作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

0 q6 j4 n$ g4 V( U4 M) b! w　　　　　One day I always remember
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2 W, R* N7 i& y( ~7 ~+ A, m) k1 K　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

& U5 ]4 ]+ r; p  o/ xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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: X1 i( T. q4 y$ ~put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

% w& t- y( B7 b+ f  @6 \ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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9 i: I' X& c% S6 F$ q every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.

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9 ?! j4 R1 J9 C0 Z) A3 Y! FAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

7 C' K2 i, o) K# C; O never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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3 n8 i9 G$ B9 L[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！