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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
: _" @8 ?; D4 v9 `& j$ E/ X1 OI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
$ ?) K9 D; F5 _, W! v. @1 A' UDreamers
4 C9 ?, f' M- O( h4 ~; LSavages' ^! V- h! ?' g% p5 i
Poets7 I* l3 G& s; j5 A9 m
Builders of canoes,% O- [* m, C" ~3 B
Black smiths
( z1 W- @) @9 iMurderers,
5 N6 {9 Y1 `- V: {0 |4 C1 G; URisk takers,
1 F1 a, [2 B. `$ u2 v& |, `My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
3 _# G; g! b  d% \2 ZAs I think of what could be.
5 Z9 l! X+ k% y4 C' jThe world is so big to me
3 ^) W7 C. I4 W4 b3 U7 lI wonder what it means to be9 J  o7 H, D6 @+ }7 w
I looked up at the star and smiled
- A) U+ }8 q' b) q, e: e  VThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. ! B. R& b+ K. \% y" H% j2 ?" E; u1 ?

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
, V% m  _6 v$ \: {# i2 D评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
3 Z- e( R3 _' Y$ ?1 C! i顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
# Y. v: Z: I8 I+ W+ [" H: ^5 bA poor old Guy;
3 `0 t# l) j+ G0 S" _& CLegs in a bonfire,! {4 K' r: v- c% Y9 m6 T, ?
Head in the sky+ ^1 ?. \$ N; n2 N2 Q. z0 P
Lonely, with the feel of betray
  \$ o4 G& ~7 k) rHeart empty and hollow
& D' R  X8 z7 L9 B2 `6 ~$ ]Alone I stand7 P$ I. t% o  T. }6 z: D. d6 Y
I am useless to all 9 F* z$ K  w& J9 h* C, F3 H# s
But I wish I were a dove 2 w+ a. x9 d. n" l& i$ F
Giving myself to the world, to the fire: d) E* u3 f4 ?; X: ?1 F  v: z
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind8 w- s  L  [, y  V9 L
I sent prayers to my god
4 e6 T6 S1 x5 Z+ d* {) L5 ZThough he does not answer
/ L8 h0 H6 ~; k' k# M4 ^He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
+ w6 m& \" ]  r/ c! h加油加油,经常写写!
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