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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,   M9 v& U9 G5 G/ L1 _# m/ m
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
# \3 x4 R4 X, N; H; M* b5 r8 pDreamers
8 }; Z, G% O0 E* y* `: C5 B/ {3 QSavages/ h/ ]: Q1 \6 r/ i/ o0 n; [: X
Poets
4 t; A0 _, B8 H# `0 ]' |/ ^, yBuilders of canoes,0 j: C( F3 j% J4 s0 s- [
Black smiths8 `0 p/ a2 j4 b5 ~) i
Murderers,
# Y6 e' \( i. ?% ^" J  j8 ]Risk takers,$ R4 g# E0 I: K  W3 O; }
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 8 e2 I6 H; s6 |5 t3 ]6 d$ D+ `( x
As I think of what could be. 2 e5 C! Q0 w! X: R8 X
The world is so big to me
1 u6 ^$ t: G, y7 D7 W0 g+ KI wonder what it means to be
  w- @$ f- ?7 K) V0 _I looked up at the star and smiled
/ A" l% W4 N# ^. x3 y: yThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
# i- U" z1 l$ C- n% j" d评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
/ i1 v, u) v- E' t$ Z& f- f顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,! z: _0 S/ X! z9 `8 E5 g/ N9 k
A poor old Guy;6 j2 h% r5 e/ K+ O& Y
Legs in a bonfire,# t3 o/ \3 g, w/ }" ?' X
Head in the sky/ @; ]4 s$ j& U9 h8 ?5 i
Lonely, with the feel of betray% B# ^- h" Z  ?1 M7 l2 X
Heart empty and hollow
0 b8 K/ N7 A; K5 p3 ?8 _2 _Alone I stand
& ?/ e* s" D3 Z/ w3 V( H' LI am useless to all
- E* p" W7 l4 ]: h+ [But I wish I were a dove 2 m. M) |% |8 {+ d, w9 Z
Giving myself to the world, to the fire4 A) g: S+ Q, e* U" y9 J
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind1 F  G- q! d+ C6 Q) @) ~$ E) I& L
I sent prayers to my god3 R4 {1 ?7 j2 C. m" o
Though he does not answer! B% p. A: R' @0 \
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
; O& z) J8 R2 F* p加油加油,经常写写!
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