儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

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1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
I have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.
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2 w/ o9 K& D1 T- T# FI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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: {: q. F# q9 N# |/ w8 j( IYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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- x  f5 g- S* k0 S( W' SI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.

* n. f9 H, h% z9 x$ bI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.
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, P( H9 o) \" l1 j% a. P* Z# yYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.

* t& P" p( H$ h: }- kI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

7 {/ |9 }# ~& y  |* KThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

8 Y% T. S" b% ^. q, q- dYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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& c/ y0 _0 d" P6 P2 L3 T- B% ~! gYou should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。
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9 q2 L& ]% T6 h4 q) {. B& uI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

7 V: |& |4 R1 s, CYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

9 S" X6 ?2 t8 |# @( [3 wI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。

, s( M/ G5 M( {3 f' b$ h# i4 m- ^The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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( i% z% ~0 Q% s+ N4 Y  _2 S2 D9 dYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。