SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
5 |5 D, T1 B% ~5 t9 o; i" DFour additional tires with rims
, _- [( x& v% U  B8 [Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
7 y" ]: s/ {+ e# F2 ETire pressure monitor system
. U; Z2 z% R3 v4 @Information system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
Power doors
Power windows
' R  J) X, R! `; gChild safety locks
2 m0 Q- B1 w, G4 t( pRear window defroster
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Radio
) X) ]$ r" g. m3 U& Q/ n" ]Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
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6 E9 X4 H7 q2 X6 L( @$ l3 MFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

. ?+ q/ z2 H( xPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
# A& C8 W* ?7 M0 \Pick up on March 18-22.
  ]& t0 ~! ~% O. w" b* ?Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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$ K2 b! W/ L; G9 N+ a. VIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

( a) J5 m  c2 `7 e& bIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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4 ~5 X" ^- K; ~- }) JDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

0 O: P9 {  G/ t% ^* c3 ~这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

: b, q8 o7 N6 {6 u. TBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

, \' H4 c! _# ]8 Q$ A/ ]. c5 f哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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( S8 s: K0 O" {( f4 R% _Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

& v1 Z4 D  t# P% |8 `- e# TFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
7 `0 i/ j' i5 I- iThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

9 h4 o& }* Y- v6 G- RSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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1 G2 T6 }/ I9 u2 k6 VLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

( j: _. v+ e! S) g# [There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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