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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)' E" P* @! m# y( H
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to7 J: p( X+ Z' d5 p! d

' G* Z) M; [6 m: d: D9 S9 d4 Lput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,; h2 r4 B$ V! Y+ [' h' e" i

- d: N' }7 L# p, U every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely * B# Z0 Z2 Z6 ~+ f
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 1 r9 O( o0 s$ G1 [2 u( b

6 `) y9 s4 y& \1 P0 v9 Ithat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing5 g# K* S- `7 Q/ `

  `7 q  ^( ]# ?8 i* s; j on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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# F5 k% I3 B# d* O. t7 O8 S  Vdeaest daughter.# P' k2 |4 I- o, `5 _0 ^

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.  B+ N* z( J! j3 A
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!7 l3 O1 @4 i( |4 Z, v* o
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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