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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

　　　　　One day I always remember

& T6 f0 H# D! U8 Z4 ?　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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# ]) N4 c' g! G2 kexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

2 X; t7 q$ v, O$ Q  v; M. {put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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: m6 |: b- f" _ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

$ z4 z2 f+ S) |; V2 Qdeaest daughter.
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6 n7 u$ g9 W% _: w. v* K# E* r+ kAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

! ?6 \) }4 S) |/ v+ B* W# G never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！