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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
" z+ N) ]- D' t- U0 {+ ZI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
$ S2 {. S1 ?  Y! D3 XDreamers
1 T( S) G$ G) H3 @+ tSavages1 E; x# m; @9 U/ T% q2 h$ d
Poets
6 {/ w3 `* E8 b+ N2 a' L1 eBuilders of canoes,
" p. Y7 ?5 m. XBlack smiths
6 N& C9 I4 \7 v! c1 kMurderers,
# M- Z  q% n) }* b/ A$ D$ sRisk takers,- f% }5 a- N! H0 r7 O% ^* |6 w
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
( _& o) |0 G2 y, k- u' f. UAs I think of what could be. : c4 b$ `0 O0 J4 P8 y
The world is so big to me 6 L( S% O% O# S* N7 I, n
I wonder what it means to be
5 D% J3 g  ]8 f) ?- f0 J4 `6 K' BI looked up at the star and smiled
) B* e' M2 ]6 b. A- D3 [They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 2 Q: a4 r6 n) a, f" }

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
0 p1 A/ ~5 ~. A( b评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
0 X4 l& f" q+ ?顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,5 ^& q% V$ P# Q5 Q
A poor old Guy;3 c" ~2 j" W3 e* d$ ^  M% p( X9 }
Legs in a bonfire,0 b& I# }$ O$ j2 A6 k
Head in the sky
6 w5 E2 B6 g+ h' I0 |* aLonely, with the feel of betray9 D( w7 d$ N5 K: q: Q
Heart empty and hollow" o6 r" S( C2 b' L4 y. [1 ^% }4 C$ q6 z" s
Alone I stand
: C5 M1 h; w+ v4 e( x- aI am useless to all
; h1 k& s0 b/ F- F6 gBut I wish I were a dove
8 U" X; }5 E9 {% b  u# w2 aGiving myself to the world, to the fire
7 H7 }" z9 U+ K/ m3 F8 p1 S: w/ UI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind. u: W! w4 q1 I' Z/ _  `
I sent prayers to my god
( {6 E4 P! D$ q2 ^1 n( ^Though he does not answer
  I! W% |# e5 i; y# H: j3 MHe bless me with the gift of hope : }5 i( R: A8 I. j* O7 o
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
# S, F8 O2 V! t0 S加油加油,经常写写!
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