SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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9 [+ o* u; A( ]: T* y# E3 wVEICHLE OPTIONS:
( f; }8 `$ I0 A* rAutomatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
5 S( f* t% j& n0 A7 l7 y7 `Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
' n" [$ x: |- [1 I7 f0 U1 KFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
  g% w: y# `" i) |Information system
+ A& v. n4 P+ N1 eCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
1 \" q* g! ^$ N( o. F0 C- c4 J$ O2 xPower mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
5 F' l$ j  ~7 |* yChild safety locks
4 A% W. }* k+ U7 ~+ q( r$ Y) tRear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
3 }- r! A. [/ q5 b# [9 c, i! VAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
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% L* p& c, r5 N**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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7 A) y9 B0 H" zPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
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Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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& V' |" e/ |) E% WDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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$ M5 y8 @  j: e+ `* [0 mIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
& i) Q5 @1 X, y7 G' h3 P, }8 b. q8 c IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

6 ~: z2 `/ b; z' [哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

9 D  L- Y5 C) t0 D2 \Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
; ]' Z( i6 \% mThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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( X- R8 `$ [: c1 ]. Q0 R: ^Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

9 U( o' V" \2 b"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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