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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一): X. R* }1 a: k7 `4 ^' s8 M( u+ N

3 C# ~$ G8 X1 q     One day I always remember; x1 O$ `$ ?* ~6 h

* e  x- O; v) r1 D+ N  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was% E) b) J* j8 e+ ~9 F: x

. \3 Z& O% x* o* }exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to& S  M2 t! f+ T6 k  E# B# t
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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1 d7 J6 K( b$ p+ S! n; h little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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, B# s0 H3 J* D every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid2 t; `( x( Y$ i; W

* G7 m4 {  ^- l was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 D; S, ~7 x3 C4 S2 Q$ d4 y+ s
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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6 H6 P4 J; ?; }9 P5 X6 r& |' H6 e( mthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.1 r* o' R% |' G8 C9 p, j8 D+ h
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6 ?+ t9 o% W* j: tAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will% D5 R. y: D9 |9 I4 B
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.' N3 {' L$ _- y" N2 O% }

" B/ i7 N( h% u. Z9 a4 O! X0 r[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
2 B; }" M0 s- w( _. xwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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