作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

8 T% J8 o; V& A" e8 E3 xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

; ~; z3 v( q; Sthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

9 h4 G( c( E! x never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

3 n% T% d( N, n7 g9 A[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！