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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
7 s/ g- o2 d; y5 ^I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ! D9 q" K. B. [( \/ O5 B" p
Dreamers
7 f  x- o3 @9 `7 ?8 _" U. |Savages
; I9 z0 }; T! l" V- E% APoets1 |2 Y1 U6 p+ g# i9 N3 W
Builders of canoes,
5 b* g" Z2 d+ `! KBlack smiths8 H4 \3 U  T2 R% X2 k
Murderers,
- m$ s( X2 N1 S0 \* JRisk takers,
! n8 m# @# f) e. g# k  mMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
* i5 Z7 {- @- hAs I think of what could be.
  F" ~* Z7 v; I, F" CThe world is so big to me 6 B# [9 C; U% Z  ~8 e* z* M0 Q$ r
I wonder what it means to be
! S3 W' {& a, K4 |I looked up at the star and smiled ( q5 T& H" C; t
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
4 A0 }& ]+ k+ v. C  R评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
1 B, u+ M) h9 V) @6 s4 I$ }顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
5 L- u4 u$ U1 R7 ^: p9 uA poor old Guy;
% T) Y# d* m5 a' m& V) FLegs in a bonfire,: ~( E7 k( k, Z; S) b
Head in the sky
" X5 v7 D' W/ I7 ULonely, with the feel of betray
3 q' o, O- i1 W  ]/ R& eHeart empty and hollow" s4 n! n; O$ N
Alone I stand% d; t- O7 g$ l9 |, s# @+ h
I am useless to all 3 u2 R9 I4 M3 l" j. Z  k: D% }
But I wish I were a dove # Z2 F2 d$ p6 t  h
Giving myself to the world, to the fire) w3 I+ _, T: \( `, k3 ^
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind9 w0 A3 h! X% g
I sent prayers to my god
0 v3 Q& ~; h6 ZThough he does not answer( h: X% F- z6 V$ v$ a$ h
He bless me with the gift of hope $ u% \2 W  [; e6 P
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。3 t' V+ I. E: g  o" g0 b* u! g
加油加油,经常写写!
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