作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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, g7 K- P# l" b$ Q# a　　　　　One day I always remember
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' d6 M3 T7 Q+ {2 l* F9 d　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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  x+ j$ G3 @6 F2 A2 ^ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

/ G7 ^' O; s- ?7 v every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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+ F: E6 @% U* X2 b& _, ? was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

+ [# L7 T3 H8 d& W, _ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

. J! v2 o1 T# `& J+ y; b$ j) W6 z never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

3 o0 U/ @; j: d7 @% d% p0 X6 l[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
$ ~: p/ \+ X' t* H$ F: @, d% J. ]" iwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！