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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ( ^$ i* x! K9 U$ ]- B
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
$ K0 t( j7 Z, r+ z5 e( C. kDreamers
$ m1 J* p( M$ d  |! x0 zSavages# J) o5 N8 {/ B! V1 Z5 W! ?( ^
Poets
  U+ {# k) C' z- zBuilders of canoes,0 Z' b$ e1 j& s( I6 S# N
Black smiths
7 N+ m0 `) N9 N, z8 @8 A1 EMurderers,
" b" f' ?: O; k$ c- cRisk takers,
% M. ~/ y; q- s( a2 |5 HMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder % l, Z4 ^  k4 p& c$ r/ g0 F$ _# u
As I think of what could be.
- [6 G) ^7 H9 Q0 h* G0 ^The world is so big to me - i5 o( U- Z7 a5 S  H3 F
I wonder what it means to be1 Q2 }2 K) l' |$ s; x+ c4 t
I looked up at the star and smiled 6 C6 x: W& o6 n, V  S5 F" D3 j; S7 u
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ! M  s- S: {% t' K2 Y" J
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。; ]. c2 W" C7 ]% @6 \$ h
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。: ^" [: F/ r  o6 U& i
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,2 |! B5 f5 o8 ?+ n. w
A poor old Guy;: l) Q4 G2 u% s0 o- y
Legs in a bonfire,9 o+ H% j1 c/ g/ a/ E8 q
Head in the sky) G5 J4 x+ N6 w& j& s1 e
Lonely, with the feel of betray: o! b" F( p6 Z5 d4 N3 C
Heart empty and hollow- G9 A# l4 p3 v3 n1 {$ k& V
Alone I stand* _9 ^5 I! _# {9 }2 D
I am useless to all
5 I1 n% T+ W4 `8 M2 l1 iBut I wish I were a dove
) W9 s" d  y2 y7 s7 j2 XGiving myself to the world, to the fire
* I# f/ a) x, H4 h4 UI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind4 s* s3 K6 a- \: u# @9 O5 S/ D( _& h, [
I sent prayers to my god
. p7 N, ^1 c# o1 Y4 `( oThough he does not answer
" n4 a  |2 n' [  D/ _' L+ ]He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。5 o; @1 J* F( Y  C
加油加油,经常写写!
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