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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, * ?% p1 Z* R! F( T% P! K0 k  f
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
9 E5 ^9 c3 C+ `) C" y5 q1 ODreamers& w4 I# i7 k6 x0 G/ u
Savages
9 c  i# B" I$ ?6 Z$ T" HPoets& l- q0 D& [4 z1 k% J# c' G
Builders of canoes,8 \$ W# s( ^) B0 O
Black smiths
, t$ j* l+ `! {2 {Murderers,
/ g4 C: w- I2 K2 f: ~Risk takers,
: H! s% k7 \5 h9 j1 v- [My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 8 n6 e2 ?' u* i5 h) I$ o
As I think of what could be.
1 x- K7 x1 [8 ]  J0 R  OThe world is so big to me
( V2 |* p- b" |6 }* @I wonder what it means to be% \6 x4 z8 }2 d+ k, I
I looked up at the star and smiled
- `  k% R6 L' w- l* KThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。' s5 z0 J" ^& q
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
! ^, E6 _9 D' @( s顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
1 h/ _3 w+ b  qA poor old Guy;. g( J3 A. M' ~: _3 t
Legs in a bonfire," Z0 [3 P2 R8 ^5 y
Head in the sky
1 C8 V8 z7 T- }4 A- F) |Lonely, with the feel of betray
  E) N# E4 E" [" IHeart empty and hollow6 j) F/ p4 y$ i# ~( c' D3 o
Alone I stand
; W! v, g* j, q8 _$ }1 n2 H$ EI am useless to all
) t3 S2 n" L0 i4 o5 n& [# `5 {But I wish I were a dove
7 Z3 i. t- }" r9 b: R% Z6 CGiving myself to the world, to the fire( Y9 d6 G# [1 i4 r  c9 X
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind# G$ D9 w8 \: G% h# q  e$ v
I sent prayers to my god
6 I4 m1 ?9 P, c4 Q" i8 t4 {Though he does not answer
2 Y7 G! W% o( A5 FHe bless me with the gift of hope 2 e" u; ?" X: \( Y6 Y+ {/ ?: @

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大型搬家
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。! M; p) J/ ?$ k$ u
加油加油,经常写写!
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