经free of charge 了。而且一句话里一会用would 一会用will...
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virrr

谢谢你的观点。因为挑中午午餐break时间发的，没有复查。下次多注意。

virrr

非常感谢大家的关注！
截止目前，Ninja 一共有四位长线学员，仅有一位是中国同学。各种肤色从白到棕都有，所以课堂还是很多元的。

9 W( H( b# }: G2 v从九月份起，为保证教学质量，以及更好的灌输Language immersion的IELTStology理念，所有在埃德蒙顿华人网录取的新学员将统一接受纯英文教学，Ninja将不再提供中文或中英文教学服务。
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