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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
+ [0 B3 ]  M- U$ s& s" LI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
# J! v5 q$ @; W/ S! n% CDreamers7 z8 [; p6 v1 E8 ]
Savages3 S8 X2 H. S) x: u* R( G! ]' s8 g
Poets
% R4 x6 l5 x: }Builders of canoes,
: @" k' ~4 Z2 oBlack smiths) R6 t) g. ]- y: G2 s) V7 `
Murderers,: J9 S# B' H0 A  a1 ~) Q
Risk takers,
6 O9 \0 g$ m! W3 kMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder . b+ h" v5 m& C' }3 s
As I think of what could be.
6 z7 d. P4 c8 V8 `7 MThe world is so big to me 3 Z: y0 K: L+ m8 g
I wonder what it means to be- H$ l4 I, Z2 a4 L
I looked up at the star and smiled 6 y, e# Y7 ~1 s; ^: \
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。6 s8 k1 P/ L) P. M
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。2 u2 S5 l0 r% ]2 b
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
. X; v' `% c. h8 l/ H, BA poor old Guy;
1 Q3 h, Y5 \" q, S3 K0 _Legs in a bonfire,
! W: {! ^  D- w  h' o2 FHead in the sky
5 I4 }; H& g9 L, t9 tLonely, with the feel of betray5 L( r* j4 r7 ~5 J
Heart empty and hollow
3 w- N& I* n0 E7 f$ p8 kAlone I stand0 X* g, f( L- ^! U# b, k3 g
I am useless to all
9 m2 ~' H$ @* E4 \" UBut I wish I were a dove
4 B  E. S2 f" A7 V4 eGiving myself to the world, to the fire# T( Q+ S4 }5 L( ^' L
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind9 ~5 e  d! X  x3 D  r$ \
I sent prayers to my god
) q/ x. l7 t8 z5 L. }6 s3 Y* K7 VThough he does not answer8 j" T+ h# h! T; G* E. `; y
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。( j# L- k' S" O' {% J
加油加油,经常写写!
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