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翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

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发表于 2007-5-7 10:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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你是老杨的话,你会怎么回?翁不愧为才女,英文情书写的如此煽情,就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的,把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞: G/ b" y/ Q# S4 V  ^6 D* O
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Cold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
2 D" m' x* }6 i4 T- Hwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
8 G/ I* `4 n  U& Ceyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge: X9 ]6 H, z8 B6 d
out.7 D2 d5 I4 \/ Y5 y- I

& f% l; U" I  O% ?0 O此处冷,彼处更冷。枯叶凋零,君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁,含泪而笑。君热泪盈
- g9 \4 T* `! h/ X眶,喃喃自语,难言再见。妾心沉落,泪涌似涛。! @! S6 A4 J; ~* N

$ o( k" i# \% x/ zHot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another4 P2 v9 l2 ~! a! K9 K
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.) X2 ~8 o9 h7 N- K+ b4 D
Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your
6 T3 ]* ?3 [7 y- w! t! X- ~( T, `, B+ Mface looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
: @: @: L8 ]- L3 Jhand, danced along the crazy theme.
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酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手,共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧,长发束于脑后,英" m, q* ]' C0 t- a" f5 z3 [5 L+ h' |
姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转,君执妾手,疯狂舞曲。$ J- @2 \" \& s# d; V

5 B0 G8 E& C: L8 d1 yLight vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
5 J( k2 ^* u1 o" Q- Q) ~/ C) r4 Kgreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
1 g$ O7 k9 ?( W! }' ^+ n# ame. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A masterpiece/ \& _$ \2 s: p! C
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.
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灯酒相辉,芳雅相应,祝辞笑声此起彼伏,芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁,美目
/ Z0 K2 C+ m7 n$ i& {2 \探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作,使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相/ Y% H. T1 J$ D$ g" r2 ?
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  y  k# O$ j7 Y2 {: ZDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would
$ H5 f1 T: P6 }8 S) c) R- [0 qski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a' b' C& k9 K. Y- b- y
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted5 @7 r( Q! y  q9 B% Y) f
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I5 V6 t) c! N; k8 e
shouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
' V" K  x7 R" w, C, S# kdisappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
: q  H2 C1 F0 g) _& Y: {feel all the same.$ J# K* a; Z' u- z: r

1 c# e, k& B, ]% j& P5 n+ P1 b往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾,滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
% v3 S5 c  K1 E% {$ ^休,但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝,妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹,君已窃妾心,妾当不可漠' V, Y9 h; C4 a! `
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于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失,然无可善终。妾信某日某时,妾将告君妾心永驻。
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) w% K  J' ?! n/ F0 ?My thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in( q6 z# O5 M! y2 a+ y0 J
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,( W/ u  D! t( Q: Y$ Q5 a2 m: {
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow3 w( w( [0 A) t0 B4 t
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
" x0 R' d4 r% Z; z( m% i4 _' EChristmas bell!
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& U5 ?6 E) W* z" e; v3 r9 w7 @妾于忏悔中挣扎,不时退缩,犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚,然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
3 |% @" `, O: F/ M5 `. b皑,君挽妾身,妾意甚欢,共听圣诞钟声。/ X, @) Z3 X. e: e* y
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The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of/ V  d7 O5 `& V  Y% c
Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I
& l8 K6 `  p) [' a5 Wtrace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
1 z: X+ s, J4 X; Wnothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.+ G! }3 c+ m+ \' R4 C! s6 J
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钟声忽止于急雨,乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑,黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪* ?5 `0 u' \1 r- w; D1 [; S+ f9 g
而不可。妾伸手欲触,无他,但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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Snowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
4 I7 w3 W, D& Y  d& M雪花渐融,妾与君仍天各一方
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:32 | 显示全部楼层
有人问过洋人吗?这段英文咋样?
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:46 | 显示全部楼层
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:49 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
# e$ e3 m* Q4 k! t+ L2 e1 T/ V4 w刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
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你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
鲜花(7) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用,即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 12:02 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表 0 J- W% s- m& }6 c0 y

, B" V" }( X1 G( Q0 @* b你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?

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俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
鲜花(10) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 14:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你又知道是人家的情书!
鲜花(28) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:13 | 显示全部楼层
为什么要翻译成妾啊,那么别扭。: ]2 D. P% `6 r4 o$ v. l4 o$ w
不过比奴强点。
鲜花(129) 鸡蛋(1)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
看了这篇情书,偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
此老杨非彼老杨也!
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 21:33 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表 : B0 D/ g0 j$ Z" Z# o; D
此老杨非彼老杨也!

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# C4 V8 m) _7 w相信地球人都知道吧~~, b# a% Q" b6 I/ ^9 `+ `

+ f" F, @& N: ]5 c) X/ b5 ]: S# L7 N+ u9 u其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”,俺故意改滴~~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:07 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表
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俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~

, f; x" G! r5 W是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:23 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表 9 R, @5 q! o: G) \8 Z, T+ P
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是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!

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- J" B, H2 E7 X我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 22:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表
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: f& A- l  X% K我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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猪兄可怜,严重慰问ing~~
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:08 | 显示全部楼层
偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:09 | 显示全部楼层
翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:10 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表 4 i) z5 g' w! p3 ?% M
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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不看年纪,看地位~
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:01 | 显示全部楼层
初看标题,我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢
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