SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

7 w9 p: ~# d1 u; r) R3 b3 bVEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
, x. s; e  ?# F( h# dSilver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
0 F3 w* q$ y# \6 k$ HFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
/ n! o, k& k! ^0 S+ W6 WABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
, ]  L5 w. A) C( ~8 u# KInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
1 o3 \. A) |' |8 A) T  hPower locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
6 Y, ?8 H( ]: mBluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
: O  h" H8 E% d6 bAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
3 B, u5 E' x  R1 B" L7 c) ZPick up on March 18-22.
/ r0 H2 N* `' r% MCash only please :)

兰君子

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SALE A CAR

$ o( B% _, r) U" U" G1 Q$ _9 d$ M) dDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

1 K, |. p+ n5 ?- K! d! `IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
7 f+ Z% \3 i4 C0 ?# @ IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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& `6 ^/ L6 r% C( D4 oDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

2 d! ]5 t7 h1 x) K5 B: z0 NBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

6 Y% i$ E5 G# C" R4 {3 `- K0 E哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* Y3 }* F& o7 z; y) I5 oFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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. F: A# z9 ^$ P) ^7 f- ]$ Z) S, ^Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

& D; _9 d9 p( A/ A( dLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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# P: ?7 x$ Z' C& R5 _" g"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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% X; d/ r! x1 SThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

+ s& C: E9 l2 Y/ r$ c0 NSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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