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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
* @- H; G( }/ @3 G7 pI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  " a: _( M/ y2 Q8 e' a; G: z
Dreamers5 X1 @8 t$ z% b, N- Q8 S7 `- H8 p
Savages
3 G" C) r% n1 T/ s3 Q1 C7 [' `) cPoets
6 L# ~0 y1 p# P) UBuilders of canoes," l1 b: h' [5 _* c
Black smiths
1 k8 }* k9 `+ Q: x. {Murderers,3 g; z5 q, N& q- v
Risk takers,
" r' d9 }9 S  A6 N4 l9 C: cMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
  C1 Q5 f3 |; w0 IAs I think of what could be. 6 O& G( y( k; B; S* G" M, d
The world is so big to me : W' M4 v& M9 g  E, N, u
I wonder what it means to be, P% u5 u4 R" b8 {5 @0 ^- x
I looked up at the star and smiled
6 @/ d- v) ^; b% z0 [+ JThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. ) F* K  W- d' N

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
! {% s' O: Y/ r8 b评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。6 r# P# n+ d' z& }" c! Q. S
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
2 t" _) M, o! u3 u& h" n/ `9 ^; VA poor old Guy;
" @- K  T8 v+ I; _/ f3 i/ X0 {% _Legs in a bonfire,2 O: G5 W3 t9 m% j
Head in the sky
  Y3 m# e* T( U/ ^# G; `Lonely, with the feel of betray+ n$ v- ^& {: P3 I
Heart empty and hollow
3 k) `. b( I/ TAlone I stand; y9 a- f, \. M$ \; o0 K
I am useless to all
6 T! k( G) z/ vBut I wish I were a dove 1 @4 {7 V% S4 r& I; a- e  D) K3 ^
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
7 x( Y: L3 S9 p+ S, p- VI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind5 U# \& Q  L2 C" S3 R1 P! t2 i( a( v
I sent prayers to my god* Z) Q' `6 p& K; ^( `$ q* r8 X
Though he does not answer6 O' l6 ~6 J% Q) ]# v2 U
He bless me with the gift of hope & W) l2 u5 X7 W4 L
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。2 H  G8 Y- C0 D6 P" r! p
加油加油,经常写写!
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