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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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/ o! V& M$ N. [, s( I　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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3 Q3 R; f( q! N. Aexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

, E! m; ~- G  i8 E2 z2 }trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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6 x+ g; z' K, I  w; r2 R. othat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

3 f9 g0 G6 P- s. J- j on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

0 Y* u" J( S7 X7 ^5 c! vdeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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1 q. i5 ~- F" r never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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2 [, Z1 q4 v  g: E" T[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
  u& n. Z1 N! j- Y: [, uwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！