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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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- `: Q$ v3 Z( E8 F( D: bexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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+ Z/ E, M0 [" \) y4 { every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

: b' t( G5 v' O; m was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

! N8 c) Y8 T; A) qthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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0 h' t, C, X) ^( o on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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2 w" N: W$ o, F/ ZAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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* w* \  j+ f: S  n% j) F[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
" _9 [9 i( N4 `: j) A* Twe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！